The Martial Saint Begins with Copycat Techniques

The writing and creativity are both good. It's just very awkward. The protagonist doesn't like women, and he keeps emphasizing that he doesn't like women. Then, there are blind dates, chance encounters, bosses, and families who are optimistic about the protagonist and want to marry her, and there are a lot of them. This annoys both those who like a heroine and those who don't.

Nuclear power? The protagonist ate a bowl of porridge in one day, stayed up all night, and stabbed all day long. No, don't people in this world need to eat and rest?

From the beginning of skin training, people say that crickets are used to train skin, and later on, they are trained to train meat, bones, muscles, blood, and qi. They can be crickets in every state. Then, they are looked down upon when they are young, and they are looked down upon when they become herders in Chengzhou. It is amazing.

After reading about ten chapters, this book ranks 177 on the bestseller list. I couldn't understand it, but I was shocked. I decided to write a Yakuza-ryu book myself to test the waters.

How many fields does it take to produce the materials consumed by a large city with hundreds of thousands of people? This kind of place is in the mountains and forests outside the city. It's really impossible. There are too many monsters.

The world view is very fragmented. The population, county towns, and county towns are all full of monsters. These are too fragmented and have no logic at all.

If you put the ellipses on the shelves, you can make a lot of money 🙂🙂

I just watched it, does this b-protagonist only know how to seduce people? That Inspector Zhang hired a gang killer, and he just killed him. When appointing a patrol, you still want to be transparent, hello, me, hello, everyone. After being praised by the old patrolman Youzi, he became hostile to the family members who were in the middle stage of skin training and planned to assassinate him. You only have one method to kill people, right? Both parents are dead, and the oil bottle sister is a dragster. She has made enemies in a family before her cultivation level has reached a high level.

Two of the lowest-level Huangpin lower-level exercises, you say one is slightly better, but after the plug-in is simplified, one can be quickly mastered and the other can only be quickly learned. What are you saying? Is this reasonable? It's a typical case of focusing on one thing at the expense of the other. You want to describe the exercises practiced by the protagonist better, but have you considered that in designing them like this, they are actually the lowest level exercises? Have you considered your plug-in balance?

Chapter 3, the joke about friction producing magnets. Many readers in the comment area are saying, why not change it? New readers seem very uncomfortable.