Thank You for the Invitation. I Will Sleep Like a Real Immortal in the Copy.

I feel that this book lacks something, 1. I thought that there is no transcendence in the real world, and the protagonist is the only one who can do it alone, but later on, the protagonist can open his own eyes... In this way, the advantages and specialness of the protagonist are reduced, and the advantage of Goldfinger is also reduced 2. Because there is no one in the early stage There is foreshadowing, so when you suddenly see the protagonist opening his eyes, you will be stunned for a moment and you can't understand. What the author takes for granted may not necessarily be written. It seems difficult for the reader. The golden finger is the same. There is no foreshadowing and introduction and you can't understand it. Every time there is a new content, you have to understand it again. The reader has to help the author come up with a reasonable explanation. It is tiring.

I was passing by without reading the text, so I suggested changing the name to "Sleeping with the True Immortal", which would be more attractive.

Can Shen Nong tell me about the content? I can't tell if it's to my liking in the introduction.

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

Update quickly

Your book has been discontinued for such a long time before it even hit the shelves. All recommendations are definitely gone. If it really doesn't work, let's start it again and write it again.

By the way, when will the last thing mentioned in the previous book be linked to the new book?

Why do I feel like I have read a similar novel a long time ago?