Pirate: I Am an Archaeologist, Not the Pirate King

A little trash at the level of colonel in the branch finally got a devil fruit that could change his destiny. Instead of quickly finding a place to practice and improve his strength, he was "extremely clever" and kidnapped a naval officer. He ran to the island where the Celestial Dragons hunted and called him "dark under the lamp"... You really think that the Navy Celestial Dragons and the Knights of God are dead! The author's brain circuit is more novel than Patrick Star.

Set up a Qiu Da character and play house every day.

Isn't this fruit too useless? The animal type is not mainly about recovery and durability. You should change it to the superman type. The writing is not pleasant and boring at all.

Robin prevents the protagonist from eating the Devil Fruit because the Devil Fruit is a relic of history. How funny.

Animal-type fruits can be used for sit-ups. As long as you don't take other people's ultimate moves and are not killed instantly, they will only vomit blood. Look at Kaido and Luffy. Kaido also suffered a lot of damage and was finally knocked down by the island's big fist. Wano fought for a long time. Everyone was doing sit-ups and couldn't be beaten at all, except for the instant kill.

How can I say it doesn't look good. Can we not write plots that cannot be saved? Isn't it annoying to write about things even though they can't be saved?

Two poisonous points: The biggest fear in fan fiction is to add original characters other than the protagonist. The second is that the final fantasy beast species is too abstract and has no mythological direction.

Is the writing good enough? Write a novel. It's not prose. Grinding and chirping. It's been 10 years. Timeline Wang Lufei is about to go to sea. You haven't reached the rank of general yet. The system is useless

After eating the fruit of the phantom beast species, it doesn't turn into a blood cow. Instead, it becomes crippled by using a skill. Evaluation: The original fruit "Jiuyan" feels like a mentally retarded fruit, not even as good as Ka Er's Nuo Nuo fruit.

First, in terms of combat power: First of all, as a time traveler, after traveling for such a long time, I don't want to improve my combat power first, but instead blindly pursue history. Secondly, the strength is unknown. The protagonist feels very strong for a while, but then no one can handle him. And in the so-called two years, I have only seen authors who increased the duration of training for the protagonist in disguise. This is the first time I have seen him do the opposite. Second, in terms of plot: the protagonist "Demon King" did not get the nickname randomly. He has always said that he is just pursuing history. As a result, every time he goes to an island, he will "bring" disaster, chaos and battle, and the homogeneity is serious. Also, if you are writing original characters, try to restore their personalities as much as possible.

The shortcomings of the first few chapters are nothing to say. After reading Chapter 76, I no longer want to read anymore. The anger builds up slowly. Beat the beauties and let the men go? Are you a gay author? Once you get to Chapter 76, you will become very angry.

Don't be led astray by the book review below The adventure of the protagonist, Robin and some accessories is in a sense the original plot we want to watch in One Piece

Already invested, will the author write when will it be published? Come on, come on, come on💪

Does the author write about the plots of the era of great depression that are updated in current comics?

The writing is quite beautiful, but why are there no results?

All animal systems show the characteristics of per capita blood cows. In the early stage, Luffy was pierced by the old golden hook, sucked into a mummy, and resurrected directly with full blood after drinking water. The leopard did sit-ups and could not be beaten to death. Jhin and Quinn behind were sucked into mummies by the green bull and stabbed through each other, but they did not die. One is more bloody than the other

The plot always takes some inexplicable directions. The protagonist always feels very pretentious, but also very low-level.

The writing is quite interesting. It's just short of a major update. Any opinions will be ignored in the face of massive updates 😳

In this book, the main character practices life-returning and turns people into white energy::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

I wrote it wrong. Why was he a marshal during the Warring States Period? How did Qingzhi become a general?