Perfect: the Immortal King Starts the Game, Bearing the Name of Kong Xuan!

It would be better to just call Kong Xuan, Qin Feng will immediately hear the name of wholesale 😅😅

To be honest, you are the Immortal King, why are you going to amuse children? Your name is worse than Kong Xuan, isn't it simple and clear?

The plot in the early stage is a bit sketchy, especially when the retreat breaks through and a group of people come in to rob it, pretending to be an opportunity. Another hero comes to save the beauty and kills the grandson of the Immortal King for Huang Nu, which leads to a war between the Immortal King and the Immortal King. Nothing like being a fairy king

The King of Immortals can no longer write when he meets a woman 😭, what did Feng Nu write in that chapter?

The loser fairy Wang Wen is so obscene 😒

The Immortal Monk King asked you about your origins, but you wanted to never reveal your Confucian heritage. You could just say that your hometown was destroyed by dark creatures. You had to go back and forth with the same sentence as in the skit and just didn't say it. 🙂🙂🙂

The introduction doesn't look like a perfect style that covers the sky. I believe it even if you say it's a prehistoric style.

The five-color divine light is of no use. The weapons in the trilogy are basically used when showing off. Basically, you use the weapon twice and then the avenue screams, and then you pick up the grapefruit and eat my Heavenly Emperor Fist. All the five-color divine light weapons are wiped out and directly enter the second stage 🤔

I've probably read the first few chapters, and the introduction looks awesome, but I personally don't think it matches the content very well. To defeat a supreme-level monk, you can actually use five-color divine light. It's true that you can use a cannon to kill mosquitoes! Absorbing the innate Five Elements Formation and actually practicing hard for decades? The protagonist is already at the level of an Immortal King, so what's the point of practicing hard for decades? As monks at the same level as the Immortal King, no matter how awesome the Immortal Hate King is, he can't come up behind you quietly, can he? But you were scared to death! Why be creepy? I don't understand why I write it like this. Hey, it's submissive.

It's so nonsense. A person who time travels is the Immortal King. Why don't you write about a person who time travels and is an Immortal Emperor and a strong person who sacrifices to the Tao? All the protagonists in fan fiction are the process of training from weak mortals to become strong step by step? Experience and grow? It's completely a cheating and brainless novel.

You have reached the level of the Immortal King and you still need to use external objects to improve your cultivation. Are you such a rubbish as an Immortal King? The cultivation of other great saints relies on enlightenment. No wonder you, an Immortal King, cannot defeat a true immortal. You are a rubbish Immortal King.

The compositions written by nursery school children are more sincere than this one

Returning the sand sculptures of Senior Qin Feng to Senior Qin Feng, they are all immortal kings. Returning to Senior, who has no name, is stupid.

There is no harem, no many children and many blessings

Author, can you stop the other book and update this one properly? After finishing this book, I will update another one. In fact, I personally think you should focus on this book. After all, more people read this book and more people like to read this book. If you update this book well and write it well, and update more every day, 8,000 words will be updated every day. When this book is finished, you can update the next book, and then there will be more people watching you lose. Wouldn't this help you accumulate a lot of book friends to read your books?

The supporting characters in the original work all had strong character to elevate the protagonist, but you don't have any of the strong character of the Immortal King! You definitely didn't study the original work carefully and were just perfunctory.

Second creation, if you don't know how to write about women, don't touch them. If you write about women, you will be written as a stupid dog.

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