I Listen to the Abyss in the Middle of the Night

1. Set five stars. The combination of weirdness, programming and music. 2. One star for plot.

The idea of ​​this book is quite good, and I can tell that the author wants to write something that I like. But unfortunately, the plot advancement and character transformation are too blunt, lacking necessary lubrication and details. The idea is good, but the writing is not very good. If you practice your writing more, your next work may be more interesting.

The setting is good, but the plot is not. The settings of the protagonist and supporting characters are unreasonable from the beginning. From the first three chapters, it can be seen that the official organization has a long history of operation. It has handled so many cases, and it is not an exaggeration to say that it is experienced. Then let a new employee just read the rules before taking up the job without any training. The operator is the first person to face anomalies and make preliminary judgments. It can be said that the importance is at the top. The events in the first few chapters are so dense that it can be said that abnormalities are everywhere. Not to mention that the world may be destroyed at any time, but if it is not handled well, a building or a community may die. Which official organization can do this? If you are a team or an individual going to another time and space (or downloading a dungeon, it is not the real plane anyway) to solve an abnormal problem, then that is no problem, but you are in the real plane, in such a dangerous and important position, if you are not careful, you may lose people in a city, and the organization is really eager to let the protagonist directly take up the job. Then the office building incident organization has a field team to handle the incident, but when partial information is known, they go in without any corresponding protection. Then what is the meaning of the intelligence obtained by the operator who answered the phone at the risk of information contamination, and uses the unprofessionalism of the entire organization to set off the protagonist? This would be fine if it was a small organization, but isn't it? From sealing off the office building to a situation where the team behind you has the authority to directly kill more than a hundred people, you are now the largest organization in the world. If you say there is no way to protect it, then what do you mean by the technician (let's call it that) at the back remotely monitoring the protagonist's mental state and then giving him a secondary firewall? Is there technology that prevents frontline personnel from having direct contact with abnormal people? No matter how you look at it, this organization is unreasonable and unprofessional. To put it simply, the whole world can still exist because the author is forcibly maintaining the world line. The setting is really good, but the plot is really unbearable, which is a pity.

The setting is good, but the plot is too rushed. Let the protagonist live a normal life, the only rest time is coma

Apart from this book, only He San's "09: Counterattack from Normal College Students" caught my eye.