Immortality and Demonic Cultivation: Start with Origami Man

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I've given you the monthly pass, come on

For those who have read two books of Crazy Eunuch in half a year, guess how many words this book can live up to, and have read more than three books by the author.

But the writing is better than that of Peach Blossom Cake, which gets worse the more it is written.

I looked through the author's profile and found that I was a level 5 writer. It showed that this was a high-quality test of hundreds of thousands of words, then two great high-quality books, both of which were above 10,000 words, and then two unfinished books of less than 200,000 to 300,000 words. From the performance point of view, there is no doubt that the strength is there, but if you look at the situation of cutting two books in a row, your mentality is too hasty. You must know that even the kind of author who can become a god with one book cannot produce a masterpiece. At most, he can only rely on the remaining fans to make a masterpiece, and 12 Kings is no exception. A writer with your level of achievement has surpassed a large number of authors on the Qidian platform, but it may be that the strength positioning brought to you by these two masterpieces makes you feel that you are at the level of a great master. However, the results of your book are not that good, and the top 100 monthly votes are not stable. To put it bluntly: you don't have the results of a great master, but you have the problem of a great master. If you don't have a sacred book to support you, you are not qualified to cut two books. I quite recognize the author name of Peach Blossom Crisp. At least among the names of many online article authors, I can remember this author's name. This memory comes from leather-making. This good impression lasted until the Imperial City suddenly failed to finish. It was obvious that there were no major problems in the early stage, and then it inexplicably opened a new book. Perhaps from the author's perspective, there are many problems, and the fact that the results did not meet your expectations is the biggest problem. But I want to say that to keep the contract, both subscriptions and follow-up orders, even those great authors or authors who are in the top 100 monthly votes, do not dare to have particularly high expectations. So where do you get your confidence? Are just two masterpieces enough? Not even one star. The unfinished work of Imperial City left a very bad impression on me, so I had no expectations for this new book. However, because of the good impression of Leatherworking, I still added it to the bookshelf of Tianmo. However, it may be Murphy's law. It only has 100,000 words more than Imperial City, and it was cut without warning. However, I did not renew the order this time. The advantage is that I did not lose any points. The disadvantage is that the author's name is Peach Blossom Crisp, which deepens the bad impression. With all due respect, if you open a new author account, how can this book last? What if the results are not as good as you expected? 3000 Will be equalized and 5000 will be equalized, okay? Your top priority is to write a book with 2 million words or more than 1 million words, and steadily retain your fans. Otherwise, when all the old fans run away and you cannot attract new fans, this industry can be regarded as starting over. If you can open a QQ fan group, open one to promote activity or something. I believe there will be many readers willing to chat with you in the group. That's it.

I saw the latest chapter, it's quite interesting It has its own style and characteristics But the key is not to be a eunuch, a eunuch is much better than a bad one

Every time I write about the supernatural, I write about the false high realm. I can't write well again. The descriptions of women are delicate, and the descriptions of battles are also excellent. Wouldn't it be nice to write a world of low-to-medium martial arts? I also love writing paper. There are a few people who like to look at paper figures and leather crafting. How well described the last fight was before the original book was released. He also likes to cut books and open new books once, and the income from the new book period of about a month is also low. Low returns definitely cause anxiety. Anxious and worried. Falling into a vicious cycle. Readers have less trust in you. Moreover, the outline was definitely not written well after cutting it so quickly, and it fell apart later. If that doesn't work, just open both books. The income from old books is guaranteed. The new book attempts a breakthrough. Once the new book has achieved results, I will work hard to write the new book. Then the new account should not be related to the old account, otherwise fans of the old book will say that you are entering the palace every month. Fans of new books don't dare to subscribe and just keep it, the income is low and cut. It's been almost three years since I read your writing. Such a talented writer has had mediocre results for several years.

All I can say is, awesome, how can you finish the book while licking your face, when the reader is an imbecile or has never read the book?

Many Immortal Styles just lie flat and wait for invincibility. It's not that simple. Almost all their wishes come true. They just lie flat and wait for invincibility. This is much more realistic. It is a normal operation to lose the blood vine. Who has not had the experience of riding a tiger and being in trouble several times in life, and it is almost finished.

I have read so many books by the author, and I have seen the author cut so many books. What gives me the biggest feeling is that the author is only suitable for writing short stories. Every time he writes at the beginning, people can be involved in it all at once, and then slowly it starts to become chaotic, with a hammer here and there, then invincible, and then completely collapsed and can no longer write. 🤔 In this regard, I can only think of one genre that is suitable for the author, which is Tenma-ryu, just like Wenzhaogong. There are many worlds. Every time you travel to a new world, there will be a new plot. The author is really talented in shaping short-term plots. The difficulty in Tenma-ryu is to create new plots, but it is a strength for the author. 🪖 The author likes to focus on details, which leads to more and more settings and more and more chaos. But Tenma Ryu doesn't have this problem. The new world only needs a simple setting and an attractive story. It doesn't need to pay a lot of details at all, and it won't make people feel like it's superficial. After all, the new plot is fresh. 🙂 For someone like the author whose talent is in short-term plot shaping, if the compatibility of ordinary fantasy is 10, the compatibility of Tianmo flow is 100. 🤭

I still remember someone said in the previous book that the eunuch would open the box again, but it seems that the box was not opened.

But ever since I found out that he was a Taohuasu trumpet, I always felt that he was going to pull a big lump on the Yin-Eating King Vine.

Full score 10★, Liang Cao is worth watching. The writing quality could be higher. However, because the background is dark, it makes me feel depressed, so I deduct half a star for selfish reasons.

This author really has no credibility, and he keeps making eunuchs. A few days ago, this book was said not to be eunuchs, but it ended up being completely unfinished, right? 😰😰😰 It's disgusting.

The poet holds it and has the nerve to finish reading it. 😡😡

The first 80 chapters do not represent the overall level of the author and the book. The subsequent plot and writing levels have obviously improved a lot. Moreover, the author and operation team can also absorb readers' opinions very well. Unlike some operations teams, readers will be banned if they say anything. Very good work!

The later stage of foundation building is not good. Wherever the pig's trotter goes, old monsters appear. The pig's trotter finally becomes invincible in the same realm. Before it starts, there are old monsters who form the pill. Pig's trotter will only be calm outside when it is in seclusion. When pig's trotter comes out of seclusion, its strength has improved a bit. The fight started to turn upside down outside, pig's feet began to be entangled and manipulated by more powerful monsters or troubles, and then they began to complain about their lack of strength, and began to live in thirty years of Hedong and Thirty Years of Hexi. They were either hiding here and there or running around, and they would always be manipulated.

I'm not saying that the protagonist's behavior of feeding the Affection Pill to Jia Er is wrong. If I were the protagonist, I would have to feed it to him. In the world of immortality, which is full of dangers, it is the right behavior to punish people for their own sake. But the only thing that makes me feel criticized is that the setting of the Affection Pill itself is that anyone who takes it below the third level of Qi training will fall in love with the person who gave it. It just so happens that in the plot, Jia Er approaches the protagonist with an ulterior conspiracy. The protagonist knows nothing about it, but the author cannot let the protagonist really know nothing. A very coincidental solution is to have the protagonist give the woman a love pill and brainwash her into being his own person. But before that, without any foreshadowing or warning, this affectionate elixir suddenly appeared. It's like a deus ex machina. The plot logic is very smooth, but it just feels unreasonable.

The main text only lasts a few chapters and it's finished. I didn't have enough data to cut into the book, so I finished it like this 666

Another eunuch! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Awesome. I will definitely not read it until there are more than 300 chapters. It's disgusting.

The text becomes more and more readable from the back. It is a good book with great potential. I would like to say here that I hope the author will write less marginal content. If he writes too much, it will easily be removed from the shelves, which would be a pity. Give the author a little motivation by voting for a monthly ticket.

I had to endure it. I ordered a few chapters and then stopped. Hahaha, I knew it 😴😴

A book that ends when I read Dan Dan for the first time is worthy of being called Immortality?

I haven't read this book since I was chasing after it. After looking at a hundred cuts, my thoughts now are really like this 😢 Brother, you are so cruel that I really can't keep up with it. . I feel that the main reason for the eunuch is that there are too many female characters and the map cannot be discarded. Although the map has a complete world view, it advances as fast as the Yakuza style and is used up in about a hundred chapters. The combination of the two results in a hasty ending of only a hundred chapters. Brother, you need to realize something clearly. Although your description of female characters is indeed unique in Qidian Xiu Xian, in fact, Xiuxian novels still rely on a strong main line to shine. The heroine and Sesel can only be the icing on the cake but not help in times of need, especially in If it has affected the completion of the novel, just give up part of it. Personally, I feel that even if you combine these cut-off books and make a book with five or six hundred chapters and give it a bad ending, the reputation and results will be much better.

Shennong Tasted it and found it was pretty good.

None of the natural disaster plants have appeared. There are so many things and only a background board has been introduced. Are you done with this?

It's finished. I really liked Pei Hu's struggle for immortality in the early stage and his persistence in the middle stage, but I didn't like it in the later stage. The plot was too abrupt, and the protagonist's combat power was constantly suppressed. However, the protagonist's talent was always accidentally exposed, and then he was persecuted. It was not as exciting as Gou Dao's longevity novel... The role of the paper man is getting worse and worse... It's an anticlimax!

I've been waiting for you for more than a week, just to see the back, and you did it again. You're so awesome.

When I read Chapter 127, I felt like I couldn't stand my grandma's love and abandoned the book. As expected, I cut it immediately before chapter 10.