Naruto: Remodeling the World, Starting with Konoha

It feels the same as those books about Naruto: The End of the World, where the two key characters are still dead after a long time and hundreds of chapters.

Can the weasel die quickly? Looking at the author's pretentiousness, I'm afraid he's not trying to make a big deal out of it. The structure of the writing is mentally retarded. The general process is: A farts, B and D become quiet, "eyes sluggish" and "staring". A casually talks about how the fart happened, and B and D begin to "shrink their pupils" and "look empty"... Is the author an expressionless adjective? Or when the sun comes into my mind, my face will be expressionless, my eyes will be empty, I will twitch the corner of my mouth, hold my forehead, sigh in annoyance, smile dotingly, both men and women have gentle eyes, and other bad words?

The author has written so many Naruto fanfics, but he still doesn't understand the most basic character design issues. He has a glassy heart, a grumpy brother, and a split personality. He was not such a noob ten years ago.

Every time he enters the deep sea, Hiruzen Sarutobi frowns, gets older, takes a deep breath, smokes, and plays with Uchiha. It makes me laugh. The author should delete the protagonist. How can Sarutobi Hiruzen look like the protagonist 😜

I'm a little confused about the author's psychology. He arranges for the protagonist to be bullied by Uchiha, and then arranges for the protagonist to lick Uchiha. The fact that the protagonist does not have the identity of Uchiha has no impact on the plot at all.

Are you following the settings in my book Tokyo Cthulhu?

I don't know if the author has seen the movie "The Black Hole". It would be great if he could write about that feeling. Madness and despair are spread through the hands of the protagonist, and the shadow of the evil gods gradually envelopes the world. The protagonist is the spokesperson chosen by the evil gods, and is the medium created by the evil gods to complete their reappearance in the world.

1. This book is not from the world-destroying style 2. Those who like to read about strange rules can read this book 3. Only Deep Sea can defeat Deep Sea

It's okay. It's edible. It depends on whether it's good or not. Is it the whole world or just Konoha?

There is no big problem at the moment. The most important thing for an author is his ability to bear it. Just write your own thing. Paying too much attention to the comment section will only end your life. Most people who think it is not good will not comment and just withdraw it.