Forgotten Edge

Very well written. The plot is very comfortable to watch.

The writing is quite good, and the writing style is completely adequate. . However, the writing method is relatively ancient and is not suitable for the current novel market. Readers may find the pace too slow. It's like reading a paper novel from more than ten years ago, and it feels like the story is unfolding slowly.

If the author can follow the current way of writing novels, it shouldn't be a problem to sign a contract and put it on the shelves.

Thank you all readers for your love and support, and also thank you for your valuable opinions. Regarding the writing method, because I wrote purely by hand and then transcribed it on the computer, the book is about half complete now and it is too late to make changes. And I have always preferred this line-drawing style for so many years. It's not that I don't want to use the popular writing method now, but I'm really not good at it. After all, who would refuse if there is money to be made? But if I were to write like that, the effect might not be as good as it is now. I also know that my style is not suitable for the current online writing market, and I didn't get approved even once. But it doesn't matter, I can only do my best and write as long as it takes. As for what happens in the future, let's wait and see.