A Mortal’s Journey Through the Myriad Worlds, Starting with The Smiling, Proud Wanderer

But I still want to curse a few words. Left and right fight each other, left and right fight each other~! Let's fight each other! Jin Yong fights with each other because people only have two hands, which can only develop their bodies; with one more hand to hold weapons, there is more chance of winning! If you look at the fights between mortal cultivators, some of them fight each other at close range. Isn't it cool that your protagonist can hold weapons with both hands🐂🍺?                                                                                                                                                                                                                 " How good are you at fighting each other? Otherwise, you won't be able to figure out what the protagonist's whims are, and you will think that learning how to fight each other can be a treasure.      ：      1. After time travel, the system directly assigns an identity to the protagonist. It's just that the author was lazy and omitted the process of the protagonist, a gangster, establishing himself proudly. Just imagine, if each copy was assigned a favorable identity, it would be too disappointing! Isn't it more convenient for each boss's son to be directly arranged? Since he has all kinds of skills, heavenly materials and earthly treasures, then this time travel is too easy. He can become stronger while lying down. Of course, this book is not a big deal, but I don't recommend arranging identities. The underworld is very good and mysterious. As follows: "Wow, look, there is a god in the sky." "Oh, I know him, a relative of some escort agency, but I didn't expect this guy to be a god." It seems to me like bullshit. If you let the protagonist grow up, it would be OK if you just write about the protagonist who traveled through time and wanted to learn martial arts, and then write about how the protagonist gained a foothold in time through time and gained benefits. Why arrange a relative of the original character? You can also arrange passerby roles! I suspect that the reason you said you came to Xiaoao to let the protagonist grow up is actually just an excuse, because readers are all wondering what Xiaoao, a low-level martial artist, is doing. The author also said that The Swordsman has a sinister heart and can temper the protagonist, but there are still many good people in other worlds. Does the author want to make me laugh to death? Not to mention that there are many good people in other worlds. The protagonist doesn't even have a hair on his head. He can't even meet martial arts villains when he goes out. The bandits on the roadside are enough for the protagonist. Meeting good and bad people is not a matter of a single sentence from the author. If you want the protagonist to grow, even if the world is full of good people, you can make the protagonist fall into a cesspit as soon as he travels through time, so that the protagonist can fully feel the malice of the system, whether it is sinister enough, and whether it is enough for the protagonist to grow. 2. I see the protagonist learn to fight left and right. It's not that he can't learn it, but that after the protagonist learns this, he can use both hands together, which can increase the chance of winning? Same as those who cultivate immortality. People who have cultivated immortality are not like ordinary people who are limited by the human body. Even those who practice martial arts can use their energy to control objects. If you, a lowly martial artist, are fighting each other, they will hit you with a sword from 40 meters away.         ：       ， However, the main world you arranged is for cultivating immortals, so what readers want to see is the protagonist using magic weapons to pretend to be B, to pick up girls, to defeat the world, and finally to collect things that are useful to the protagonist. Rather than the protagonist going to the world of low-level martial arts before he has learned anything in the world of immortality, and then going through all kinds of hardships to learn a few things in the world of low-level martial arts, but not being able to pretend to be B, maybe you retort that the protagonist has defeated all the invincible opponents in the world and still doesn't pretend to be B?  Sorry! Not a bit pretentious. Readers are attracted by the title of your book because they want to see you practicing martial arts. If you use the martial arts from a low-level martial arts world to be invincible, it won't look that good to the readers, because the martial arts used by the protagonist are all local products, so you have to use something that is not available.       ？ Because you took the exciting plot line of cultivating immortals and practicing martial arts, and wrote it as the main plot line of the main character not cultivating immortals, and going to the low-level martial arts world to learn Wudang. So in the world we go to later, the protagonist of the strong world will be more restrained and aim to gain benefits. In the world of low-level martial arts, the purpose is to pretend to be cool and pick up girls, and martial arts secrets are just for the purpose.                                                                                                               <  The protagonist is having fun, achieving his goals, pretending to be good, having sex with girls, and reaping the benefits. If you write it like this, I think who said the world of low-level martial arts is boring. So it all depends on the way you write it. If the main plot you write is the protagonist becomes stronger, and you ask the protagonist to be low-level, you will definitely be scolded. If the focus is the game world, don't focus on the process of how the protagonist becomes stronger (here it refers to the dungeon world). The main world of mortals time span is hundreds of years, and the main line of becoming stronger is written around the mortal world. The dungeon world is to provide a capital that allows the protagonist to gain a foothold in the mortal world, and the dungeon can only play a supporting role. Since there is enough time, the Dungeon World's force span should not be too large. Otherwise, a dungeon world can make the protagonist become an immortal, and the plot of the "human world" as the main world's mortal world ends before it begins, which makes the main world redundant; unless you don't want to write about the human world and plan to go to the spiritual world or the fairy world.                                                                                                                                                                                                                     .

What the hell is Chapter 50 of Swordsman! Even if you are Dongfang Bubai, can you beat the monks who are in the Qi training stage?

I didn't see how the protagonist plundered the heavens. He went to a super low-level martial arts practice and practiced martial arts with gusto. He was very active in participating in the plot. He didn't know what he was going to do and would only follow the plot. This is equivalent to the reader being forced to read the original work again, but the original work has been condensed into dozens of chapters. I will teach the author how to plunder the heavens and travel to the heavens. First, go through this world in your mind and see if there is anything helpful to you. If This world uses gold and silver, so you want to exchange things from the world of immortality for gold and silver. Any pill can be exchanged for a large amount of gold and silver in the secular world of mortals, and then go to other worlds to use gold and silver to buy what you need. However, I don't see anything in Xiaoao Jianghu that is helpful to the protagonist. If you travel to Tian Long Babu, there may be something useful, such as the ice silkworm. The title of the book is "Plunder the Heavens", but the content is completely different. To sum it up, it is putting the cart before the horse. Writing this kind of subject matter, what readers like to see the most is the protagonist using the rich magic methods of immortal cultivators, or many weird spells and magic weapons to go to the martial arts fantasy world to show off and steal things, or go to those worlds with warcraft or monsters, with tough Control several big forces by means, and then reward the protagonist with strength-enhancing elixirs, etc., So that these forces can help the protagonist collect medicinal materials or monster materials, or some ores, and then sell them back to the world of immortality, becoming the villain of both worlds. Who the hell likes to watch you practice martial arts for dozens of chapters?

What is the protagonist doing in the first world? I watched it for a long time and didn't understand it. You said practicing martial arts to enhance strength, right? He would practice swordsmanship, sword practice, and boxing at another time? In my opinion, if it were me, I would either practice concealed weapons and horizontal kung fu; or I would practice internal strength and find better techniques. If you practice for a long time in such an unsystematic manner, you won't have any sense of substitution at all.

Only after Chapter 70 can you reach the first level of Qi Refining 🙂

The author is really into the world of cultivating immortals, even if he switched to martial arts to learn martial arts, he still spent more than 50 chapters writing about the world of martial arts.

All all all have all been all together. The following is just a complaint: The author really killed himself twice and missed the opportunity to make amends. First of all, most readers came to your mortal starting setting. As soon as you started, you practiced Qi at level 0 and entered Swordsman. Then you wrote more than 50 chapters, driving away the readers who came here as mortals.                          Forget it, just come back and write 50 chapters of the mortal story. It will be ok after the protagonist reaches the 4th or 5th level of Qi training before traveling through time. In this way, when new readers see the non-immortal beginning, even if they don't like it, they can skip it and continue watching the mortal story; what's the result? The author, a mortal, didn't write a few chapters before he changed the world again after practicing Qi Level 1!         ，，，，，                                                            At least you have a magic weapon, you can practice Qi at the 4th or 5th level through low martial arts to have the fun of cultivating immortals and practicing martial arts! The first level of Qi training is less exciting. The only remedy now is for the author to persevere, go back and write more mortal plots next time, and then think about how to improve the next copy. As long as you measure up, word of mouth will gradually accumulate.

It's 50 chapters long, so it's hard to comment.

It's a laugh-out-loud joke. It ends quickly and I don't have any desire to watch it.

It's a long and arrogant article, and there is no distinction between priority and priority. Let alone a fan plus the heavens, even the pure heavens should not write like this. The low-level world is just a novice experience, mainly to look at the world of quickly plundering advanced resources. If a world is written in detail, it must be able to advance to two or three levels in this world. Fans plus Zhutian have more restrictions on the length of Zhutian. If you write about mortal fandom, it is a copy of the main world to be downloaded. It is impossible to write it in a way that has nothing to do with the main world. In terms of the mortal realm, Zhutian can have up to five worlds during the mortal world. Each world must be written with the same rewarding feeling as the copy.