Douluo Peerless: Tianyuan Cauldron at the Beginning, Frightened Tianmeng

Shrek cares so much about you. There are also women for you to enter. It doesn't matter whether you disagree or not. When you are able. You have to give them a hand. Otherwise it wouldn't make sense. For example, the vitality of the living gold is combined with the corpse of a 100,000-year-old soul beast and the remnant soul to refine elixirs so that Lao Mu can stand up again and live for another few decades. Let the Supreme Elder and Yan Shaozhe take another step forward. It doesn't matter if these people are good people or not. But the main character in this book is real. It's not like trying to make a big pie out of a rat 🔨

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20230105004757562","UserId":404252592} Aren't you anti-Tang San? Why do you still worship Mu En as your teacher? But then again, the writing seems quite comfortable AI search (no malice) Reasons why various fanfics about worshiping Mu En as a teacher are criticized: From a reader's perspective, the setting of "Worshiping Mu En as a disciple" in the Douluo 2 Anti-Tang San fanfic is like stuffing arsenic into your mouth after maxing out the poison resistance - it's embarrassing and poisonous, and the holes are so dense that they can be used as a sieve. The following is a direct comment: --- 1. Moon's character collapsed, and the master-disciple relationship turned into a "recognizing the thief as the father" scene Who is the original Moon? The spiritual totem of Shrek Academy and the ultimate representative of the Holy Dragon Spirit of Light. He worried about the academy and the mainland all his life. Before his death, he left the power of the golden tree to his descendants. He can be called a "saint" template. As a result, in the fanfic, in order to oppose Tang San, Mu En was directly transformed into "Tang San's lifelong enemy", and even took the protagonist as his apprentice to teach the secret book of "overthrowing the Poseidon" - this is not an apprenticeship, but forcibly pulling the saint down from the altar to play house with the author. In the eyes of readers, Moon instantly changes from a "respectable senior" to a "tool master". The sense of dissonance is comparable to Confucius traveling through time to teach pyramid schemes so that he can vomit out the last night's meal. --- 2. Logic breakdown: Why should Moon help you fight against Tang San? In the timeline of Douluo 2, Tang San is already the dual god of Poseidon + Asura God, the source of belief in Douluo Continent. Even Huo Yuhao had to shout "Grandmaster" in the later period. As Dean of Shrek, Munn's life philosophy is to "protect the balance of the continent". As a result, the conspiracy theory that "Tang San is actually a false god who exploits the luck of soul beasts" suddenly popped up in the fan fiction. After hearing this, Munn immediately slapped his thigh: "Good disciple, my master has long disliked him!" - Is this treating Munn as Alzheimer's? Or do you treat readers as if they are missing out? The first generation of Shrek's Seven Monsters were all Tang San's biggest fans. As a junior, Moon's opposition to Tang San was tantamount to denying the foundation of his own academy. This operation was comparable to asking modern scientists to worship "Flat Earth Theory" believers as their teachers, and it was such a straightforward insult to their incompetent IQ. --- 3. The protagonist's wisdom: the motive for becoming a disciple is even more outrageous than "giving for free" The protagonist of the anti-Tang Sanwen article is a "traveler/reborn person persecuted by Tang San". In theory, he should take the "grassroots counterattack" route, but in the end, he turned around and became a disciple of Mu En - who is Mu En? The "disciples and grandchildren" of Tang San's camp! This is equivalent to Liu Bei just finished shouting "reviving the Han Dynasty", and the next day he worshiped Cao Cao as his adoptive father, and plausibly said: "I want to learn from you to overthrow Emperor Xian of Han!" What's even more poisonous is that in order to force reasonableness, the author also set up Mu En: "In fact, Mu En was plotted by Tang San, and he kept it secret." - Good guy, before Mu En died, he gave the golden tree to Tang San's descendant Huo Yuhao. Was it because he wanted to "suffer the gall"? This level of conspiracy theory would make even the chatty aunt in the village shake her head after hearing it. --- 4. The combat power system collapsed into rubbish: What can Moon teach? Anti-god-level secrets? The ceiling of combat power in Douluo 2 is the god level. No matter how strong Munn is, he is only an ultimate Douluo (demigod). It is difficult to even touch the threshold of the god level. As a result, in the fanfic, Munn suddenly took out "The Ancient Dragon God's Instructions: Tang San Actually Stealed the Dragon God's Power", and then taught the protagonist the "God-killing Technique" - this was not a discipleship, but a pirated secret book from "The Palm of the Tathagata". What's even more outrageous is that in order to make Munn "useful", the author forcibly promoted it to the point that "Munn could have become a god long ago, but was suppressed by Tang San" - did the co-author of the original work Muen die of old age "deliberately die of old age"? This operation was equivalent to making Zhang Sanfeng suddenly say before he died: "Actually, I could have broken the planet with one punch, just to play with Zhu Yuanzhang." The combat power system collapsed faster than the "artifact" worth 9.9 Yuan in Pinduoduo. --- 5. The emotional line is extremely poisonous: Mu En becomes a "resentful woman", and the master-disciple relationship turns into a "complaint conference" The most poisonous thing is that in order to highlight the justice of "anti-Tang San", the author asked Mu En to make small remarks to the protagonist every day: "Tang San snatched my soul bone back then" "Tang San was actually afraid that our Shrek was too strong" - a good sage character, forced to become Xianglin's wife. What readers want to see is a passionate counterattack, not a "bloody ethics drama in which the master talks ill of his ex to his disciples every day." If Munn knew better, he would probably have crawled out and strangled the author: "I have been upright all my life, but you want me to become a tongue-tied woman after death?" --- Summary: Becoming a disciple of Munn is not a golden finger, but a direct dig into the foundation of the original work The essence of this setting is that the author wants to ride on the popularity of the original work's "Shrek orthodoxy", but is too lazy to pave the way for new forces, so he captures Munn as a shield for "anti-Tang San". As a result, Munn's character collapsed, the protagonist's IQ was lost, the combat power system became a joke, and the readers just felt like they were force-fed a mouthful of "saint's foot-binding cloth" - smelly and long. If you really want to rebel against Tang San, you might as well create an original "orphan from an ancient sect that was destroyed by Tang San" as your master. At least you won't turn the original character into a "schizophrenic patient." (Leaved by readers who died of poisoning)

Author, does your book have a single heroine or multiple heroines? If there are multiple female protagonists, can we not include Tang Ya, Wu Ming, Ning Tian, ​​and Wu Feng? These people are quite annoying

I feel like the writing style is not good, a bit childish

In Chapter 22, Xuanzi helps the protagonist to hunt down the hundred thousand year old soul beast. The ninth soul skill he uses is Divine Punishment of the Earth. Then the ninth soul skill used by twenty-three cards to fight against Ditian is Taotie Swallowing Heaven... Moreover, the two photos just started charging, so can you be more rigorous? When you first start spending money, be prepared. Brother, it's not good to be a fool and do this. 😄

Does the author have any auspicious beasts for the heroine?