He's Obviously a Dark Wizard, but He Has to Say That He's the Holy Mother?

I personally like wizard-style novels. This novel is good because after reading it for eighty or ninety chapters, there are no messy scenes of women licking dogs. But. . . The flaws are also huge. First of all, the protagonist is a virgin. I initially thought it was just the title of the book, but it actually showed the function of the plug-in. Who knew he was the real Holy Mother? . . The protagonist always resists internally during many dark wizard experiments, or even has to find out whether the other person is kind or not when doing a killing mission. Of course, in order to satisfy the protagonist's motherly heart, the killers the protagonist accepts are all bad guys. For the teammates the protagonist deals with, the protagonist is always willing to risk his life to help, and he also likes to give away money for free. Then there are loopholes in the power system. Wizarding civilization clearly states that knowledge is the basis of everything, and everything is based on the pursuit of knowledge. But after reading so many chapters of this book, the protagonist has learned nothing at all. Alchemy, potions, spells, etc., It's just a hands-on practice, with no prerequisite knowledge at all. Alchemy, which is said to have endless potential, also uses mental power to fuse two different things according to frequency in the article. Advanced alchemy items are more items fused, as long as you know the formula and use the protagonist's plug-in talent. There is no theoretical basis of knowledge, no material science, runes, nothing else, just knowing what is happening but not knowing why. Then there is the battle plot. The protagonist has a lot of hang-ups. Currently, the protagonist's most commonly used main force is high-level elemental gems, which are bomb-like gems with explosive damage such as fire and frost. Every time the protagonist fights, he uses the primitive method of throwing stones to fight. The main spell he knows is the frost sigh spell. The article shows that the damage is good, but the distance and speed are just that. But every time the protagonist can rely on these incomparables. There are all kinds of weird magic spells in the wizard style, such as ultra-long-range spells, tracking spells, high-altitude flight, ground escape, light and shadow spells, and puppet control. It's not like a wizard, but more like the poor old mage style. It's still the kind with extremely short casting distance. Finally, the protagonist is relatively brainless and easily gets emotional. He would often kill his enemies in full view of the academy as soon as he got emotional, and then use various lame excuses to fool him to save his life. Whenever the protagonist's halo is not strong enough and he talks about some realistic logic, and the official wizard of the academy takes it seriously, this guy will die. To be honest, the character of the protagonist is not suitable for mixing with black wizards, and probably even white wizards are not suitable. I can only say that the protagonist's halo and plug-ins are awesome.

It is known that a normal person weighs about 120 pounds and a fat person weighs 300 pounds. This is equivalent to nine people or three fat people crowded together, and then they are still crispy frogs.

I have read a similar book and I don't know whether it is Starting Point or Tomato. The talents of the other two are exactly the same. In fact, the breathing valve is the same, and the neighbor during his apprenticeship is also similar. Only in that book, the neighbor studies the art of music, and the enemy is similar, he studies curses. It can be read as two books, but there is a sense of familiarity.

It's okay to write, but will the protagonist's character change? I always describe my inner resistance when I see the body. You must have gotten used to it after so many experiences, right? They are already dark wizards

In fact, there is nothing wrong with you writing about knights, but if you have always been a knight, why can't wizards be able to do it? Don't mix up knights with knights. If you want to write about knights, it is better to write about both physical and mental health, and knights are not popular in the setting.

I haven't read the book yet, but I'll give you a rough summary of my impressions of the title. The contradiction in subject matter is daunting. Putting the words dark wizard and holy lady together makes people who want to see the dark flow hesitate again and again, and makes people who want to see the holy lady leave directly. This is not pleasing to both sides. Because from the introduction, the protagonist must behave like a virgin, even if it is for profit, it makes people feel uncomfortable. There is a kind of dark flow called the hypocrite flow, which is great and upright on the surface, but secretly guilty. But the hypocrite is also decisive in killing, and the introduction also mentions that he deliberately spares his enemies. Being a false virgin in the black wizard group is not a good idea. If you are in the white wizard group, you are indeed a hypocrite. Now you are a bit behind. In short, this cheat cannot find the target group. If this kind of thing is not properly controlled, it can easily become toxic. There is so much out there about The Witcher, why waste your time testing a potentially toxic novel? If the author has any ideas, please reply. The current contradictions in the subject matter are too discouraging.

From the beginning of the plot of the underground world, I felt that it was not as smooth as before, and it was very frustrating.

As a Shennong, I can see it now and not know it later. It's still okay for now.

By the way, why are there so many swamp gods? Can't we just change the god Huo Huo? The swamp doesn't sound that strong either.

Why are there so few people? I don't dare to look at it, for fear that it will suddenly stop.

It's 1.04 Million words long. I admire the author's perseverance. Come on!