My Favorite Virtual Idol Is the One Who Has a Crush on Me

Alas, I am not allowed to write about smelling shoes, not allowed to write about Niao Niao, not allowed to write about m, and not allowed to write about aluminum barrels. Then what should I do if I only know how to write?👊😭👊

The ultimate fantasy belongs to yes. The real content may be the happy cohabitation life of the boss you rewarded and his little boyfriend ()

There is absolutely no need to write like that in Chapter 14. Later, it was mentioned that there were men present and the male protagonist and Xu Tong. Is it equivalent to changing the body and talking to the girlfriend from the previous life? It's also a bit awkward I really like the writing style of gravity distortion, but my defense is too weak, so I can only give up this book, which is a pity

After reading more than a dozen chapters, let's not talk about the writing for now, just the characterization and plot arrangement. The charm of the male protagonist is somewhat lacking and he is not very likable. In addition, the awareness of lightning protection is somewhat poor: Whether it is the female protagonist in the first few chapters as the anchor, giving the live broadcast room audience (a male protagonist and a character who is later revealed to be female but not explained at all in the previous article) "similar to a girlfriend's attitude" (original text), or the female protagonist in more than ten chapters is almost naked from the waist up but there are men around, these are obvious lightning points, at least I can't stand it. In addition, there is also a description of the heroine who no longer cares about the "audience" who speaks like the hero after moving to the hero's house, which can easily be judged as a substitute thunder or a mask thunder. All I can say is wish the author good luck.

Can it be faster? This is really nice

The male protagonist seems to show a strong self-destructive tendency. The characters in the plot have neglected health management for a long time, and deliberately ignored various physical discomforts. From his eager and resistant attitude towards intimacy, to his intentional or unintentional failure in the face of success, to the plot where he is injured and goes to the hospital, it is like a psychological defense mechanism in the face of suppressed pain, and he obtains a short-term emotional release through self-destruction. We have noticed that highly sensitive and perfectionistic personalities are more likely to criticize themselves and interpret minor setbacks as catastrophic. At the same time, this behavior pattern may stem from the abnormal perception of "pain is safety" formed in childhood, and a false sense of control is obtained through self-punishment. Resolve psychological pain through physical pain.

I have finished reading the latest chapter of this book, and I feel that the beginning is quite good and interesting. But I feel that the title is a bit inconsistent with the book. It means that it is roughly in place but lacks the ability to attract readers. Readers who clicked in based on this name generally thought it was the kind of erotic, pulling back and forth and more relaxed love life, but the overall tone of this book is not such a relaxed one, it is a bit similar to a yandere novel. Therefore, if the title of this book does not match the book, it is easy to lose some potential readers. It is best to change the title to a better one.

At present, it seems that this book has probably been cut, so let's make a general review of the whole book. In a word, I personally think that the first 70 chapters are basically readable, but in fact, it is not so good after that. To be honest, I feel that the first 20 chapters or so are really good. Especially on the rainy night in the dozen or so pictures, Yewu or Linye's shuttle back and forth has a strange feeling. I think this is very good. It is obvious that the author has carefully polished the first chapters, but the author is a novice author after all and cannot keep the updates stable, so he pulled it. I read it and found that many people say that this business life is not lovable enough. I personally think that the second half of the book may have a bit of a character breakdown. It is very good when writing about Ye Wu's hallucination Lin Ye. It is okay to just look at Lin Ye's character, but I don't know why. The author basically did not reflect Lin Ye's character in the later part, and the front and back are divided. It's just that the two people Ye Wu and Lin Ye are mixed together. I feel that they are very vivid and three-dimensional, but in your own book later, you have the feeling of Ye Wu. In this way, I feel that the first part of the book may still be a kind of youth pain literature, but the second part has really become that kind of twisted novel. The breaking point I wanted was not like that. There was one breaking point in the whole book when Amamiya confessed later. But in fact, what I have always wanted until now is Yego's reconciliation with his previous life, but it is obvious that the author did not write what I wanted to see. This is very important, otherwise there would be no Sharo line. What I want to see is that Yewu, Lin Ye and Sharo reconcile, whether it is a confession or whatever, but it is obvious that now Yewu is still escaping. He only thinks that because of the bond in his previous life, he can't bear to see that this time, and then gives him the medical expenses to let her get cured and just get out of his world. Escape can't solve the problem and it can't bring happiness. And I have a theory that if someone else writes this book, the author may have said that he could not help Sarao with his medical expenses, and then Sarao searched everywhere, and finally found Nogo and made a confession or something. If this is the case, it would be too classic. Well, to put it all in perspective, I still have one sentence that the author wrote in the later stage and failed to read in the early stage. The author wanted to express a lot of things but they were not well integrated.

It's really well written. I suggest you change the name. It takes a certain amount of courage to even open this book.

Instilled with Poison Teacher Meow, Poison Teacher will continue to complete the meow for me, even if it is unfinished, I will have to finish the meow, otherwise I will torture you by making strange noises every day, meow.

Well written, my stomach is starting to hurt

As the title says, the current problem with this book is that the author's idea of ​​advancing the plot is good, but there are some problems when it comes to details. For example, the sentence in the latest chapter, "But she should be quite happy by the look on her face," is completely out of common sense and is just for the sake of creating misunderstandings... The second point is that the interaction between the heroine and the hero is not enough at the moment. I can understand that the author is holding something back, but the current perception seems not to be intense enough. The distortion of the heroine is more on the supporting characters. From a story perspective, it enriches the image of the heroine, but as a web article that needs to be read, it is too bland. It can be said that the author's outline concept is good, but the details are slightly less polished, and the author's excellent writing style can temporarily suppress these problems. And I am just expressing my personal opinions, please don't bully me online😢 I hope the author writes better and better

What is this guy talking about

I'm afraid the author's current performance won't be enough to earn the follow-up order of 100, but it's quite surprising that he can keep writing so much on this subject. When I first started reading, I thought the author couldn't keep going and had to cut it. It's quite surprising to be able to write 300,000 words and put it on the shelf. I just finished coding 4,000 words today, and I'm lying in bed to read your VIP chapter. I will follow up, come on🤗

After watching it for a while, I felt a little bit addictive, maybe it's my problem 1 The male protagonist inexplicably abandoned school, and inexplicably became a cartoonist (but has no talent at all), so how to support yourself, who can you rely on to hold you back, why not pursue your dreams after having a stable job. 2 The male protagonist has been watching the female protagonist's live broadcast for so long, but he didn't notice anything about her speaking style, movement habits, appearance, etc. 3 In the following chapters, the heroine is naked 4 I can't say it. I always feel that the logic is very flawed. Many of them are just written just for this theme, without considering the rationality at all.

It's a tonic, isn't it really a eunuch? Is there a book club or something like that?

Teacher Poison has been reincarnated into another world. I mourn deeply, but I am very happy to eat.

Let's talk about the shortcomings directly, I don't like this heroine very much. I used to think that having an abnormal personality was nothing, but looking at the heroine's actions, she was still too anthropomorphic, and getting close to such people would have no good consequences, such as her twitter classmates or the protagonist's editor colleagues. This is one of the shortcomings, the heroine is not good. The second disadvantage is that the protagonist is completely passive. His fault wasn't what he did, but what he basically didn't do. For online novels, such a protagonist is aggrieved. In fact, it is not a big shortcoming, but it is destined that this book can only be a niche. I still want to emphasize that it is not pleasant to watch, but the single female protagonist does make sense. By tying these two gods together, it is better not to harm other female characters who have a better look.

I have read more than 80 chapters, and I can always feel that the author's writing is very utilitarian, with an obvious intention to please readers, and to make a living for the sake of making a living. There is almost no thing or style of my own, and it is seriously homogeneous with just grabbing a book on the roadside. Nowadays, there are a lot of online articles. I think that if an author wants to survive, he must first write his own style and write his own things. Authors and readers should respect each other and attract each other, rather than just trying to please.

I haven't watched it for two months and I still want to die. I thought I would see the end. . .