Emperor's Grandson

There is no over-preparation and sudden jumps, which highlights the shortcomings of the writing style.

What you wrote is really awkward. The protagonist knows that Lu is going to harm him, and he is also frightened. He also knows that Zhu Yuanzhang will go on a killing spree for the protagonist, and then he doesn't tell Zhu Yuanzhang that Lu is going to harm him. It was awkward to write, and it was awkward for me to read.

There are too many subjective additions, and it lacks the depth of a historical text. It feels too dramatic, and the protagonist Chun Chun has all kinds of oral pleasures.

The writing is more historical. A lot of people writing about Zhu Xiongying simply didn't understand the economic and demographic situation faced by the Ming Dynasty at that time.

There are too many people writing about traveling through Mingchao. If you really travel there, you will probably meet many fellow villagers.

Yutou, there's a new book! ? This one sucks, where's the new book? Update soon...

Let's continue writing overseas founding novels

What kind of ideology does the author have? Look at your previous books, which are really outrageous.

Today's introductions to historical texts are very much the same. They all feature historical celebrities talking and praising the protagonists. You, the author, are so tired of writing them that it makes me sick to my stomach.

The whole story is filled with dialogue, which makes me have a headache when I read it, and the writing is too poor.

When I read history, I discovered a very outrageous thing. Do you know that one thing was viewed differently in the Ming and Qing Dynasties? The Manchu emperor was diligent in his duties, so he said he loved his people like a son 😰

Can you read some history before writing about the Ming Dynasty? Zhu Yuanzhang slept in? Zhu Yuanzhang was more diligent than Yongzheng. He has a poem, "I got up before all the officials got up; all the officials have gone to bed, but I have not yet fallen asleep."

It is nonsense to say that Mrs. Lu killed Zhu Xiongying and Concubine Chang. First of all, they don't look at what kind of family the Chang family is, and they don't look at whether Zhu Yuanzhang's Jinyiwei is powerful? It's strange that Zhu Yuanzhang's temper can tolerate the existence of such a wife. You will know if Zhu Yunxi is living well later. Moreover, the emperor's grandson was Zhu Yuanzhang's decision-maker. Zhu Biao has no decision-making power. First of all, after Zhu Xiongying died, Zhu Yunxi or Zhu Yunzhen was elected. This can be seen from Zhu Biao's righting of Lu. The appointment of the Lu family as a concubine means that Zhu Yunwen's eldest son became his legitimate eldest son. Zhu Xiongying was dead at this time. In ancient times, mothers were valued by their children, and children were valued by their mothers. Zhu Yunwen succeeded to the throne by virtue of his mother being the legal wife.

Write a book about the Age of Discovery

A portion of French fries~

Scholars have a conscience. This is the funniest thing I have ever heard. Since ancient times, the most conscientious and moral people in China have never included the scholar class. No matter ancient or modern. They have no morals, only interests. Only a fool would believe they have morals. The official class does not limit our efforts to become a group. You still have freedom as a human being. Those who become a group of people cannot resist at all

In just a few chapters, the reputation has changed drastically. There are too many "how great the emperor's grandson" is. What is it actually (⊙o⊙)? Haven't done it yet

What kind of nonsense is written, that the Lu family harmed the emperor's grandson? Are the recent Ming Dynasty novels so nonsense?

What other historical time travel novels have you written as an author? Go read more history books!

To be honest, the doubts raised by some readers are clearly the problem. The author's writing is more rigorous. I think it's okay in my head. But what you actually wrote, some people think there are some small problems and others think it's too idealistic. There are many readers who read Time Travel in the Ming Dynasty. I don't think everyone can't understand what you want to write, but you don't write it well. From your reply, you don't seem to feel it.

The whole article is filled with ancient dialogues and daily life. You don't live in ancient times, and you are not a master of classical literature. Logically speaking, these details should be the shortcomings of every author and should be avoided as much as possible. But you have to challenge your own weakness. Seeing you write about a group of ancient people communicating in modern language makes the readers feel uncomfortable and very funny.

The Jingnan War was one of the most valuable in ancient wars. The two sides basically fought along the Grand Canal, so it was extremely convenient to gather logistical supplies and troops. A plain battle involving more than 100,000 troops would be called the Zhengding War. The Battle of Cunba, the Battle of Baigou River, the Battle of Dongchang among the winter battles, the Shenzhou Blockade Battle of Wei County, the Battle of Jiahe, the Battle of Gaocheng, and finally the Battle of Suzhou Lingbi, which was interspersed for thousands of miles and annihilated the main field force of the imperial court. In the early Ming Dynasty, the central war mobilization and logistics capabilities of the Ming court were fully reflected in the huge number of reserve soldiers left by the Hongwu Military Training. Among all the heavy-armed group battles, Zhu Di only lost the Battle of Dongchang, which lasted for half a day. Zhu Di won all other heavy-armed battles. Moreover, the imperial court was the loser in the winter battle where the Battle of Dongchang took place. The field cavalry of the Dezhou Corps suffered heavy losses. Zhu Di only rested for a month after the Shenzhou Blockade of Wei County in the Battle of Dongchang before he immediately went south to Jiahe Gaocheng and defeated the two major regiments of Dezhou and Zhending.

Keep writing overseas novels, as your writing style is restricted in China.

I strongly recommend writing about foreign history, as domestic restrictions are too great.

As a writer of history, you should know that even if Zhu Xiongying in your novel occupied the entire earth, do you think the resources would be enough to be divided among the nobles? Do you think each of the nobles only has a few children and a few "wives"? I'm afraid you are telling lies. Let me tell you, starting from the second generation of nobles, as the old nobles with moral and conscientious bottom lines die, their descendants will have no bottom line. They will have countless wives and children, inherit positions that they can live up to, and monopolize businesses that cannot live up to their expectations. In less than 6 generations, the descendants of these people and peripheral families will definitely exceed several hundred million people! Do you think there are still enough resources for them to share? Do you think there will be any room for entry into the originally vast bottom floor? This is the secret of the reincarnation of the dynasty, the secret that is not allowed to be known by the common people - the family, the country and the world!