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What we can't say is that there is no ambiguity at all. I came to watch it after seeing many female characters, but in the fifty chapters, there is not even a bit of ambiguity. It is just a lip service, and there is basically no ambiguity in the mouth. Who would have the temper to look back after you are so mean?

Looking forward to how the author writes about Qingsi Niubo Fengshui Gate

Seeking for excellence.

It feels like it makes sense. I just thought the weasel was born before, but only after seeing this explanation did I know how born he was

You are the most beautiful barbarian girl I have ever seen. I am going back to Soochow and I will give this camp to you.

Why is there no Kisame Kisaki in the heroine?

If you just have more than 20 female protagonists, then I may need to pick and choose through the comment area to see if there are any problems. But you have more than 20 female protagonists, so what should I do?

25 Heroines How strong is this protagonist?

To be honest, the protagonist's foraging range is too wide, ranging from 80 years old to 8 years old. It's so cold and careless. Tsunade and Hinata and Sakura are almost two generations apart, and you actually took action on both.

You didn't even wipe the edges, and you just relied on your imagination when it came to the critical point?

Although he is a yellow-haired Uchiha, the highlight is the yellow-haired plot. But the protagonist's combat power collapsed too much. He had already beaten two and six tails, Hanzo, and seven people, and he didn't feel like he was being crushed at all. Various entries, the bonus of ninjutsu damage several times, the fusion sage mode, it is logically logical that this person's combat power is not the first person below the six paths. In the mid-term, I feel that only new blood stains are really given in the entry, and there is no damage bonus at all. The protagonist's chakra amount, plus the entry bonus, should be able to directly produce a crushing effect with a single spell. However, in actual combat, no matter what the protagonist's spell is, the opponent's opponent will be offset by the same spell. Where is the bonus? Other shortcomings are acceptable. It is normal for different authors to have different ideas, and each has its own reasons. However, in fan fiction, readers know the combat power of each character, and it would be very awkward to read if the combat power collapses. Invincible should be invincible, and it should be crushed when it should be crushed. It should be a relaxed and leisurely battle, but it shows a feeling of being evenly matched. I always feel like anyone can take on the protagonist, which is very uncomfortable.

Let's change the name to "Nikko Naruto"

I feel like many fanfics follow the same mold. The protagonist is super powerful, but it has nothing to do with the plot. Even if he is the best in the world, but the plot is not changed, it is redundant. If there is no change, what is the point of writing like this?

Spark

Learn to be a model worker in prison, right? The Legend of Black Dragon, right?

The protagonist was changed to Kiyoji. The original name of Halal would involve religious issues.

Generally speaking, it is extremely cool and depressing. After having sex with the mother of a female character like Hinata Temari, for the main female character of the original novel like 🌿Hinata Temari, she extracted the mother's DNA and turned it into an embryo, so that the mother could get pregnant and give birth in an attempt to overturn it.

Although I have collected a lot of character cards, you are not embarrassed at all. I didn't understand the two scenes of getting along with Samyi. Was it deleted? Then I was confused. I flipped back to Mikoto's first chapter. What did you write? There really wasn't anything pornographic about it. I might as well read the Naruto Book of Music.

After reading Chapter 368, I can only say that it is too watery and not as good as the previous book. No wonder it is not even a high-quality book. Originally, the previous book was only closed when the speed of the car was too fast. There is nothing wrong with lowering the speed of the car in this book, but it added a lot of things that had to be pushed down. What's the use of a harem without cars?

Why do I feel like so many things in this book have no logic? Especially the mental description? Especially the protagonist who always makes others feel guilty? Always feel like you're asking for compensation for trivial things? Very baffling

What color is the protagonist's Susanoo?

I've read over a hundred chapters, and the plot is too bland. Even though it's a harem story, I'd like to add a little bit to make it more interesting.

Why is it that the writing of fan battle scenes is not good? After watching so many, the battle scene of Su's sister-killing sister is well written. Whether it's Naruto, Pirates, or Chi Hong, there are too few of them killing indiscriminately and not mindlessly destroying their combat power 😭

[Is the protagonist called a dish? Pure—— Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger➕Find a sparring partner to adapt to the new power —— [It says that the combat power has collapsed, and the protagonist is a loser. Have you read it carefully? ] [The protagonist's entry is based on basic numerical values. To put it bluntly, there are growth restrictions. The higher the stage, the stronger it will be. —— [It is understandable to say that the protagonist is too strong and destroys the balance, but it is indeed a fun story and the reading experience is not seriously damaged. —— [For those who say the protagonist is too good, have your brains been eaten by zombies? To be able to say such things without thinking. —— [Summary: Except for Cao Mengde's serious behavior, which is not suitable for female readers and readers who treat women well, and the selective intelligence reduction of the supporting characters, there are almost no major flaws. —— You can definitely rush! —— [The problem of selective intelligence reduction of supporting characters] [It can be said to be intelligence reduction, and one cannot distinguish between big and small kings, or it can be said to be bloody and arrogant. You can read it no matter how you understand it, the experience will be different.

*Obito is disgusting. In this world, Obito only sees Rin, and even his grandmother is not as good as Rin, so he is very prejudiced against the protagonist who robbed Rin and was bullied in front of her * The fourth generation of Lei is very paranoid and has been waiting in the corner to defeat the protagonist and conquer the Ninja world He also has a tool-like attitude towards his children (take him as a subordinate if he sees interest, otherwise, I don't mind letting him disappear) The plot and writing skills are generally okay.

No subtitles?

If Tsunade puts the chapter on "Xianghi Hana", the results of this book will be better, and I don't even know what the mess is.

Now that it's over, it's time to finish the book 🙂

It's time to finish this book 🙂

Ah~~ I can't find an author who writes such good morals. Can he publish a book a day? (๑⃙⃘´༥`๑⃙⃘) 𐂐