Naruto: Transform the World Starting from Konoha

It feels the same as those books about Naruto: The End of the World, where the two key characters are still dead after a long time and hundreds of chapters.

Can the weasel die quickly? Looking at the author's pretentiousness, I'm afraid he's not trying to make a big deal out of it. The structure of the writing is mentally retarded. The general process is: A farts, B and D become quiet, "eyes sluggish" and "staring". A casually talks about how the fart happened, and B and D begin to "shrink their pupils" and "look empty"... Is the author an expressionless adjective? Or when the sun comes into my mind, my face will be expressionless, my eyes will be empty, I will twitch the corner of my mouth, hold my forehead, sigh in annoyance, smile dotingly, both men and women have gentle eyes, and other bad words?

The author has written so many Naruto fanfics, but he still doesn't understand the most basic character design issues. He has a glassy heart, a grumpy brother, and a split personality. He was not such a noob ten years ago.

Every time he enters the deep sea, Hiruzen Sarutobi frowns, gets older, takes a deep breath, smokes, and plays with Uchiha. It makes me laugh. The author should delete the protagonist. How can Sarutobi Hiruzen look like the protagonist 😜

Are you following the settings in my book Tokyo Cthulhu?

I'm a little confused about the author's psychology. He arranges for the protagonist to be bullied by Uchiha, and then arranges for the protagonist to lick Uchiha. The fact that the protagonist does not have the identity of Uchiha has no impact on the plot at all.

I don't know if the author has seen the movie "The Black Hole". It would be great if he could write about that feeling. Madness and despair are spread through the hands of the protagonist, and the shadow of the evil gods gradually envelopes the world. The protagonist is the spokesperson chosen by the evil gods, and is the medium created by the evil gods to complete their reappearance in the world.

It's okay. It's edible. It depends on whether it's good or not. Is it the whole world or just Konoha?

1. This book is not from the world-destroying style 2. Those who like to read about strange rules can read this book 3. Only Deep Sea can defeat Deep Sea

There is no big problem at the moment. The most important thing for an author is his ability to bear it. Just write your own thing. Paying too much attention to the comment section will only end your life. Most people who think it is not good will not comment and just withdraw it.

So can we create a scene where Uchiha Itachi has to sacrifice for Uchiha?

Looking at it now, it should be 250 chapters. The plot and theme are very good, but there is one thing that I am not used to, and that is the weird characters. Well, forget it, if you treat it as being polluted by the deep sea, there will be no sense of violation. (I really feel that everyone in Konoha is irritable. Compared with everyone in Konoha, the tempers of Akatsuki's group of people feel very amiable.)

There is no OOC, and the story development logic is correct. I don't know where all these little black guys come from.

It's a bit interesting. I've read a similar book before called Me Creating Cthulhu in Naruto

This book is not of the Mushishi style, and the subject matter has been written badly. Judging from the storyline, the main plot line is behind the scenes, but the protagonist happens to be from the Uchiha clan. The article is a bit slow, and I hope the author can grasp the rhythm well.

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It looks good, it's really good. Why are the results not good? From my point of view, it's really good.

I haven't finished it yet, I only subscribed to a few chapters. The subject matter is good, but it's a bit uncomfortable to include Uchiha.

Actually, there is a problem with the beginning. After all, this is a fanfic. The beginning is too out of line. People who click in are all here to see Naruto. You have become Cthulhu. I personally feel that it does not meet expectations. I have read your book three times, and each time I read the beginning. Then I read it when I ran out of books. As far as the plot is concerned, it is still okay.

You have to patch this up. To put it bluntly, a thing that has never existed is formed by power or the distracting thoughts of sentient beings. It can only be called shaping. It is purified and tempered little by little through destruction to form high-level extraordinary materials. What is fake is ultimately fake. The most important thing is to refine the fake into true. The distracting thoughts of sentient beings are themselves a pile of dregs, just like dough, kneaded into dough, and then baked.

I think it's very well written, I want to read it

There's something wrong with Jiraiya's character.

As a fan writer who writes weird stuff, the plot is 800 miles away. I want Naruto traffic, but I also want to write something different. The bigger my imagination is in the weird part, the faster I will die. If I forcefully add it according to the plot, the weird part will appear redundant. The essence is that I am not confident in my own writing. If I feel that I am not capable, I might as well specialize in one category.

It has the same effect as Naruto's original summoning of the Old Ones.

Author, you know😁