Spirit Cage: Starting from Rescuing Inmate Bai Yuekui

It's another story about a high-dimensional creature that can change the ending at will just like the TM Mythical Daluo. It also made the protagonist so uncomfortable, but in the end he saved Bai Yuetian. What was it written? It was really uncomfortable to watch.

Your level has dropped in chapters 25-45, and there are problems with the plot. I don't know what others want to see, but you didn't catch what I wanted to see. The prison plot is short and I won't talk about it. Later, I went to Heluo to create the original plot. I don't know how you arranged the outline for this section. What I want to see is to dig deeper into the development of Jiukawa City and the gradual end of the world due to the Mana ecology behind the Yuokuiden comics. In fact, you just made an apocalyptic story about changing the soul cage skin, and some people bought it. If you are like this now, I suggest you restart it and think about how to write it.

The prison-breaking soldier king "Urban Mad Dragon" wearing a spiritual cage skin is probably not related to the original work. Simply borrowing original characters to continue writing unrelated content

It's so well written, but I feel like it needs some exposure, and too few people have seen it now.

Cool oil plug! Cyber ​​Shennong is summoned!

It's not fun to watch, the protagonist struggles in various ways, but seems to accomplish nothing.

After reading the comment section, they all said that the writing is pretty good. I'll keep it up first. There aren't many places to write about the spirit cage anime. The next order is to finish the plot, and then develop and unify the world, otherwise it won't be long.

The protagonist has merged with Chuansheng, and when he is weak, his body is no longer under his control. I am very curious, when the protagonist and Bai Yuekui do things in the future, will it be you or the body of Chuansheng who will handle it? Are the children the protagonist's or those born from the cranium?

The writing is very good. This is the first time I have seen this perspective. I hope the author will stick to it. (Complaining, write at least one million words. Author, you don't need to write the ending to the first season of The Spirit Cage. You just write the Dragon Bone Village is established, and the middle is based on the reconstruction of the end of the world. According to your current writing method, you don't need to change the general trend of the plot. Just change a few small things.)

Linglong Ze is all written around Bai Yuepuppet. After watching a few movies, I'm no longer interested in him.