I Don't Need to Work Hard to Be Reborn

The author took it for granted when he wrote this novel.

I'll go, it's only a few chapters and it's already on the shelves, don't cheat money

I have never had any contact with this author. I have read more than 30 chapters and I can't stand it any longer. It is scattered, has no main line, and is not interesting. It seems that he has written about many industries, contacted many people, said a few superficial opinions without depth, and moved on to the next scene. Damn it if anyone can read this book. . .

Two books in a row are both around 110,000 words. You should also pay attention to this book and wait until it reaches 200,000 words before looking at the specific situation. All I can say is that once a eunuch is always a eunuch.

Does the author have an outline? Now that the industry the protagonist invests in will be able to compete with the richest man in ten years, what should I write next? Either write about an industry in depth enough, or write some emotional lines in the middle. Otherwise, it will really become a running story later.

The protagonist is engaged in so many industries, is it too busy? Is there so much talent management? Not to mention having finances, I have no background (the country is not strong) and I have no force (no mercenaries) and I am a novice (I only know the general direction of buying and selling) and I am a multinational!

The writing is too messy, everything is written in one stroke. After reading dozens of chapters, my mind is empty. It seems that I wrote a lot, but actually I don't remember anything.

There are too many private goods. Talking about the general trend of the country and the prospects of the industry are endless. I add them dryly and cover the whole chapter.

How to say it. The writing style is okay, but it doesn't seem to be immersive, and there is very little story. It feels like it's basically a third-party description. There is no plot, only the result.

The writing is the same as what AI wrote, messy, dry and boring

Pretend to be cool, enjoy yourself, get to know someone, that one, celebrity's guidance. Awesome. I don't love money, I make money everywhere, and I'm a pretentious guy. Scattered. Normal people want to live a carefree life, make enough money, manage the company well, and check it occasionally. A hammer in the east, coolness in the west. Have fun yourself. The novel is exciting for readers.

No, what on earth is your protagonist going to do? Working on hard-core technology or the Internet? The protagonist has never had a goal and is always in a fog.

When I read Chapter 30, I didn't know what the main plot was. It was like a running account. Everything had to be mixed in, and I was timid. It's not fun at all, it's just a mess of various investments with no clue, and chatting with this person and that person has no purpose.

Why do you like to be a role model so much? When you meet someone, show off your knowledge

Can you reduce your psychological speculation? You can, but you have to speculate with a normal person's thinking. Don't let weird thoughts creep in just to slap someone in the face.

This protagonist wants to do everything and is so ambitious

After reading dozens of chapters, I roughly analyzed the character of the protagonist. He is neurotic. He knows that a company that will make a lot of money in a few years will sell his shares. He knows that a good small company will make a lot of money and let others invest. He will invest less! I can't understand this brain circuit, and the protagonist has no control over the company he owns! Alas, there is so much nonsense in each chapter!

Forty-eight days, 135 chapters updated. No one in the production team would dare to do this. No wonder the two previous books were eunuchs with 110,000 words. You really treat the readers as Japanese.

It is rare to see such an author who has a story but cannot write a story. He wants to write about everything and writes everything in the form of a running account. . . Every story is told beautifully. . The author is not suitable for writing books, but is suitable for being a screenwriter and writing an outline.

It's too messy, too complicated, the process is futile and too fast!

Neither up nor down, it's really boring to watch. The character of the protagonist is really disgusting.

Your main line is the rich second generation, and your successful version of Wang Sicong is pretty good too. . I didn't see you writing about the lives of the rich second generation. . It's written like a running account. . Will you spend money

There is neither the feeling of refreshing writing nor the atmosphere of business war and management. It is just a pile of words.

The author should dig deeper, it's too boring, the plot is boring, and the characters are boring! I won't pay to watch it anyway!

The author is eunuch, forget it, the word water is boring

You said you are the second generation of rebirth, so what else do you write, just lie down and it's over.

I just want to ask if you can get back the money you spent investing in Lantu 🙂🙂🙂

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