Fists Dominate the Martial Arts World of the Republic of China: Awakening the Eyes of the Candle Dragon at the Beginning

I've been recommending it and it's about to be exempted again. I wanted to give it a try because I really like Chinese martial arts. But after reading a few chapters, I realized that it's basically a fantasy novel disguised as Chinese martial arts. It has nothing to do with Chinese martial arts except for its name. I didn't even know that I had learned Five Elements Boxing. How do you fight hundreds of moves in Chinese martial arts, especially internal martial arts? Unless the skill difference is very big, otherwise you just rely on your skills to overwhelm others. If your skills are great, one Bengquan is enough. If your skills are not enough, don't think about fighting hundreds of moves. Just hit three punches and find that the opponent is fine. So I started to run away In addition, the author seems to have little social experience. The protagonist in the novel takes everything for granted, and then forcibly arranges some disgusting supporting characters to promote the plot. This kind of novel can be read as a pure novel, but if you are a little pursuing, you really can't stand it {"TopicId":"995007324090269696","TopicName":"Book Review Activity"}

Why do you have to keep pulling a cart? You are an indigenous protagonist and you can still understand it. Damn, you are a time traveler and you can still pull a cart for three years. It is not logical.

So coquettish, I beat someone else's brother to death and killed someone else's sister with my backhand. I hope there won't be any thunder later.

The chapters and content are too exaggerated. The previous Ming Jin and Dark Jin are all kinds of strength, various understandings, seeing the world, and fist intentions. Is this necessary? It's not really possible to practice. The plot is also outrageous. When driving a rickshaw, there are several beauties, including a girl who leads the family, a noble lady, and the enemy sister who is the worst. He kills her brother and has an affair with his sister every day.

I would like to make a special complaint. The book begins with the story about Sun xx who kicked his ribs and almost froze to death. He couldn't retaliate decisively. Such a male protagonist is a bit of a saint.

Where can I go if I have the ability? Do you have to hang a tree?

In this novel, Invincible, he beats to death his younger brother, whom others regard as life, and then seduces others into the harem. Is the protagonist so hungry and unscrupulous? The small head controls the big head?

The protagonist himself has talent, but the instructor Lin from the martial arts school is so difficult for the protagonist. Does the protagonist have to stay in this martial arts school shamelessly? Can't I go to other martial arts schools? A golden finger is blind in vain. It makes me feel like the protagonist is Jia Nailiang

That's ridiculous. Chinese martial arts has almost become a myth. You might as well modify it by magic. Why write about Chinese martial arts? Just change the magic to high martial arts. I don't know how awesome I thought it was, but according to the description, dark strength is just a one-shot thing. Why bother? The writing is so speechless.

There is too much water, so 10 photos will be taken to distill one photo.

Subscribe to a chapter specifically to complain about it! What a mean, mean, disgusting male protagonist! Author, you think now is the golden age for writing novels.

The first three. It's only been 167 chapters and I'm seeing you again and again. Opening harems everywhere, giving up

The writing is good, but the emotional scenes are too awkward and there are too many to watch.

My feeling is that, to use a metaphor, masturbating can be described as groundbreaking, but 😰 feels outrageous that it is written so ridiculously that it can achieve enlightenment, enlightenment, and death with one shot. That's how it's set up. Why bother. Wu Sheng can also be killed by a few shots. Just can't hit it. Why make it so complicated?

What a show of skill, one move can cover two chapters 😅, and the fight has been scheduled for twenty chapters and has not yet been completed...

The duel between warriors is undoubtedly the biggest feature of Chinese martial arts literature. The description of fighting scenes can be said to be the root of Chinese martial arts writing. However, the author, how do you write the fighting scenes? If so, if you can, you can see how the fighting scenes of warm tea and rice wine are written. Learn more. When it comes to fighting scenes, it can be said that no one on this site can compare with it.

I don't know how to write emotional scenes and forcefully write them!

Emotional scene: too embarrassing and childish, a proper stallion novel Martial arts scene: I thought I was reading a novel about cultivating immortals, all the moves are based on shouting Finally, I ridiculed "Yandi" You have read too many novels about cultivating immortals, right... Every time this name comes out, there is drama It's too embarrassing, what kind of second place is this? Don't you think it's awkward to write like this in the early Republic of China?

As clear as a novel about cultivating immortals

So far, it looks great👍. It's definitely good food. I didn't expect that the martial arts genre of the Republic of China can also be classified into fantasy.

The introduction is written inexplicably. The first result of the Human Ancestor Dao Fruit is that the Tai Dao Fruit demonizes the earth. Is this the Chinese I know?

The writing is good and the plot is okay, follow it quickly

Why is every book like this? Do you want to learn from The Great Eunuch?

Come on, author, the writing is good. I hope Sun Xiyu can correct it.

The early stage was okay, but the description of the realm was too outrageous