Samsara Paradise: Guardian of the World

It's not worth reading. Firstly, there are more nonsense than the main text. Secondly, the protagonist is mainly lucky. He doesn't focus on luck to build skills around it. He insists on using magic masters and techniques. That's it.,,,,,,

I've read everyone's comments, and quite a few people say that the profession of the protagonist is too shady. There is no way, mainly because in the original book, there are only two professions that can lead to the road to the highest level. One is the law destroyer and the other is the star apostle. So in order for the protagonist to have the opportunity to reach the highest level, the protagonist's career must be set in a negative light. Otherwise, how can we open up a third road to the highest level? I have also read everyone's suggestions for the development of the protagonist, and I will adopt those reasonable suggestions.

Looking at the introduction, the protagonist should not be short of resources, so he should have five attributes improved at the same time, and he should take at least two technical routes, and go to the extreme realm like the original Su Xiao. I like this very much, powerful, thick blood, full resistance, no shortcomings,

Ever since I read the book Sanctuary Paradise, I felt that the other novels were pretty good and not so abstract. I personally gave him a new name and called it Puppet Paradise. His author is also very abstract. I said his protagonist looked like a puppet and he got angry (¬_¬") and even bit the original book and said, "In the end, it's all a dog raised in the paradise."

See Chapter 6. Many places are taken for granted. (I cut out the chicken talisman instead of making an identical one and putting it on. The protagonist group is the first to come into contact with this shield. How could they not know that this thing is missing a hole?) (The main character has just learned magic and wants to use the sealing technique to seal the two talismans so that the villains of the protagonist group can't find their place. What is the protagonist's strength?)

If you want to obtain the increased potential tier, you must meet the second requirement

Like the title, the description is like an outline, like a primary school student's composition

There are too many elements that make up the protagonist's abilities, including techniques, all elements, and world-related abilities that may appear later (personal guess). Not only is it difficult to describe in words and cannot highlight the key points, but also for the protagonist himself, does he really have the time and energy to comprehend and explore so many abilities? Take the more famous characters in the original text as examples 1. Solomon Dark Element + Sickle Technique + Undead Element There are only 3 abilities. Among them, the Undead Element does not require much time and energy, as long as the resources are sufficient, and the compatibility between the Undead Element and the Dark Element is quite high. 2. Ruthless Brother, four techniques, pure technique flow, nothing to say 3. Thain's undead system plus the self-destruction of the sun. Only the sun needs development and energy, and the undead system purely requires resources 4. Hao Mei's swordsmanship + world thunder + luck (this is not sure) The only thing that can be developed is swordsmanship. Although the world thunder is strong, it does not take too much time and energy. If you can, you can, and if you can't, you can't. It is difficult to do anything. Now I find that there is no one who can reach most of the characters in the later stage. The abilities are quite pure, almost only 2-3 types. Looking back at the protagonist, the protagonist says he wants to become a magician (seems like it's all elements?), And there are at least 7 or 8 types of elements. Each element can almost be used as an independent ability, and there is so much room for development. Moreover, different elements can be fused together. The more elements there are, the more difficult it is to fuse. In addition to techniques, there are 8-9 abilities, and it is very necessary to combine techniques with different elements. To be honest, if the author does not abandon some elements and wants to have them all, it is almost impossible. For example, the protagonist said that he wants to be a master , but in fact only two elements, fire and thunder, are used, and the other elements have almost no sense of existence. This will only make everything less refined. It is better to focus on 1-2 elements and techniques.

I saw a very familiar operation in the introduction.

1. Abnormal props 2. Abnormal benefits 3. Upgrading too quickly (5,6 levels in 10w words) 4. Being careless 5. Forcibly reducing intelligence 6. Far-fetched settings

I'm convinced, write about Naruto. You wrote several dialogues between the third generation and Orochimaru. It's so watery that it makes people sick.

Isn't this another Paradise fanfic without a heroine?

I feel like I've been missing a father since I was little. Can't I just call him Mr. Chen?

Author, you write too much nonsense

The author's writing style really needs to be improved, the content is a bit perfunctory, and the fighting is also very perfunctory.

You like to use sword skills so much, right? You can't use any of the eighteen weapons. Hey, I have to use a sword. Don't ask, just ask, it's cool. What makes a sword cool? You are a mage. Shouldn't you use a staff? A mage uses a sword? You are so powerful

The Trial World alone is just a bunch of crap and I can't stand it anymore.

I feel that the protagonist is like Su Xiao's nanny. It's not that he doesn't support building a good relationship with Su Xiao, but is it a bit excessive to give Su Xiao rewards other than tasks, as if the existence of the protagonist is a tool for Su Xiao to grow up more quickly. As for skills, I won't say much. I have read many posts and have already mentioned the problem.

I really can't stand it anymore, it's so watery. What a pure running account.

Is this playing the skill stream or the mage stream? If you play as a mage, you don't need to learn any swordsmanship, and you also need to have two forms of sword fighting. I don't think much about using techniques, I just use spells.

It's a big problem. Here it says Magic Master is level 40 and then it says level 45. After spending money, it still hasn't been upgraded. Also, Tianjuan here clearly says level 70, so why did it suddenly become level 60?