After Traveling Through Tokyo for Twelve Years, I Found Out That Qingmei Is Shijie

[Disclaimer: I really hope that there will be an author writing a fanfic about Kong Jing/Xingyue, and I hope it won't be a cool novel, because today's Xingyue fans are basically brainless] But brother, you know that there is a system but you don't think that you are in Xingyue How impossible is it? Based on the fact that the protagonist knows the game FGO Have you heard of it, at least know a little about Xingyue's story When you see the name of the ability in the system, don't you think it is [Xingyue's ability]? What is the lucky E of the Lancer from ancient times, King Arthur's intuition, or even the Golden Rule? If you know that it is [Xingyue's ability], and the protagonist has never doubted that it is [Xingyue's world], then you'd better have a reasonable explanation (such as a boss interfering with the idea) Your protagonist thought of "Sky Realm" but didn't think of the two rituals. Do you know how unreasonable it is? (I have never heard of the story of the Realm of the Sky, but you know the wilderness sect lotus but don't know the two rituals, how is it possible!) As above, abandon the trap

The male protagonist of the original work was deleted because he was afraid that the dog-licking protagonist would not be able to compete with him 👍👍👍

I am very angry and ask the author to remove this book, because you, the author, are peeping into my life😠😠😠😠 IP address: Kanfuko City, Japan.

It's awkward, frustrating, and the protagonist is too weak. It's useless to just write about the background of a top business family. I always plan to do something that is difficult to do by myself. I don't use the resources at hand and just rely on myself to do it alone. I don't have to suffer.

This protagonist... He looks like a dog

I specifically wasted a monthly ticket to post a comment. The protagonist has a background of rebirth and does things that only elementary school students do. You are writing novels using the method of writing youth pain literature. The protagonist's treatment of people is full of the incomprehensible self of a child. If you want to be a literary youth like the Dragon Clan, forget it, but you are not even a literary youth, and you are not good enough.

First of all, I would like to thank every reader who supports me as usual, and I also apologize to those readers who clicked in and found it unacceptable. The first book signing for a newbie. Although I really hope to make some money, I won't sign it because of my poor grades. This book is my dream when I was in school - to write a fanfic that I like the work. As there are relatively few Type Moon fanfics in Qidian fanfics, there are relatively few fanfics written in the direction related to Tsukihime in the Sky. I knew from the beginning that the audience was low. From the character design to the plot, conflict, and even the writing, the approximate number of words in a chapter, they all refer to the novels in the Sky, Tsukihime Reset, fsn games, FHA games, etc., Rather than Qidian fanfics. It is normal to feel uncomfortable. Answer some of the most criticized issues, such as the protagonist taking too many risks, being too obsessed with sex, having strange family relationships, etc. A lot of it was written this way on purpose. Look, Kurogiri was so scared to death by Shiki that he could turn around and visit the person who almost killed him. He went on for three years and even had a quarrel with his family over this matter. Is this normal? For Sojuro to be able to say that it would be nice to be killed by Aoko when he was being chased by Aoko, it was obvious that he was not familiar with him at that time. And in turn, he immediately started helping Aoko seamlessly. Is this normal? When Zhigui Neng was almost killed by Frove, he turned around and picked up a dagger and went directly to his hometown without making any plans. Is this normal? The protagonists in Mushroom's novels basically have big psychological problems. The specific problems and causes will be broken down and explained bit by bit in the plot. At the same time, this is also a point that needs to be overcome or reconciled later. I am also planning to write it accordingly. There may be something wrong with my writing, the writing style is not that good, the rhythm is not comfortable enough, the writing does not feel that way, it doesn't taste that way. I admit this, what can I say about my taste. But it's really not about bugs. Of course, I write whatever comes to my mind as soon as I think about it. I have already written it very seriously. The main reason for suppressing the protagonist is because the original work is actually like that. Demon Night, the first line of Fate, Sky Realm, and the male protagonist are all very suppressed in the early stage. I thought that since I am a Xingyue fan, it should be easy to accept this. I took it for granted. The story itself in 1995 is based on the Sky Realm. Although I added the pre- and post-murder investigation chapters and the spiral of conflicts to the plot, the male protagonist's opponent at this time... The newly awakened Shirazumi Rio, and the two girls who have not yet had the magic eye. The male protagonist's combat power is slightly stronger, so there is no need to read it. But I have to tell all the contents of the three chapters I mentioned. As a result, the protagonist was suppressed for too long. I reflect and regret... Now that 95 years have passed, the disciples have to be killed, and the combat power will definitely be improved. I actually don't know much about the style of Qidian fan fiction. My friends said that I have accumulated a lot of recommendations and came here after writing a book. However, my accumulation is accumulated from watching anime for more than ten years, playing hundreds of gals, following comics, and reading Japanese light novels. When I read Qidian, it was the era of Shoye, the dragon that covers the sky. Before finishing the manuscript, I read a lot of Qidian books, only focusing on the first three to ten chapters, so if I wrote a slightly longer one, I would be overwhelmed and lose the flavor. This is because I, as a new author who wants to enter the industry, have insufficient initial accumulation. This cannot be easily corrected in a short period of time. Come on, I will work hard to grow and strive to write better and better, but this will be a long-term process... If reading my book makes you unhappy, I really hope that for the sake of my sincere apology, you will be kind to me. At least so far, the results have been rising steadily. Although I don't have high expectations for how good the results will be, I really cherish my first book. Reference materials, by the way, Red Bull has arrived.

The licking sister is also too licking. Look at how well treated Kurogiri Miki is, but the difficulty is not as high as yours.

Even though he wants to kill himself, the protagonist can still lean on people like a dog. How can a person who is set to be a business genius do this? Behavioral logic is rife with incongruity. And he actually thinks that being killed doesn't matter. What about his family? Asakami Fujino is already suffering from a disease. Instead of focusing on his family, he goes to find two people who have nothing to do with each other except playing together when he was a child. To put it bluntly, the two rituals are just childhood sweethearts. No matter what, family will never be more important. The incomprehensible logic makes this book difficult to go far.

I originally wanted to say something critical, but after thinking about it, I decided to encourage and support this group of authors. I feel that with the author's desire for expression and careful research of information, the next book should be a high-quality product at the starting point. As for this book, I can only say that third-rate businessmen know that they need to do market research before selling anything. In addition, fan fiction is in a sense a work that has been chewed, because many things will only shock people when they first see them.

There are too many problems, the servant is very blind, there is only one person, and the protagonist's ability will decline. What kind of fairy setting is this? Unless the author does not write the book to make money, the chance of failure is very high.

Basically, the protagonist of this book seems to be a fool, a retard, a loser, a dog licker, a clown, and a toy. The author can be considered capable if he can write it like this without being completely terrible. I am too lazy to read it after seeing the gods. I will pick it up next time after forgetting all the stupid points.

Please understand the author. After all, a long time ago, farmers could only imagine the emperor working with a golden ax, let alone the author.

After reading the first three chapters, I can only say that it is hard to imagine that this is a novel in 2025. However, the author himself said that when he read the starting point before, it was like a dragon covering the sky, so he was relieved. As for the author who said that he read a lot of the first three and ten chapters of other novels before writing, I didn't feel it. The first three chapters are still discouraging. The author needs to read more current online articles, at least to find out the poisonous points that readers are bored with. I don't think the writing is bad. I feel like the writing is... Normal? It is true that there are problems with the writing. Some of the plots are very similar to Asby's. Everyone is saying, "Don't be intentional or learn from mushrooms. What the hell is the idea of ​​learning from mushrooms?" Also, this book has a single heroine and a harem? Come on, author!

He is a nephew of mine, but because we are about the same age, we have a good relationship with him and he always calls me brother. A very well-behaved kid. He wears glasses and is polite. He has never caused any trouble since he was a child. He can have a good relationship with anyone and have a few words. But when he was in high school, he saw the little girl from the local gang leader's house, and then he fell in love with him. We fell in love at first sight. The little girl didn't look like a good person. She went to high school because of her family. She dressed nondescriptly every day, kept her hair half-length and not short, and carried a knife with her. It was said that she still had mental problems, but she just couldn't help but like her. He didn't go to school well every day and chased his little sister to play. There was a period of time when the public order was not good, so he went to guard downstairs every day. They didn't know what the little sister's family was thinking, so they just let him hang around the door every day. Later, the little girl went out to hang out at night and got into a car accident and ended up in a vegetative state. The family was relieved and said that she would feel better now. But she ended up visiting her every week. When she was so nervous in her second and third years of high school, she still had to go, otherwise she would cause trouble. If she had no choice, she would let him go once every weekend. He was quite confident and managed to get into a pretty good university. However, before he finished his studies, he started to act like a monster again. He had a quarrel with his family and dropped out of school and moved out. The family angrily cut off his living expenses and tried to force him to give up. As a result, he found a part-time job in a small studio to support himself. Then the little girl woke up after lying down for two years, and her illness was much better. Maybe she was moved, so she went to work in that small studio. The small studio was in an unfinished building, and she mainly did architectural design. The boss was a woman, she looked about 26 or 27 years old, she had orange hair and glasses, she was very gentle, she liked orange very much, every time I saw her she had orange jewelry or clothes. I actually wanted to develop further after that, but I was blocked every time without leaving any trace. Later, it seemed that because he was with the little girl every day, he offended someone, so my nephew had his leg broken and one of his eyes blinded. He said that he had found an old doctor to fix his leg, but there was nothing he could do about his eyes and he was blind. The little sister still has some conscience and is not ungrateful, so she married her nephew. However, the nephew became a live-in son-in-law. The family has always been very resentful because of this matter. After the marriage, things got better a lot. The little sister's temperament has changed a lot. Her hair has grown longer, and she has paid more attention to her clothes. She can't seem to be the same at all. Over the years, the family has gradually whitened. She is quite rich, but she still has a lot of influence among the local gangsters. Now I have a beautiful daughter, and the family is happy. Even the owner of the small studio where I worked at that time has also left, and I have no contact with her since. I still feel it is a pity.

It's so poisonous, I thought I was reading some SB novel

The data speaks for itself

In the first chapter, the protagonist's knowledge that he traveled twelve years was changed to that he didn't know that he was just a child because of traffic, magic, or other accidents (convenient for patching), which caused his mind to be more active. Later, when he encountered a corpse, he accelerated the fusion of past life memories and began to emerge. This makes it more logical. The time traveler has lived for twelve years and does not recognize the very famous Two Ceremonies. Instead, he meets Aren Renzongye, a character he doesn't recognize even if he doesn't look at it. He reminds him that this is the world of Xingyue. Readers of Yun Xingyue feel like their brains have been thrown to the ground and stepped on As for the Cup Noodles, you wrote earlier that the maid was injured and hospitalized a week ago. Three days ago, she found a path and took a shortcut to pick up her sister. The couple asked you what you ate yesterday and the day before yesterday, and you said cup noodles? Did you and your sister eat instant noodles for a week? Let's not mention whether there is a cafeteria in this school, but instant noodles for breakfast and dinner? You don't know that when you buy rice balls, sandwiches, and lunch boxes in supermarkets, you should also buy bread and milk to put in the refrigerator at home, right? Finally, author, don't resign. If you really want to be a full-time student, you will have to work for two more years to settle down, otherwise you will starve to death.

It feels like the male protagonist is always failing one after another, and the golden finger seems to be of no use at all. Fruited - Ability improvement - Frustrated Being picked on for no reason It makes me feel tired I shouldn't have booked everything in advance, I regret it 😥

In fact, the writing is quite good. It's rare that there are no brainless Kujing fanfics that are more original. But it's still a pity. The biggest problem with writing fanfics is that it doesn't make money and also receives criticism from readers 😅 If you have an unstable mentality, you can easily collapse.

Recently, I deleted my account due to some things, so I made a new account to read and comment. After reading the third chapter, I came over to say something. After reading the third chapter, I felt very sorry that the original male protagonist "Kurogiri Mikiya" could not appear "due to force majeure" and the second male protagonist "PK" - because this is a point that will "explode" if written well, but I have only read three chapters, and I don't know the author's writing level, but the "[ding]" sound really made me "feel" that the protagonist has - the ability can only rely on "third party factors - the "feeling of inferiority" provided by the system. But since you wrote it, I dare to read it and see what you wrote! Similarly, in some Dragon Clan second creation stories, most authors use "return to another world", "arrangement system" and other means to let Lu Mingfei and Uesugi Eryi "co-operate" again - which makes me feel OOC; while those game operators use "resurrection" to force Eli Yi and Lu Mingfei to co-operate - they don't want to play; the players who played "Dragon Fantasy" before worked hard to help Eli Yi escape and let her fall in love with Lu Mingfei - disgusting!

Sure enough, he is a eunuch, and writing books full-time will most likely lead to bankruptcy 😅.

Is the author a newbie🤔? If you are a newcomer, your writing is okay

There are so few Type Moon fanfics that you can watch right now. Do you have any recommendations?

Come and give me a masterpiece with pictures

What's going on... Won't another one die in battle? No!

Kavin? Or what happened? Let's talk about it, why did the update suddenly stop for so many days without saying anything...