The Heroes of the Water Margin in the Pirate World

If you don't revise it thoroughly, it will even feel like it is not as good as the original text. Lu Zhishen uprooting the weeping willows would require at least 10 to 20 tons of explosive power. And according to Water Margin, it is the reincarnation of the stars in the sky. There is not much supernatural in Water Margin, but if you are reincarnated as a pirate, then I think the characteristics of those characters can be expressed in the form of superhuman-type fantasy beasts and natural-type images. For example, Lu Junyi's nickname is Jade Qilin. According to the name, it can be transformed into a Jade Qilin, Wu Song is a lion that shakes the sky, Lu Zhishen is an arhat, and those who are relatively weak like an iron ox can just breed an iron ox in ancient times. The performance of Hua Rong can be similar to that of a superman, with clairvoyance, extraordinary arm strength, an arrow that can shoot hundreds of miles, and then raising a bird that can carry people into the sky, which is more in line with the positioning of Water Margin. Anyway, you can replace the more distinctive abilities in those 108s with fruit abilities, such as the Divine Walking Taibo, which can be infinitely accelerated similar to the Superman-type Divine Walking Speed.

Great swordsman Guan Sheng, who are you insulting?

The idea is okay, but the characters in it all speak in Chinese style. Japanese comics, do you automatically know ancient Chinese speaking? The plot also jumps from one jump to the next without filling in the details. It's unreasonable. Let's polish it a bit.

The characters are too weak, and a strong person in one world can become a similar level in another world. Those villains in Water Margin, when it comes to pirates, they should be of about the same level as the aunt, and they can use their weapons and colors directly. This writing is really weak. Also, the protagonist should go to sea to make a name for himself, and let the heroes of Liangshan come to join him, instead of looking for each island one by one, which makes the protagonist brainless.

It's so interesting. This author's idea can

I have ideas, but not enough writing.

The brainstorming is OK, but the integration is too poor.

It's good, but I don't like the supporting roles. Brothers, just make an original one. There is no need to bring together the famous supporting actresses from the original work.

It's a bit interesting, but too little. I hope you can stick with it.

You can't write a hundred or so pictures to find everyone one by one.

One hundred and eight generals portrayed by the famous author, plus hundreds of characters portrayed in One Piece, which is also a world-class phenomenon. Can you handle such a big stage and so many characters? Teacher Dagu even wrote about the two fateful battles that took several years to start. The bandit king in Keyboard King only called the alliance of major forces Shuibo Liangshan. Wouldn't it be too challenging for you to write like this?

Is there really no one reading this book? Eunuch, no one has commented in two days.

Are the heroes of the Water Margin ready to brave the multiverse of the universe

The two styles of conversation are mixed together, which looks weird.

666 Laosha's anti-armor has been wiped out by Shu 😂