
Hogwarts, Magical Alchemical Revolution
霍格沃兹,魔法炼金革命
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 610k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I feel like it was written by AI
Like the title, the content is very rigid. At the beginning, Malfoy went to the carriage to find Harry in order to make friends with him. Later, he was refuted by Harry because he mocked Ron, and then he kept targeting Harry. Instead of ridiculing 😅 right from the start. The characters here are very rigid, much like the characters were set in advance and then generated by AI. Many of the details are very strange.
Oh, I just clicked on Zhouzhou's other works. Several books are all bad eunuchs. It turns out it's a matter of the author's level.
I just read a few chapters and I have a weird feeling.
What stuff
Isn't he a sorting eagle? Why the Gryffindor lounge again? 88
The first two chapters look weird
I like to pile up all kinds of adjectives, and there are some logical problems like AI. The first time the three Malfoys met, it was as if they had known each other for two hundred years. Malfoy knew Harry Ron and Neville's name as soon as they met, and even laughed at Harry Ron's increasingly diverse friends. Ron knew as soon as they met that Malfoy would be turned into a ferret in a few years. Isn't this the first grade yet? 2. Location issue: Look at this yourself. Neville was in the corner of the box, and Malfoy would definitely have to enter the box if he wanted to snatch Neville's toad. But in the description, Harry and Ron had just stood up, Hermione was holding on to the door frame behind them, and Malfoy was obviously outside, but wouldn't it be strange to take a step forward and directly grab Neville's toad inside? Malfoy's two followers, outside the box... Blocked Harry, Ron and Hermione in the box and rushed into the box to save Neville in the corner, right? This box is very small. Malfoy can step forward and grab Neville in the corner. The trio sitting next to him can just stretch out his hand. Chapter 10 is very boring when I read it later. It has been using various characters to highlight the strong protagonist system. It is said that Malfoy, who despises the Muggle world, will also use circuses and fire rings to taunt people, which makes people cry. Malfoy and Toad are really misfortune mandarin ducks
The title of the book completely revealed my preferences, but after reading the introduction, it completely hit the mark. Is there any Shen Nong who can comment on it?
Ancient Eastern alchemy? That's called alchemy