
Begin Liver Experience as a Martial Arts Apprentice
从武馆学徒开始肝经验
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 510k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- High-Martial World
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Not talking about the quality of writing
I just want to ask why you rely on plug-ins but risk your life to repay the martial arts gym. What is the explanation for this operation?
I am about to leave the city for no reason After leaving the city, I met a strange woman After the battle, I had to wait until the mission was completed before I could experience the post-battle experience upgrade Then when I was fighting, were I angry? After returning to the city, I said I was afraid that there would be too many enemies and suddenly came to kill Li Er Just for this one million But didn't this Li Er break up with Qian San Is he the enemy of the enemy
The author has something to say
First of all, thank you for your support! If you can point out any shortcomings in the content of the novel, I will read it. Then there is the content modification, which will be almost completed in the next two days. Due to the lack of polish, the previous content was dry, and I feel sorry for myself. Finally, please read on! Please read on! Please read on! This is really important to me! Please take care of the data for the new book issue. I would like to thank all readers! ! 😡😡
It feels like there are a bit too many explanations, many of which are explained by the narrator. Normally the explanation is driven by the plot, rather than written directly. It feels like writing an outline. For example, of the 42 chapters I have seen so far, the first half of the chapter is meaningless, or the writing technique is not suitable for online articles. There are too many things to explain. What we are watching is a story, a story that revolves around the protagonist. Some things need to be explained based on some of the protagonist's experiences, or other people's experiences, rather than explaining everything from a God's perspective. For example, the aggregate incident can be told from Liu Yi's perspective, such as through a conversation with the security guard, or through a conversation between Liu Yi and the protagonist. After all, Liu Yi already understands it, and he will inform the protagonist. For example, when Qian San leaves, it must be seen from Qian San's perspective. For example, when Qian San says he is leaving, the bodyguard asks his subordinates what to do, and Qian San says not to worry about it. Or Liu Yi told the protagonist that Qian San was gone, blah blah blah. The same goes for the third point.