Detective Conan: The Unorthodox General Store

Did the author only read other Detective Conan fanfiction before writing this novel? The plot doesn't make sense.

Since the main character is named Banjou, the Detective Boys could commission a mission about Kamen Rider; bringing in a confused Sento Kiryu for a crossover would be quite interesting 😁. Or, Fuuto Detective: The Two-Colored Monster would also be good 😍

The part where Ai just wakes up was a bit awkward, the rest was barely okay.

... The police station offered a 100,000 yen reward, and the protagonist carried it all in a sack? What? Did the police station give him only coins?

I don't like this author's Ai at all; in fact, I find her a bit annoying.

The story starts with Akemi Miyano coming to request a job, and then she dies within two chapters. What's the point of reading this?

Conan is obviously causing trouble, aren't you going to teach him a lesson?

Given Matsumoto Sayuri's love-obsessed nature, it's no wonder she could be portrayed as Pan Qiaoyun.

How about a collaboration with Cat's Eye or Lupin III?

Manjou Tachibana, you might as well just become a Kamen Rider; your name suits Kamen Rider perfectly. Secondly, I have to mention that Miyano Akemi disappeared at the beginning. I thought she was still alive because of the request from Miyano Akemi, but oh dear, she's gone in the next second.