Three Kingdoms: from Woodcutter to General Ji Han

The first two hundred or so chapters are okay, and quite relevant. I chased him all the way down, and then I was fed a shit. When he rescued the princess, he was only a little worse than Lu Bu. At least he could be replaced. The protagonist was written to seriously injure Hua Xiong with a flying ax, break into the enemy camp empty-handed, and fight Lu Bu, both of whom were injured. When I arrived at Hulao Pass, I saw it, what a guy! The second master plus the protagonist plus Zhang Fei can't do anything for Lu Bu, so Lu Bu is treated as a street guy, a pure clown. Aren't you happy when you write? The protagonist's performance as mentioned above is such that no one in the world recognizes you. Then when Lu Bu comes out, well, Lu Bu automatically wins the title of the best general in the world and uses the protagonist as a stepping stone. Then why did you write so awesomely for the protagonist earlier? To set off Lu Bu? Is Lu Bu the real protagonist? Niuhan is a pure clown. Let's talk about martial arts. There was no foreshadowing of martial arts two hundred chapters ago. As soon as Lu Bu came out, the protagonist and Lu Bu fought to a draw, and martial arts came out? Half of the writing turned into the myth of the Three Kingdoms? You really think your grades are too good, right? Don't say that the key point is at the back. I can't stand it anymore. It's just a waste of money.

Is it fine enough🙂

Seriously, an intelligence of 10 is a severely mentally retarded person. Can such a village guard really understand when he goes to school? I guess it's all a problem in daily life, right? In addition, in ancient times, there were strict regulations on identity and titles. Liu, Guan, and Zhang were still called generals, and the protagonist was called the "Ox Demon King." There is a "king". Why, are you going to rebel?

If you read too much about the strategists in ancient times, you will be the first to become a fool.

This introduction makes people think that the protagonist is Dashachun

A person with an IQ of 10 is fine as a leader, but leading soldiers in war is just a little better than an idiot.

Generally speaking, the writing is smooth and Golden Finger does not steal the show. The protagonist only does what he should do. For example, killing people and protecting Liu Bei. Furthermore, the protagonist did not go to school in his previous life and is considered illiterate, but he has watched TV, so he can do some future operations, but not much. It can only be said to be the icing on the cake. Liu Guan and Zhang's portrayal is okay, neither beautifying nor discrediting. Generally speaking, it is considered to be on the higher side of food and grass.

Isn't this too disgusting? Time travel just to be a dog in the past? What do you think? Is there something wrong with your brain?

The protagonist who was originally so cute turned out to be stupid, but then he pretended to be stupid. I was speechless. Since you wrote the protagonist as a stupid character at the beginning, don't change it 😅

This is the first book of the Three Kingdoms with two pig's feet, and it describes the righteousness in my mind. Upright, upright, upright and aboveboard friendship in Taoyuan. In addition, this Niuhan Intelligence 10 question has also been mentioned before. Pig's feet awakened the system in his previous life🔟Intelligence is locked. Maybe it was because I was too smart when I was young. I was also a village guard in my previous life, so I can't complete my body by traveling through my memories. The first few chapters are humorous, and I can write more interesting things like this later 😁

This is Guo Jing's template at most, but without Huang Rong, he would be just a fierce general who charges to kill the enemy. It is impossible for a general to see the battlefield change rapidly and not have the brains.

It can only be said that the author doesn't even know what the selling point of his book is. Everyone wanted to see a One-Punch Man, but it turned out that Lu Bu was the One-Punch Man. He also had the protagonist's halo temporarily activate the skills of a sharpshooter. Then he had to mobilize all the generals under Dong Zhuhou's banner, set up two traps, and finally had the protagonist shoot three hidden arrows in a row to kill Lu Bu... Brother, what are you thinking? This shows that the protagonist will never be able to catch up. Even if you win everyone, it will be useless. Everyone remembers that you killed Lu Bu with a hidden arrow. Everyone thinks that you are inferior to Lu Bu. This is broken. The underlying logic of the whole book is broken. Your system is originally designed to serve combat power, but you failed in writing. No wonder the rest is a mess, all kinds of disgusting people

I just watched 188. I heard that the plot of the 200-year-old battle with Lu Bu collapsed. One Lu Bu can overpower the protagonist Zhang Fei, Guan Yu, Taishi Ci, and Zhao Yun. Oh, awesome. What kind of idea can write such a plot? I didn't dare to watch it, so I ran away.

Ancient people were not like us who learned to turn left and right since elementary school. If you taught them how to turn left and right, they couldn't correct it every few months. How could they train a group of farmers in just a few days? It's a given!

It was good before chapter 200, but it was a mess after chapter 200. Especially the part about Lu Bu, I had no desire to read it at all.

From the introduction, the protagonist seems to have low intelligence and no desire at all. The protagonist is a fool

Let's have a hearty idiom solitaire game! I come first! Be confident!

It's so facial, I can't stand it when I see Dong Zhuo. If Dong Zhuo is really like what you describe, is he worthy of being powerful in Yongliang? It completely portrays Dong Zhuo as a reckless man who does not know the military, and does not look at how Dong Zhuo made his fortune.

The author is crazy about money. How can he not prevent theft?

The protagonist is illiterate and has no elementary school education. This setting is curious.

It is tasteless to eat, it is a pity to throw it away, it is called tasteless! As long as you check more information and use the information rationally, you have great hope of booking a few thousand orders, but it is a pity.

If you write a stupid protagonist, do you think anyone will read it?

I don't know if it's games like Dynasty Warriors, Heroes of the Three Kingdoms, Romance of the Three Kingdoms, etc. I really like the combination of the Three Kingdoms and various game systems. The protagonist is silly and very lovable. He can be a pure person and likes whatever he lacks. I envy this simple way of doing things Additionally, I don't like too many bad things. Don't do high blood pressure plots with Dong Zhuo. I feel that the author's description of the villain is a bit facial and not as good as decent (especially Dong Zhuo's current job) Now this kind of pure bad guy feels that it does not match your style. That kind of composite bad guy, who has his own beliefs and wants to do good things, may be more charming and more consistent, because in fact, your characters are very vivid, and I hope the villain can be strengthened All monthly tickets are given, and I look forward to the following plots!

I didn't read the content, I just read the introduction and complained about the protagonist's name, which is such a bastard

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As long as the current writing style and rhythm are maintained, it will be a good start. Come on, author.

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Take your time, develop slowly, and I will give you all the monthly tickets in the future

I can barely accept it as a younger brother, but I don't even have the beauties of the Three Kingdoms. Just write it and send it to me. It's really like working for Liu Bei.

You drop! Clear?