Fanatic!

Is anyone watching? Is there anyone like me who abandoned the book before reading 50 words? 😁😁😁

I have just read the latest chapter. Overall, it is a very good book. I am very comfortable with both the plot and the context of the writing. However, I think the biggest problem is that the protagonist has no emotions. Maybe my perception is not bloody enough. In my perception, no matter how bloody or violent a person is, He is also a human being, he is not Hannibal. From the current situation, I feel that he has no feelings and his family treats him badly. Ah Yue is more of a transaction, and his brothers do not have such deep feelings. It is more of a way to complete one's own responsibilities, in other words, to complete the task. This is all understandable. But whether it is towards master Zhou Qing, senior sister Shark Jiu, or senior brother Li from the martial arts school, it can be said that without them, there would be no development of the protagonist. However, the protagonist has more of a mentality of getting paid to do things for them. At present, I do not see gratitude in all the actions of the protagonist. All for his own purposes. This is the person he is now, inhuman and emotionless.

This book is a work of martial arts and Hong Kong style. In the early stage, the stage is obviously based on the Kowloon Walled City, and it is paired with an indigenous protagonist with amazing brain circuits. It is worth a read. Although it has a magnetic field system, it currently does not reflect any high-end combat power.

I was wrong about the author 😭😭😭. I just enjoyed reading it. I went to B station and saw "The Legend of Heroes of the Gu World" "Wu Shuai Chapter" made me angry and unhappy 😡😡😡. No wonder Fang Yuan's evaluation of Wu Shuai only said "He is a character, but he was dragged down by the people around him and trapped by his emotions". Half of the time he saw it, all he could think about was beating Mr. Long to death🐉This [elderly parent], Master Zhou Qing is right, you know. Why don't you snatch Yuan and treat him like a dog? 💀💀💀 Life will find its own way. Wherever there is injustice, there will be resistance. Duke Long is destined to meet Fang Yuan who beats him to death. He must be strong himself, [whoever stands in my way will die], and kill a ghost demon king 😄😄😄 I feel happy

Hua Zai, I still like to read more arrogant and refreshing novels. I think your first two books are more to my liking.

Please update more. I'll give you a dozen tickets at the end of the month.

There is no problem with your writing skills. It is enough to reach the level of a first-class author. But what is currently presented is that of a third-rate author. There are several reasons. 1. The first two books had little success, and I lost some money later. I wanted to write my own stuff and educate the audience. This is your biggest failure. Just like the current film industry, I always think that I am high-end and the audience is vulgar, and I want to write something elegant to educate the audience. Then you will definitely be educated by your parents. 2. The biggest poisonous point is that the protagonist is a local. You are still being stubborn. The current results in this book are your truest portrayal. Now is not 20 years ago, when writing about local protagonists there is no sense of immersion at all. It doesn't really matter if he doesn't kill his brother. This is a minor point. 3. There is another striking point, that is, the world is not ignored. I chose to take the Hong Kong underworld in the 1980s and 1990s as the entry point. There is a huge problem, that is, the audience will be introduced to the gangsters of the 1980s and 1990s in Hong Kong, and then you will bring it to mainland China. How is it described? Even if Hong Kong's income and living standards were high at that time, it was still only a population of 20 to 30 million. Even if there are relatively many resources, if there is one genius among 10,000 people, there will only be hundreds or even thousands of geniuses. The mainland had at least 7.889 Billion people at that time, which was enough to kill you. And the magnetic field crystals you mentioned actually came from outside the country. So how can the intensity of your local dancers' training be compared to the power that controls the magnetic field crystals? 3. Since you want to write an open-style Yakuza style, although you have not added points, you have turned the points into genius attributes. That doesn't matter, but what you're writing so far is still not satisfying enough. 4. Your writing skills can definitely reach the level of a first-class author. But if you still want to write your own stuff and educate the audience in the next book after finishing this one, then you will only end up being a second- or third-rate author. That's all. Don't try to educate the reader. Readers will vote for you with their feet. If you can have a public awareness, your next book should be able to achieve monthly sales of over 10,000.

The author, the protagonist was very well written in the early stage, but I feel that the author has gone too far, especially in the last few chapters. There is no need to write the protagonist into such a villain who does not treat people as human beings, right? The title of this book is The Fanatic, but there is an increasing tendency to make the protagonist a villain as well? Being too evil may not necessarily be a good thing. I can't stand it anymore. Someone kills a whole family and extorts hundreds of millions of assets because of a trivial matter. I want to know how you want to write next? Killing people on sight? It's getting further and further away from the artistic conception of this book, and it's a bit off track. You can be crazy, but you can't be evil.

Does the author have any misunderstanding about Gao Wu? He is known as Gao Wu who is lively in the city life. . .

The first two books are good because they are reasonable. Liangsheng and Weige have crazy capital. First of all, there is a system to ensure personal strength in the beginning, and subsequent development is also guaranteed. No matter how big a person you are, I will take my life anyway. At worst, I will fight to death for you to run away. If I change places, I will still hang out. I won't cheat you if I don't. The two of them start out like a newborn tiger and a dragon. Even if they are young, when they grow up, they will grow up to roar like tigers and soar into the sky, so it is understandable that they are crazy and have bad personalities. The protagonist of this book is a native with no plug-ins. At some point, a piece of trash will come out that a master can easily crush to death. His grinning teeth look ridiculous, as annoying as a teddy bear. In Gaowu World, if you want to be as good as a Hong Kong variety show, it will be awkward. Because the highest rule in the world of high martial arts is to respect strength.

The worst order is better than disorder. The protagonist is a person who is purely disorderly and fist-oriented. It's amazing that this book has not been blocked. To be honest, it was quite enjoyable to watch. It was fun to take revenge, kill anyone who didn't like it, and kick a dog if you were in a bad mood. But if you were an ordinary person, it would be a complete disaster if the protagonist took over. The so-called establishment of a new world is to create a dark forest society above the fist. Class solidification will be formed quickly. The son who boxing will still box. Ordinary people have no way to learn boxing. There is no second generation of rich people, no second generation of officials, only the second generation of boxing. The only difference between the protagonist and Qin Shihuang is that his power belongs to himself, and there is no need for the King of Qin to circle the pillars to assassinate someone. Correspondingly, people at the bottom will be even more desperate.

Old readers who read the author's books like your style. Many people find it difficult to accept your change of style. They don't understand why you have to throw away your strengths when writing a book.

From Hong Kong Shower Sheng to Chinatown Viagra, I have truly seen what cool writing is and what a gangster brother is. These two books are also the most refreshing, thorough, exciting, exciting, and fascinating novels I have read on Qidian in recent years. I hope that the author's level and achievements will be improved to the next level.

Don't you think it's strange? There are cars, boats, and planes, but no guns. Isn't it strange? You just rely on personal force. I know that you have high personal force, and I am rich and powerful. Do you just want to mess with me, and don't allow me to mess with you? Haha

Green onion, the ecological niche you gave up will be filled by others: Rebirth 1878: America's number one gangster. Stronger than you, fiercer than you. The heroes of the world are really like the crucian carp crossing the river!

I saw chapter 370 on qq. The protagonist has become as powerful as a god. His brother was killed because he liked gambling and couldn't change it. They have lived together in the same room since childhood and they are still brothers. It is difficult for cold-blooded people to kill their own brothers. In reality, the author hates his relatives so much that he almost becomes twisted in his heart before venting them out in writing. What kind of family is the author born in? Who is he from that place?

It's too outrageous. The protagonist's master is set to be a great master, but as a result, the apprentice is out of control and doesn't take action. This is cowardice. The behavior style of this lineage is just bold and pure fart. Others are blaming you, and you don't understand why you say it's the disciple's fault. It's just to test you. If you don't take action, it's unnatural to use your disciple to ward off disasters. Don't write anything about master's kindness and disciple's filial piety. It's too outrageous. In this situation, even if the master is chased everywhere, the apprentice does not need to take action. After all, you are not the gecko's apprentice. You are just teaching him things. Then when you can't fight anymore, the apprentice will support you until you grow old. As for someone being plotted while you are still able to fight, you can't blame the apprentice. It is estimated that the action failed, and he was afraid of being beaten and did not dare to expose himself. Otherwise, how could any of his disciples be arrested everywhere if there was such an invincible existence?

After reading more than 40 chapters, I feel that the protagonist is similar to those young gangsters who dare to fight and fight, nothing special. It doesn't have any charm either, so I can't substitute it.

Even his eldest brother, who dragged his whole family to death, had to work hard. There are three parties to solve the problem, his eldest brother, the debt collector, and the casino. Which of these three parties is the best to solve the problem? It is undoubtedly his eldest brother. The whole family is so busy with the rotten gambler, and he can't clean it up. He can't get out of bed with a sack? Who knows? His eldest brother gambled badly because he was not afraid of facing his family. The debt collector told him not to gamble. He dared to gamble. He had the nerve to call someone a thug even if he had to deal with the easiest thing to deal with. He was not as good as a debt collector.

Damn it, there are no cheats. In a world of advanced martial arts, there are no cheats. How can you stand out? , Why are you more ruthless than others? I laughed and read three of them. They are really three golden ones. They are like shit. I say goodbye. I might as well continue writing about the demon monster. I read more than 300 chapters of the last book. I am tired of aesthetics and can't stand it anymore.

A group of "masters" who practice "magnetic field martial arts" work in Hong Kong every day for several gambling houses/dance halls/loansharks, just like the underworld, or it is a completely enhanced version of the underworld. But what kind of gangsters are the underworld? Logically speaking, as long as it is still a human society, the underworld cannot have a high degree of organization, nor can it have "masters", so it seems to be a strange group.

The protagonist is so brainless and small-minded. He beats others to death for trivial matters. The more I watch it, the more brainless I feel. He is so awesome. He should beat his whole family to death. This way there will be no weakness. Just become a god.

Should I give up this book?

I don't have any skill, and my talent is not very strong. I'm just playing chicken in the world of high martial arts.

After reading some book reviews, I couldn't figure it out. It doesn't work if you say it's aboriginal, or it doesn't work if you don't pass it. It's said that the natives can't get ahead without being successful. It's unreasonable to force the protagonist's halo to get out. Can anyone tell me why? Is it the worldview of the City Walled books?

The writing is good, but the character design of the protagonist is not good. It is understandable that barbarism defeats civilization, but the protagonist is either barbaric or stupid.

The protagonist in the last book knew politics, but this one is about force and not much politics.

One of the best novels in the past two years, but there are too many trolls and the author doesn't manage it. Then it is difficult for the characters and stories to be promoted with large traffic. Looking forward to the release of film and television animation works.

The whole family will be killed at every turn, and the slightest thing will lead to a life-and-death feud. Those who can watch it are also somewhat capable.

The book is quite enjoyable, but the main character is not very likable. Who can replace him with a normal person?