The Information on Cultivating Immortality Sold by My Junior Brother Is so Delicious!

The first chapter is a piece of shit! Thanks to the blessing of my master, how awesome is the sect you wrote about? Have so many ancestors become immortals? Or are all your ancestors ghosts?

Shennong: The protagonist was almost beaten to death and cut off from his path. The protagonist brainwashed himself and had no big grudge against the other party.

Take me as an example. The first thing I read when reading a new book is the introduction. If the subject matter is good, go to the next step. Check how much the monthly ticket is this month. If there are quite a lot, go to the next step. Look at the comment section. If they are basically good reviews, or there are only a few negative reviews, then add it to the bookshelf. If there are a lot of negative reviews... Then naturally you are not interested in reading it. If you want to criticize the book, you will be even less interested. Forget the negative review that has already achieved results. I also read his good writing, but he still has no results. Do you think you have many readers? Of course, if there are trolls, you have to delete the comments, but generally there are basically no trolls on new books.

There are too many poisonous points in this book, and they appear at every turn, and the protagonist sometimes has brain problems, sometimes he is reckless and has no IQ, and sometimes he can always be tricked by others, as if he can't have a will without IQ. There are also several times, sometimes the IQ rises again, and he can always trick others. The author of some content is also deliberately misleading, for example, Chapter 59 to Chapter 62, which is almost 10,000 words. This paragraph is all nonsense and has no content at all. When I saw this, I thought that it would be a waste of money to subscribe later. There must be few people who deserve it, and the level is too high. Chapter 40 foundation building is not completed until Chapter 260. You know how stupid it is. Seeing this, you think, how many chapters and thousands of words will it take to reach the Immortal Lord mentioned in the introduction? I couldn't watch it until halfway through. There were so many poisonous spots in the front, but it was still the same in the back. Some places were still watery. I felt that I could see half of it. My poison resistance was really high, especially when the protagonist's IQ went up and down again. It was really obvious. Is the author's IQ the same?

After reading two chapters, the protagonist gives the impression that he is a wretched gangster who does things without thinking and recklessness. If you have this feeling, you will have a strong sense of disobedience when you see the plot of becoming an immortal and becoming an ancestor. If you mind this kind of thing, don't click on it.

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At the beginning, it was okay to be cautious and kind to others, but suddenly it became hot-blooded. (In the cold wind section) both foundations were blown to death, and then the protagonist rushed forward while practicing Qi. How did he know that he could not die with the protagonist's halo? It's just baffling. Then in that space, two high-ranking disciples made a bet against the protagonist. They said it in public, is your sect a demon sect? Can you say this kind of thing casually? Or does the protagonist have a sarcastic face and everyone wants to deal with him?

After reading two chapters, the intelligence system alone is already big enough, but you still open a store because you are afraid that it will not be successful.

The book is well written in the front, but in the back of the plot, the protagonist sometimes turns into a stick, with three strings missing from his brain. If not, the protagonist would have died long ago.

Against the odds, it's another classic plot of making enemies but not taking revenge. Gu Tiancheng robbed the male protagonist at the beginning and is still active in it for more than 200 chapters. I laughed at it. Maybe this is the essence of Mortal Flow.

It's written like a child playing house

You only have intelligence but no force, and you still want to share the results, why don't you go to heaven?

The writing is relatively simple, like the kind of author who wrote it more than ten years ago, and the out-of-context words are very blunt. One story is not finished, and is divided into several chapters. Well, the writing is quite messy. I want to say that this way of writing is no longer popular now. The writing is very bad. It's like you cut off a story halfway through and put it into the next chapter or the next chapter. It's quite speechless.

Um. . . There are a lot of poison points, but my resistance is still acceptable. After all, small poisons do not pose a threat. The only thing I feel is that it is a pity that the previous imagination setting was good and I used a golden finger to sell the opportunity that I couldn't touch. I am very interested in being an intelligence dealer and maximizing the use, but! I can't see the setting of this idea at all later, or it was written crookedly, the original highlights were lost, and the rest of the picture was left behind. Then I used the same templates as many cheap novels to paste and copy to solve the problem. Later, it completely turned into a brainless novel with no highlights, and it was a kind of public passer-by website with a bunch of identical works. It's a pity that it was withdrawn.

It has existed for a long time, with strong men like clouds, and a righteous sect. However, the sect is not pure love and selfless, it has accumulated many disadvantages over thousands of years. The outer sect disciples are as numerous as cattle and horses, while the inner sect disciples have different qualities. Some sect elders are kind and some are selfish and despicable. Cultivation of immortality and immortality is inherently cruel. Disciples of evil sects are like talented people, and those who are strong in the righteous way of Xuanmen are respected.

Xu Chengan: I have a system, intelligence, and thugs. If someone accidentally falls into a pit, I can get up and kick the other person into the ditch. Before time travel, I was like a cow and horse, but after time travel, I can't tolerate anyone. Sometimes the operation is so good that I am surprised. PS: The plot will become interesting. Welcome to talk about the plot direction. Some of the chapter reviews are amazing. I have to admire the clever and witty finishing touches of this old bookworm. Xu Chengan: But you write slowly, have typos, and are lazy. Author: Han Ying I think you will be the most beautiful woman in the book after you transform! Han Ying: Got it! Xu Chengan, right? Leave it to me and I'll whip him! You can't torture him to death!

He's a god, and he doesn't even want to create a mental retardation halo for the system, so he just wants to use intelligence and people to share? It's fine if the protagonist is awesome, but he turns out to be a weakling with no background and no strength, and the sect allows the disciples to rob each other. Then why did you get the share?

If it's too big, I have to press it, but it doesn't look good after pressing it. It makes people uncomfortable looking at it. Fortunately, I saw it during the limited time.

Super rubbish article. Fortunately, it is very poisonous if I don't subscribe. I am inexplicably poisoned and thank you for your face.

I can accept Xiao Bai's novel, but the premise is that the protagonist's IQ is higher than or at least equal to the supporting villain's. However, the intelligence aura in this book only works on friendly characters. The villain is stronger and smarter than the protagonist. The protagonist holds an intelligence device and almost overturns due to miscalculation of strength, being followed, etc.

Mortal: Start from the game store

That soul pill, and that thing in Chapter 60 are really poisonous

It turns out that the protagonist is an information dealer. Let's put it this way. The protagonist doesn't pick up the 100 yuan for himself. If he tells others the information, he gets 10 yuan for the information.

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When I saw Elder Qin's Soul-Living Pill, I didn't want to read it. What the hell did he write? This is the first time I deleted the book for you.

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