They Say They Have a Love Guide, but Why Are They All so Inhuman?

There are almost over 100 photos, and there are three people in the love section. The three partners have been exposed to rain and dew, and the guide is very shallow. There are almost 100 photos now. The so-called love guide has no highlights, let alone highlights, and there are no interesting parts that people can remember. The same goes for parts like combat investigation. Since this part is not interesting to write, it should be fun. But you are not interesting, and you are not happy at all. Those who are hung up usually press some pressure from time to time, or waste some. My suggestion is that the writing style will not change much in the short term. Then try to change the ratio first to try for a better reading experience. Choose one of the three women and go into the guide first. In the case of in-depth guide, as long as the writing is really not terrible, there will be some bright spots or interesting places. The rest of it is also about fighting and stuff like that. Either go for the fun side and develop some more interesting skills to show off your coolness, or use pure and refreshing writing to describe this part as a foil for love, and don't suppress it from time to time or hold it back.

280,000 Words have not been released yet, so few people are following it, but they are still persisting Author, you are many times better than those eunuchs 😭, I hope to see the ending, it seems that you have just left the novice village

The writing is good, and the theme is also about entanglements with various beautiful girls, but it is more like a monster-fighting and upgrading game. The writing style and content are heavier than the stereotype of light novels. It is not a story about passionate idiots or love brains. Of course, there are still jokes in the subtitles.

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Play through the love system again. A lot of space is given to a battle plot, but the main thing is to find a man behind the scenes to find a lonely place.

I'd give it about 3.8 Out of 5. One is that it's too small, it's fussy, and it also likes to weaken it. For example, if there is a prop, it will be used in vain the first time after three chances, but it is better than nothing There is also a green plum role that is not enough, and those 'bad women' 'The charm can't keep up with the other party. The image created by the back and forth is like, "You are not a bad boy, just a little bit bad", which is far inferior to Qingmei's abstraction and caring inside and outside, but for the sake of strength, she can only get in touch with her (except Qingmei's sister)

I understand the author. I wanted to complain about why he didn't write it. One day after I saw the latest chapter came out, I went to order it and found out that I was the eighth to read it. I suddenly felt relieved.

The writing is a bit off, and the emotional line seems to have progressed a little, but it seems to have not changed, especially from the perspective of the male protagonist's current personality. Among them, Wen's character is the strangest. She clearly seems to want to show the image of a big sister, but her tone and attitude are all hard stereotypes, without any character charm. People can't help but turn the page as soon as she appears. Xue's image of a defeated dog is too deliberate, or he has been defeated all the time. There is no highlight yet, so he can just be a passerby. The only highlight of this book so far is that there are many and fast updates.

Romance novels emphasize the setting of fairy-like appearance for the protagonist many times and use it to promote the plot, just like playing a game to open the "Wind Spirit Moon Shadow"

I feel like the writing is a bit off. Let's take a look again and hope it can return to the main line.

It's such a pity that the characters that were created at the beginning were burned down later. Qingmei, who talks about abstract things, is actually quite well written. One of the main motivations for me to read this book was her abstract interaction with the male protagonist and the heart-warming details. However, in the later period, she suddenly turned into a god-like Qingmei, and the sense of immersion was gone. The character of the vampire heroine was somewhat interesting at the beginning, but it became more and more boring as she went on. In the end, she turned directly into a tsundere jinchuriki. Her original character simply disappeared, and her new character and story were completely unoriginal. Qingmei's sister, the ghost heroine, has always suppressed her heart, and has an adult sense of responsibility and distance. I was looking forward to the moment when her feelings exploded, but Qingmei's divine speech avoided this explosion, and my expectations were disappointed. By the way, the time period when this book was released was not chosen very well. It was at a time when old conflicts had ended and new ones had not yet unfolded, just like the long grass period in the game. If this book was listed earlier, I think the results would be much better.

How many does the heroine plan to write? It is recommended to keep it within 5 as much as possible. If there are too many, I feel that some people may disappear after writing.

Personally speaking, the writing is quite satisfactory, but the favorability system does feel a bit uncomfortable (in a novel based on love, it doesn't matter if it is mainly about porn). If the protagonist can see the favor at any time, there will be a lot less pulling, and he will naturally be in the superior position in the entire relationship. The whole pretentious pulling under the favorability system also feels meaningless.

It's really well written

You must live. I feel like you can't write any more.

If the writing is biased and touches on everything, no readers will like it. Not everything will attract all readers. Readers basically only read the novels they like. If you write 10 novels in 10 genres, then all readers will only like one-tenth of your novels. Every reader of your novel spends 9/10 of the time bored, so how can you make readers like your novel?