Become a Saint in Martial Arts, Start by Adding Points in Martial Arts Every Day

It's a normal story, no father, no mother, only a sister and a house. Offended the gang, became a disciple, and the martial arts school began to take off. Everything else is okay, there are too many daily things to write about, because it is so easy to get a little bit of freedom every day. As a result, the author could only write daily articles. Just ten days after joining the martial arts school, he began to arrange various tasks for the protagonist, interact with supporting characters, etc., Without any free time.

After reading a few chapters, it reads quite smoothly.

😁 Born from a humble background and as strong as an ant, he dared to take advantage of gang loan sharks and run away with his sister. I have read dozens of similar novels about martial arts training in different worlds, and the protagonist of this book is the most knowledgeable.

The Zhou family is a bit too strong. The hatred comes out of nowhere. Of course your senior brother is good to you. You can easily destroy the Zhong family without being invincible. Instead of hating this and that, provoking enemies before you are still young (I looked at each other when I saw the county magistrate, and I will definitely meet him later)

I can't eat it, so wouldn't it be boring if I had to add a younger sister😅

Can't it be faster to enter the country? With the point-adding system, you have to explore on your own as a novice at the beginning, and it's hard not to collapse.

The beginning is a bit outrageous. I am an amateur with no martial arts and can only train for ten days at most. It affects the gang's reputation. If I don't repay the 50 tael loan, I will be offered a reward of 1,000 taels. I can't understand this idea if I put myself in someone else's shoes.

The pig's horns are made of iron and running water.

I don't know which book it is copied from, the plot is almost exactly the same and even the names of the martial arts have not been changed.

How come the character's name is so similar to that of Gou Zhengwu Sheng in the World? Is it written by the studio?

The writing is fluent and does not stress the level. However, the Blackwater Gang leader and the protagonist do not have a life-and-death feud. It is just the younger brother who caused trouble. Such a potential protagonist is not so extreme at all. Apologize with the utmost sincerity. Hani is a normal person. It feels a bit unreasonable.

It seems that it is still G, and there is an additional father-in-law at the starting point.

In fact, it was originally written that three months later, there would be a life-and-death contest and killing people in the ring, which would be more satisfying. Then the story about Zhou Shun would be used to stimulate the protagonist not to be complacent. Three months later, he would secretly kill the county magistrate's son, and another three months later, he would kill the county magistrate. This would be more fun! Six months is too long. It feels like trivial matters or other unexpected things happen in the middle, and it's not that fun anymore.

I have read it on qq, and it is considered to be a relatively good one among novice authors. There are normal-level geniuses in the book (the boss of a violent organization has to practice martial arts for 60/70 years before he can conquer the world), but the protagonist has only been practicing martial arts for 2 years and has reached this point. Upgrading is like drinking water. If this is still considered a downgrade, then other books will not have to live. The plot is also okay. There is no particularly brainless villain. The only setback for the protagonist is that his senior brother was oppressed by the county magistrate next door, but he immediately returned with revenge after dozens of chapters. The emotional drama is also relatively smooth, there is no bloodshed/no hero saving the beauty, and the writing is not like a new author. In general, I give it 90 points out of 100.

Thank you all readers, I wish all readers good luck and may all your wishes come true! ! 😀😀

It's getting more and more procrastinating. The last few dozen chapters are all about daily life. It's not that you can't write about daily life, but it's just too much and too watery. If the quality continues to be the same in the future, I'll have to abandon it.

The plot is a bit cliched, but the protagonist's image is established, which is quite enjoyable to watch.

I don't know what went wrong when I published it, which resulted in a lot of duplicate content! ! ! !

The protagonist's golden finger is to get one attribute point a day, which means that time is fundamental. What the protagonist needs most is time. This is the most fundamental principle. In fact, in the plot of the entire book, the protagonist does not leave time for himself at all, so he can use the golden finger very smoothly, but the protagonist has to force himself and does not leave himself a way out. This can show the protagonist's character and gambler's psychology. The protagonist vividly explains how a gambler is made. So the protagonist's use of golden fingers feels very mindless. Conflict is of course necessary, but how you choose to resolve the conflict is yours to choose. And the protagonist chooses the most dangerous one every time, leaving no room for himself every time. The protagonist just doesn't leave time for himself when he needs the most time. This is the reason why I can't stand it. And the protagonist has a bit of a childish mentality, and his view of the problem is too one-sided. He even pursues the chivalrous and righteous style, and the thoughts he expresses are that of Batman. He decides what is right and wrong, and judges the evil. Of course, as long as the protagonist does not encounter it, he will not take the initiative to do it. This is the difference from Batman. And the important thing is said three times, the protagonist does not kill women, the protagonist does not kill women, the protagonist does not kill women 🤭

It's not the Yakuza style, it's too weak and too procrastinating.

There are no high-level outputs, no high-level monsters, secret realms, and the resources needed by high-level warriors still rely on agricultural farming. Now that the protagonist is trapped in the dust, everything in the world will be bad because I am among you, and you are among me. It is full of compromises, and it is not a cool novel, and it returns to the old path of traditional martial arts. Without spiritual energy, demons and ghosts, how can they transcend the realm of mortals? Now it's awkward. The law of dynasty cycle is here again. The Xiao family dynasty and the clan members can no longer become the Xiaoyao Emperor.

Is it coming to an end? I will become a saint soon.

The protagonist is almost bullied to death by thugs and doesn't dare to kill anyone. What else, author, do you want to write about troubled times?

It's good-looking, very self-disciplined, dedicated to practicing martial arts, and a protagonist who values ​​love and justice. He always puts cultivation first. I like it very much.

Come back and write when you're done, don't be a eunuch

Passed, not too poisonous, but not good-looking

There are some minor flaws in the early stage. Although the protagonist cheats, he is very step-by-step. He does not have any trump cards or hidden tricks, which means he does not have the ability to flip the table. He can only endure it when he is wronged. I don't know if it will improve in the future. Anyway, I think this kind of writing is not very friendly to impatient readers. Nowadays, some authors don't think much about how to attract people in the early stage. When they start a book, they first consider how to suppress the protagonist to ensure that the book can be longer. They are afraid that the hook will be too big and the book will collapse. I can't say that this is wrong, but to score people, this requires skill and understanding of oneself.

Does it count to come back and update as you said?