I Actually Escaped from the Virtual World

Hello fellow Taoist, I think your book is relatively novel in setting and has a good beginning. It is very eye-catching. After reading a few chapters, I think it would be better to add more suspense and foreshadowing in the early stage, and then slowly explain the settings as the plot develops. This way the rhythm may be better and it will be easier for me to write. Of course, if you have already established an outline, just work at your own pace. If there is any offense, I hope you can forgive me! Come on, write this story down.

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This is a wonderful book written by Lao Tie. I have read it and collected it. "Zhen Xuan Dao Xu" {"NickName":"The Value of Remnant Dreams","UserId":213338125} Log in to Qidian. Please collect and comment from Lao Tie. I wish you all the best, may your house be filled with gold and jade, and may you bring in wealth! Thanks, old man! Kneel down and thank me!

Hello author, overall there is nothing wrong with it. It's just that I think this kind of protagonist design is no longer popular. Your update frequency is not enough. You need to update 4,000 times a day to have a chance to sign a contract. If your goal is to sign a contract and make money, you should scan the list and download the book when you open the next one.

Watching some videos, they always talk about the Three Golden Chapters. I still don't know what it means, but after reading the author's big book, I feel a little bit better. Of course, I am not particularly professional or very capable. I am just expressing my opinions. It's just that the beginning was too bland, with no ups and downs or emotions at all.

Brother, thank you for leaving a message. Let me talk about it. I will only say three points. Whether it is right or wrong is up to you. First, you are not a master now. The title of the book must express its own selling point. It must be four characters or less. Generally, at least level five writers write the title this way because they are popular. Second, your name is a series of numbers? When you become famous in the future, it will be too hard for others to mention your name, right? Third, today's readers must clearly see who you are from the very beginning? Where are you? What do you want to do? If you can't see these clearly at the beginning (preferably within 500 words), readers will generally be too lazy to read on. There are so many books to read, who will hide and seek with you. Please think carefully about the above yourself.

During this period, I would like to thank all fellow Taoists for their guidance. I will reopen the book next Monday. Welcome everyone to continue to come for guidance, 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Writing a book is not easy, support each other, welcome to visit again

The author is great. After reading three chapters, what he said may not sound good. There are two big problems. One is that the character of the protagonist is not likable. You don't have to be capable, but you have to have a brain. But the protagonist is still acting bad, saying he wants revenge, but it turns out that he is too useless and can only cheat. The second is that there are too many characters, too complicated, and I don't even know who they are 😭