Take a Loan and Become a Magical Girl

Lao Ren seems to often emphasize family affection in his works.

If my wish could come true, even if I change my gender and become a beautiful magical girl, I would then have to work eight hours a day, only have two days off a week, only have a two-hour lunch break, and can only get three times my salary for overtime work! Facing the despair of the world, I am willing to become a witch😭

The evaluation of this god-man world's oppression of people made the leader cry when he saw it, and the emperor was shocked. Osvaldo came to engage in interstellar colonization and was regarded as a savior. Arasaka Company was named a conscientious company of the year. Shirojio came here and directly became the kindest emperor in history. P Club players became moral models. Buli people shook their heads when they saw it. Will anyone who can survive in this world really turn into a witch because of Kyubey's despair?

From the current point of view, as a protagonist with moral character in the early 21st century, although the incubator affects his thinking, he still has a little bit of humanity (I think, but this should be regarded as an abnormal individual), but in essence he is still the most moral character currently on the stage, and the tolerance of people in this world to the most despair is much higher than that of people in the 21st century.

It's hard to imagine that this is a subject matter under the East Asian cultural system. You can't even do this yourself, yet you still use it to seduce others 😰

The writing is very good, and it matches my experience of being a Kyubey.

The plot progress is a bit slow. According to Kyubey's routine, it should not be to make a wish and then directly become a magical girl. I feel full of hope, and then try to show off and get slapped in the face, only to find out that I am just a weakling. Being chased all over the city, I can only turn on the invisibility. Then I find that the magic power of Kyubey magic girls will not recover naturally. When I return home in panic, I find that my home has been turned into ruins and my mother is gone. I turn into a witch out of despair and have Kyubey recycle the energy. Why do I still need to raise it?

For the first time, I hope that Kyubey will contract a magical girl here. Sure enough, evil beasts also have a world where evil beasts want to exist. Kyubey even becomes a saint in some worldviews.

Just like you can rob a black shop, why can't you rob other people? Anyway, this is the only way to break the moral bottom line of cyberpunk. You can simply go door to door to collect protection fees, go to the poor areas to collect them (the rich have a lot of money, but the poor have a steady stream of money), and if you can't pay, they will tear it down and sell it, and quickly get the garden to pay off the loan. You ask me, they are all poor, where do they get their money? Although people have no money, don't they know how to borrow it? If you really can't use people's brains to mine, I call it efficient money-making.

In the past, the books on the list were all hot-blooded and royal, but now each one on the list is darker than the last. Even the old Gu people on the roadside were dug out and became popular. It seems that the social environment has changed, and the books that everyone likes to read have also changed 😵

Unless the subject matter you write is new enough to open a separate section for you, it will all be written by others, so why is it not common? It's hard to guess. The end of the volume blames the people who don't like the plot for cutting the book. Then you might as well think about it, why are there not as many people praising you as scolding you? The money spent by readers who can accept the failure of wl is money, but the money spent by readers who cannot accept the failure of wl is not money?

I can only say that the writing at the end was too bad, and then the most important heroine was written to death. It is natural to be scolded. The last few pictures were a bit of a literary problem, and the witch transformation was still delayed. And the most flawed thing is that the people in the bad land folded a few paper cranes in order to save themselves. It is for the people in distress. The only possible way to save yourself is whether you fold it or not. It is just people in despair who make the last struggle and then die. Everything everyone does is meaningful, and their own will is passed on. Do you think I will burst into tears watching this? So young, so disgusting, so abstract. Everyone's death is meaningless, because the bad land has not changed at all. They did not stand up in despair, did not help the people in distress, and did not help the monster gang. Just saving themselves can make the author so moved. The death of the heroine is also meaningless, because no one has inherited her will. It cannot be said that it is meaningless. After death, it is still very meaningful. At least it can protect the bad land. It's really not worth it. The heroine can't die for such a group of people. It's really not worth it for her. Those who deserve to die will not die, and those who do not deserve to die will die.

It seriously hurt the feelings of a ten-year-old bookworm like me, and I still can't get over it. I can't help it anymore. I went to Cat's and read a magical girl book. It really pissed me off.

The author may think that the real protagonist of your book is qb, which is absolutely correct. But the fact is that Wei Luo's sense of substitution as the female protagonist is much higher than that of the male protagonist who is a complete "tool man", so in fact the core protagonist in readers' perception is Wei Luo. Then if you write Wei Luo to death, don't blame the readers for being so resentful. What will readers see if the protagonist is gone? Who do you rely on to be happy? Air?

In any case, your bad performance has nothing to do with anyone else, so don't put the problem on the fans. 😅

I saw Chapter 99 but didn't read it. When the author said something that no one had ever seen before, "I turn my broken body into fire," I thought about raising it first. Most people could see that there was a knife, but they didn't know how far it could cut. I still had illusions, and maybe after 100% despair, I would turn into a witch and hang up in the wild, and then raise another one. As a result, after reading the comment section today, it turned out to be true. It's so well-written, it's unexpected and reasonable, but I didn't expect it to be eunuched so quickly. It's very sad. After reading the epilogue at the end of the volume, you can probably understand what story the author wants to write, but the writing is very bad. It seems that the content is probably that the author said that he wanted to write a story about resistance, revolution, etc., And then he turned around and picked up an underage girl, pointed a knife at her blood and said to me, "Look, red."

Willow: "‌Let all witches in the past, present and future disappear in all world lines" QB😰I am super, Yuan

To put it bluntly, I don't think the writing is bad, it's just that it was written without consideration. If you don't want to write a cool article, then don't upgrade, just let the protagonist be a QB to spread the miracle of cheap wholesale. Just let the protagonist be completely dehumanized, just like a real QB, to give miracles to the oppressed bottom people in this desperate world, and then watch the absurd tragedy and comedy of each "protagonist" self-destructing like fireworks. The real problem in Willow's chapter is not that the main character was written to death, but that too much writing and ink were wasted to write the upgrade, so that she was written to death even though she had already created an emotional connection with the readers. This is a straightforward way to tell readers that your emotional connection is nothing. My "pursuit" is the highest priority, but online writing is essentially a service industry. Readers read your book not to resonate with the author spiritually, but to find something that can be read to briefly escape reality. Finally, the protagonist becomes a human being. I think this is a failure among failures. The logic of the protagonist's behavior is already not QB enough, and a person is created to strengthen the protagonist's humanity. If the author has to obtain a person for self-projection, then my suggestion is to directly discard the QB setting and don't create an inhuman protagonist from the beginning.

What a useless contracted beast, he actually wants the girl to work hard to become a magical girl.

To put it bluntly, the author said that he couldn't bear the negative comments, but in fact the biggest blow was the average subscription of 1,500. If the average subscription had been higher, the author might have gritted his teeth and could still write. After all, he could make money, but the average subscription of 1,500 shows that this novel is not that popular. Now it is even more so because the protagonist needs to be changed to the naked eye and a group of people have to leave. It is not difficult to understand that the book was cut off under such circumstances.

Let me say something for Willow. Although I don't know why the author would think that a story like tragedy would be very romantic. In fact, tragedy is not romantic at all. There is nothing romantic about a story about a little girl being forced to death. Okay, let's do it. In fact, I wanted to curse, but after thinking about it, I let it go. There is no need to be angry. I have been following up since the 100,000-word mark. Whether it is the introduction, tags or content, it can be seen from the beginning that this is a relaxing story. From the time when the author planned to write the heroine to death Then the whole story began to change its tone, and the heroine still used Madoka's template. Anyone who has watched Madoka knows that Madoka finally became a god, which further strengthened the reader's subconscious belief that the heroine will not die because of Kyubey's wish. Until the last chapter, the hanging heart finally died. Cyberpunk and magical girls, despair and hope, are obviously a very good subject matter. It doesn't matter if the author writes tragedy. After all, hope needs tragedy and despair to set off, rather than tragedy followed by tragedy. After despair is a deeper despair, and hope is swallowed up by despair.

Alas, after all this time, I still feel that this book is a pity. I don't blame the author. It's just that the quality of netizens is such that they also like to point fingers. Alas, I just hope that the author will publish a new book as soon as possible. I will continue to support it.

I have money to play 2077, but I still think about this book when I play the game. Author, why did you get sick after writing it? Compared with the previous level, it is just like nonsense spoken when you have a fever. The ending of Weiluo cannot be forgotten, but Weiluo before accepting the commission from the Demon Realm really cannot be forgotten.

I feel like there's something wrong with some people's focus. Isn't it just that the main character is dead? As for being so concerned, this book has been cut. One day I will also write a book in which the main character is killed. You must go crazy.

In my favorite novel, Return, the main character dies very hastily, but it's good-looking. It's fine as long as it's good-looking. It doesn't matter if it's the main character or not, please do something.

Fucked Zhang Weiluo

As people often said in the past, if you think the writing is not good, then go and write a book with a higher score than the author.

😰If you keep it, you will die.

At first, I thought the order was a bit reversed. There was a difference between a magical girl summoning a human male clone in the middle and unlocking the summoned beast clone when the main body is a human male. Until I suddenly remembered the ancient Yuanzu Clow card. One of the early characters in it said that the disguised identity is different from the main body's personality, which is really troublesome... Then the main character sacrifices to the sky and changes to the next protagonist. I remember the last time I saw something similar in the starting point, it was to die and live... That situation haha, it's a pity.

Can the author continue to update? I'll go get you some sponsorship, I'll get some people over here