Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect: Sky Screen, Beginning with Mu En's Monologue

Complaint: There is also a Dou Yiwen similar to this one. I feel pretty good about it, but the protagonist reaches the limit in one step. Later, the sky screen inventory also takes into account both the protagonist and the inventory. Why does such a big hook have to step up step by step? Shen Yin should not use inventory to gain trust first at the beginning, and then The whole big one (increasing strength), then refining the fake to become real, and strengthening trust, the protagonist goes to Shrek to join in after dying, and even gets Electrolux to join him. Only when the protagonist's strength increases can I write a group portrait, and there is no sense of crisis. Otherwise, it would be a bit indiscriminate to take stock of the weak protagonist's strength.

Basically, all the paid novels I read starting from about 20 titles are bad, and none of them are like this. In addition, the writing of your novel is also a bit bad. It can be read, but it is not a high-quality novel. I'm sure I'll end up writing half of it and not finish it.

Are there any scenes where the protagonist ranks himself up? Hope not

No brother, you are eating like this. I haven't looked at it for three days. When I came back, I found you were still fighting beasts. Under the water, I want to run away. It's too exaggerated

Two chapters a day is too little. This kind of inventory requires 10,000 words to start reading.

I think Gu Yuena can be added. She has a high level and has a relatively broad knowledge. In terms of content, she can split the six realms Human Realm: Even the Douluo Continent will swallow other planes later Demon Realm: You can give soul beasts and the like, and give Gu Yuena a demon god. After all, she only has the creation of a godhead, which is not a god Demon Realm : Can be given to evil soul masters Immortal World: Can be given to first-level gods and second-level gods. After all, they absorb the spirit of fairy spirits to practice. Compared with God Kings, they are neither high nor low God Realm: non-god kings are not allowed to enter, and the six realms must be destroyed and cannot be taken at will Underworld: Just give it to Electrolux directly. He is the founder of souls and an expert in playing with souls.

※The first heavenly list, the list of the strongest human monologues! ❶ ❷ ❸ ❹ ❺ ❻ ❼Huo Yuhao--Lingbing Douluo ❽Wang Donger--Dragon Butterfly Douluo/Butterfly God ❾Yu Guanzhi- -Magic Pen Douluo/God of Painting ❿Mu En--Dragon God Douluo, Long Xiaoyao--Dragon King Douluo, Ye Xishui--Death Douluo ※The second Heavenly Ranking, the ranking of the strongest martial spirits! ⑴Beast Spirit Ranking ① ② ③ ④ ⑤ ⑥ ⑦ ⑧Ma Xiaotao--Pure Fire Phoenix ⑨Mu En - Holy Dragon of Light, Long Xiaoyao - Holy Dragon of Darkness ⑩Xuanzi - Taotie Divine Ox ⑵Weapon Spirit Ranking ① ② ③ ④ ⑤ ⑥ 7 ⑥ ⑦ ⑧ ⑨ ⑩ ※The third heavenly ranking, the strongest soul beast ranking! ❶ ❷ ❸ ❹ ❺ ❻ ❼ ❽Sea Princess--Sea Princess ❾Ten Thousand Monsters--Demon-Eyed Demon Tree ❿ Brigitte--Emerald Swan ※The fourth sky list, the ranking of ways to become a god! ❶ ❷ ❸ ❹ ❺ ❻ ❼ ❽ ❾ ❿

The description of Huo Yuhao in your list can be compared with several other character lists. The lists of other characters basically consist of a few chapters or more than 10 chapters. You have written more than 70 chapters on Huo Yuhao.

One of the most annoying aspects of the movie is to force an original protagonist into the movie, which is disgusting. Because this is such a bad thing, and the content of the movie needs to be changed to make it look cool. It's too dramatic. If the protagonist dies suddenly in the first chapter and only a awning is left to play, then it is considered a high-quality article.

A soul is blown up to the sky by you, but in fact the role of the soul is just that. The so-called soul having multiple soul rings sounds nice, but in fact it is not as powerful as the soul rings obtained by hunting soul beasts. After all, a soul needs to sign a contract with an injured soul beast to obtain a soul ring. How powerful is the soul ring that can be obtained? A powerful soul beast would not sign a contract with a human being, but who would value a weak soul beast? Just like Beibei, the seventh to ninth spirit rings are only 30,000 years old. This combination of spirit rings may not even be able to beat the titles of Sun and Moon. To put it bluntly, the so-called soul is beneficial to the soul beast, not the soul master.