I Can See Talent Points

I've only read Chapter 20 and can't stand it. It's just boring and unsightly. The author has been immersed in the art of his middle-aged man and cannot extricate himself

Reading this novel gives me the feeling of eating a pear, it is crisp and refreshing with a little sweetness, but sometimes it feels like accidentally eating a pear that turns sour and astringent. The plot of the protagonist instructing students and parents, and helping others make life plans is quite refreshing, and the plot with the children has a hint of childlike fun and warmth. However, the protagonist's emotional line is confusing and lacks sufficient enthusiasm and decisiveness. The author may have added a lot of pulling and misunderstandings for the sake of the harem, which makes it look like a mother-in-law. The beginning of the novel is indeed very poisonous. The protagonist completely fails to show the responsibility and will that an adult should have. Maybe the author wanted to show that there is no greater grief than death, but the effect was really silly. As far as I'm concerned, this book is suitable for skipping. The emotional scenes can be skipped, and the plot showing the golden finger can be used as food. Moreover, the two lines do not intersect deeply at the moment, so skipping it will not affect the experience.

The pace is too slow! There is also a protagonist who will make readers take on the role of someone who is close to psychological collapse. A child will cough today and develop ADHD and allergies tomorrow? You don't have to write like this when writing about a nanny. If you don't pray for happiness, you still have to choose the readers. Keep it simple, direct, and straightforward, and more people will accept it.

After reading Chapter 13, I looked at the table of contents. I don't know what the use of plug-ins is for the protagonist. I might as well delete the plug-ins and just write about how useless a person can be.

No, this golden finger is more useful. Are you really prepared to wait for those kids to grow up? A lot of debt and still not making any money

I came here to read the novel, not to see an old man who was incompetent and angry when he failed, got divorced, and raised a baby in middle age. The plot was too slow, and he was incompetent and angry.

After reading about ten chapters, I couldn't bear it anymore. Is the author suffering from delusions of persecution? The protagonist died suddenly while working overtime and finally came back to life. It's normal to have unstable emotions. But you didn't write the three golden chapters like this. The first few chapters were all about the protagonist Goldfinger awakening and seeing that he was a waste. He didn't ask anyone else, so he kept denying himself. Then he saw that his son also had a waste on his head and started to shut down. Then I asked the teacher if he was a veterinarian just like a mental patient. The first 7 chapters felt like they were all invalid articles. Later I learned how to use cheats and didn't try to make money. Then in the elevator, the leading Gonghuo master kept poking at the protagonist's pain points, while the child was still watching. To be honest, it's just a novel. In reality, your personality is not called a gentle southern man, it's called 🐢. Do you understand? When others scold you and insult you, you don't even dare to let out a fart. Are you a waste? The author has succeeded in shaping the protagonist. It doesn't mean that you will become a different person after you get the golden finger. Why do you keep putting pressure on your son? If the child's mother is gone, you will put pressure on your son. Waste

This book will be very fascinating for people with children and people who are not understood. If you calm down and read it, you will be fascinated.

Watched for a while. The protagonist is indeed a loser. His son was bullied and he didn't dare to fight back. It was his aunt who helped fight back. I can't stand it anymore.

He is indeed a loser. He has worked for so many years and has no opinion. As a father, he doesn't solve the problem and yells at his own children. He doesn't want to be written by humans.

I can't understand

It's a really weird book. You can't use Goldfinger at all. You keep talking about children. What's wrong with the stars? No dude, I came here because of the title Goldfinger. You keep talking about children, and I can't relate to it.

It's a very interesting book. You can read it if you calm down and read it. I haven't read the plot of pretending to be a slap in the face now, and I hope there won't be any in the future. The shortcoming is that the male protagonist found out how to use the plug-in too slowly in the early stage, and it is relatively slow to gain popularity and is not suitable for readers who want to see more exciting things. Finally, the biggest shortcoming is, where did you get the sloth from? The update is too slow! The word count is too few! Quickly update ten and twenty and thirty!

Everyone is the Golden Chapter Three, and if you can persuade them to quit the Three Chapters, there will be no one else 🙂

The author writes well, but the protagonist is a bit disgusting and always poisonous. I read the previous book and the protagonist was also a bit disgusting.

The first three chapters successfully persuaded me to quit. I read this novel many times. This time I left a review. I hope that I can read it and leave it in the future.

The first few chapters are really too toxic, I can't stand it, even if it's limited to free, I can't stand it

My biggest feeling after reading this book is that children need to understand it. They are ignorant and naive, but they are also sensitive and vulnerable. Life is a cycle of birth-weakness-primary age-aging-frailness-death. Those who dislike children should think about whether they will be disliked by others when they grow old.

This is so funny. The system is too authoritative. Don't worry about why the protagonist behaves so ****ly. The entry above the protagonist's head explains everything.

One thing to say, I can basically understand why the author wrote this at the beginning. It's probably because people become confused in middle age, and then they start to doubt themselves because of the word "waste". Then because of their unique superpowers, their three views begin to collapse and be rebuilt, and then they slowly start to explore. I don't know this. I understand, but what you wrote is not something that ordinary people can do. Instead, you stand as an author and make up the plot yourself for the protagonist in your novel. It is too divorced from reality, long, boring, and too dreamy, so that all the brothers are complaining about you. As long as a normal person has no mental problems, he must first consider how to live after losing his job. This is the first thing in life that he is anxious about, and then his children. After you have arranged this series of things, you may then consider superpowers, explore, explore, and practice. Because you are not writing about a young man, you are writing about a middle-aged man, and his life is a mess. He will have the kind of life pressure that is hard to touch, but is really pressing on his back. Do you know? If he is a young man, then he should give up all his current goals regardless, immediately practice and explore his superpower, and use it to benefit himself. This is the way of thinking of young people, because the sensory stimulation brought by the super transcends all. I estimate that the first ten chapters of your book will dissuade at least 50% of book lovers. 🙂🙂🙂

I really can't stand it. I was attracted by the title of the book.

When you see your daddy, you know you have to back off.

I am a very picky old white reader. This book helped me find a moment of peace and tranquility in the complicated life. It is very good, very comfortable, and very smooth. Maybe it has something to do with me being a middle-aged man as well. Good book!

When the book "Ex-Wife" was just a background, I felt that the emotional line of the book was: trivial matters are full of philosophical depth. The author must have experienced, enlightened, understood, and also been damaged, awakened and then reshaped in his life. After that, I ordered it all, and I didn't want to let go of this good book that I dug into the gold in the introduction. But the ex-wife is here. Subjectively, objectively, and profiled by others, the ex-wife is obviously not worthy of trust. She wants to get back together, not because she regrets her conscience and realizes that she wants to be a good mother and lover, but because the handsome and wealthy protagonist who has not been destroyed by work, life, and love is back. The protagonist's awkwardness and confusion made me deeply moved. It was realistic but disgusting. Sure enough, books that can be read as introductory books have inevitable flaws in some aspects, and they have lost a large number of readers, creating the illusion of insufficient exposure. Putting aside the bloody chapters about my ex-wife, this book is actually really well written.

Regarding the protagonist's golden finger, when I watched it before, I sometimes wondered, would it also classify people into different grades? Today's serialization is about the plot of the Disabled Persons' Federation looking at talents. I really cried when I saw that Zou Kai A natural sprinter, but my legs were disabled due to a car accident Such a fate that makes me sad, I couldn't help but cry The author's words in the article are really great, Disabled people without talent are unlucky But don't give up, talent belongs to the whole society, Strive to find talented people and cure diseases Read the original text! The author writes better👍👍👍

The author will look at his book every few days and look for room for improvement. From the introduction of this book, I know that it would definitely be popular if it was better written. Some of the dialogues are not exciting enough, so I deleted all unnecessary ones. It can be seen that the author wants to write an atmosphere, but he is not strong enough. Please communicate with the editor more.

I saw a lot of bad reviews in the comment section but also good ones. It's normal, because it has an audience. It's not suitable for people who like to read "cool" fast food literature (people who hope to be cheated and slapped in the face as soon as they start), but it's suitable for divorced middle-aged men like me to slowly learn to taste. To be precise, it is very real, very life-like, and very positive without being preachy. It is most recommended for parents with children and couples who are not divorced but have conflicts.

I am a fan of Shura Field. The author's emotional drama is very delicate, but it is too pure love. The possessiveness, impulsiveness, intelligence, and even sensuality and evil thoughts in love are not written out. I feel that it is short of Shura Field. The fight between the female protagonists and the jealousy of the male protagonist is a cool novel. The protagonist's abilities are too buggy and difficult to control. The character of a saint is not suitable for being the protagonist of an online novel. The protagonist has not grown up in the work. Even if you want to create a saintly protagonist, he should change from a reckless and enthusiastic paladin. After being beaten, he becomes a cynical and ruthless ghost knight. Then he is healed by family love, slowly realizes the love of the world, and becomes a saint through sacrifice. It only looks good if it has ups and downs.

Except for the first ten or so chapters, everything else is to my taste

After reading a few chapters, I discovered a problem: what a person is good at is not necessarily what he likes and wants to be.