Create a Copy Starting from Naruto World

Emmm, I feel it is not as good as the previous book. Now it is just like a white text with formulas. It is ordinary, formulaic and uninteresting. It still needs to be different from other books. Studio writing and template writing are probably not suitable for individual authors.

I suggest you read more similar ones, such as Breeding All Humans at 300 Jin, the system and ideas in it are quite good.

If you create a copy of Night of Genocide, you can get a lot of resurrection coins and some money. You can also complete hidden tasks. Rewards: Seal Technique, Hashirama Cells, Nine Tails and other generous prizes.

The subject matter is worth 2000, but the plot is really a bit... When did the author cut it? I want to use this subject matter as a follower to go somewhere to make bad money

You have to queue up to enter the dungeon. Did you learn from NetEase's 300,000 Yin Soldiers...

If someone else clears the dungeon, the protagonist will watch others order the dishes and give out the rewards himself, both in the earth and in the air.

I'm going to end up on my own. I rushed to book it. It's so different from the last one. It's a thousand miles away.

Personal feeling! ! Your ninja world hasn't changed much now, so there's not much to see. I don't know this copy of the world! (What book?) I was confused when I read it!

Generally speaking, getting in and out of the dungeon is a bit of a chore, and you will be thrown off by the main god's space.

Was this book rewritten? I saw one that was exactly the same. Also, the reward was put in by the protagonist himself, shouldn't it be randomly generated?

With or without Shen Nong, I wonder if the protagonist will end up later? If not, I will continue watching

It would be too much if anyone can use resurrection coins.

The writing is pretty good and worth reading. You can set up a few more dungeons in the local world. If you want to dramatize it, you can get Madara and Hashirama from the Warring States Period, or see if you can get a dungeon from the era of Uchiha governance 😍

It's a bit bland, mainly because I don't know which world the dungeon world is, and there's no sense of immersion or fun.

The protagonist has too many roles, I thought this was a group drama

But none of them seem to perform well.

It really doesn't work... Summon Naruto characters from another world. Have you ever played the Naruto mobile game? Or you are the main god and hire Naruto to help you deal with the incident, the Akatsuki organization descends on the pirates,,, there are many themes,,,

This is a very nice book. Good luck to the author. Is there any kind-hearted person who can recommend a book similar to this one?

I can't stand it any longer. I have designed a system for cultivating immortals for myself. I don't understand what you want to do. Do you plan to end it yourself? The subject matter is very good, but who would want to see you, the JB protagonist, when reading this kind of article? Aren't they all about the changes of the natives in anime? Isn't it good for the protagonist to just be your tool? Every day, you worry about the JB protagonist using the system of cultivating immortals to pretend to be a master. You are cheating and are you afraid of being killed by the natives? Is it difficult to get yourself an invincible weapon? They all have to make up a system of cultivating immortals for themselves to practice. Is the realm of your JB protagonist very important? , There is no reason why the grades are so poor. All the major poisonous points of this kind of writing have been trampled on.

The dungeon is obviously a branch of another real world, but it doesn't affect that world at all. It's just ninjas playing games. I don't know if you have set the level of exploration and perfect evaluation that will affect the choice of characters in the different world and the direction of the world. Otherwise, it would just be just playing house, which would be meaningless.

The author wanted to write a reversal, but what happened 🤫 The first plot character that appeared in the dungeon world to connect the main plot. He wanted to create a protagonist who is beautiful, strong, but smart and nearly demonic, but ended up being a prostitute. It's hard to comment. There is also the protagonist's mysterious operation in occupying the country of waves. Other than that, everything is fine.

It feels like the priorities are mixed up, and the dungeon scenes are too concentrated.

Is there a book with this routine? I remember seeing the protagonist going to Konoha and having all kinds of fights with Danzo. It just happened to be on the shelves. I am really grateful to the author for not letting me spend money in vain. That writing made me feel that the protagonist's character was instantly gone.

If you spend money to buy tickets to pass the dungeon, you won't die for real, and the final dungeon will reward you with a lottery? You might as well omit the copy and just spend money on the draw. Sitting at the same table as Liu who spent money to open jars a few years ago. The main god space next door is really dead. It's not a matter of spending money for fun. If you get points, most of them will be drawn. The rewards you get will not be drawn into only mud and air.

Damn, this kind of book with the protagonist traveling through dungeons is not well written. I simply wrote it myself. If you are interested, you can come and read it. The title of the book: Naruto: Rebellion plot starting from the second pillar. The first dungeon is Capua.

Either write a single world, or you'd better set up a main line force in the first world or arrange the famous figures in this world to be the main line characters, and then slowly introduce characters from other worlds and the main line characters from the beginning to complete the intersection of the worlds. Otherwise, the most feared thing about this theme is that the characters from different worlds are mixed together, and you don't know what the main line goal is. Because the copy changes the fate of the characters in the original world, it becomes messy. Let's just say that not everyone in the domestic trilogy of Light, Death, and Sea of Fire is like it. I have seen that some people only watched Naruto, and some people only watched One Piece and Bleach. This means that later on, it is very likely that you will write 100 chapters of Naruto, accumulate some readings, and then run away to other worlds. Those people will look at the meaning of who is written here and run away. Maybe it will be good. I will pick some familiar ones (titles) from the chapters you write about and read them for two chapters. Most of them will be scattered immediately. Almost all books on this subject are dead on this issue. The more ancient ones sell cans and the more recent ones are workers. However, after changing the world, the reputation and reading death level have dropped.

Is this copy an original world?

There are some sentences in each chapter that have typos, or have too many words and too few words, resulting in incorrect sentences that are difficult to understand.

It feels ok. Just control your combat power. Don't let any invincible abilities come out and your combat power collapses.

When I see the sea of ​​​​dead fire, I immediately moisten it 🙂