We Have Just Established a Relationship, and the Medical Simulation System Is Here

Inexplicably, there are so many poisonous points everywhere that I don't even bother to complain about them.

If your protagonist is awesome, you can't abuse him. People think your protagonist is already awesome. The design of the torture scenes you wrote are unreasonable. Even if they are reasonable, they may not be liked. Those design scenes that are just coincidences will feel too deliberate. There is no such thing as a gray line or a surprise hidden in the foreshadowing. Some of them feel too old-fashioned. You will know that you are about to get screwed when you poke your butt 🤭

One chapter a day, it's hard to vote for it

Originally, the system's punishment of the protagonist should have been a surprise, but because the protagonist's character design is so bad (it's annoying to look at), punishing the protagonist turned out to be a cool point.

The author has never experienced pressure from public opinion. If he had experienced it once, he would not dare to write such a plot.

Can this woman stop writing? The whole protagonist is so sexually repressed

Your problem is not aid to Africa, but that it was originally written well, but suddenly you added shit. The protagonist has reached this level, and there are still people to step on it like this. The writing is too petty, a bit like an emperor using a golden pole.

You just wrote that you broke up with Ye, but you have always been obsessed with adultery and wanted to find a mistress. The more you write, the more deviant your views are. Now your hormones are taking over? Nowadays, female reporters are pretty enough to seduce you. Will they revolt when they see beautiful female patients in the future? Where are the female students and nurses? What about medical representatives? With just a hint of wind, a patient's 2,000 yuan worth of equipment may become 20,000 yuan. Many people say that reality is like this. Many men like to watch Doctor Neptune and enjoy themselves. In reality, what happens when you become a Neptune doctor is that they harm the rights of patients, and you will be happy to be cheated.

How to put it this way, it was originally meant to be a source of food, and the female protagonist was fine, but suddenly it was written about something that women couldn't stand, and then asked you to take the initiative to find 3. . . Garlic bird Garlic bird. Bye now

Is it necessary to cancel the subscription? The author's main problem is that it is illogical. Will a doctor who is one of the top two doctors in a thousand be forced to go to Africa? Furthermore, the author does not understand aid to Africa at all. As a national activity organized by the country for many years, the real situation is that the conditions are still very good. China's influence and strength in Africa are now very considerable.

Why do you have to write to support Africa? I don't know what you think about putting on small shoes for the current peak. What status is the big blood vessel and the respiratory ceiling? To put it bluntly, it is the academician reserve. Even if you are thirty years old, you can survive other people to death. If you don't consider yourself, what about your descendants? Students

Doctor novels often only reflect the skills of the doctor protagonist, but do not reflect whether the patient can afford the treatment. It seems that the patients in the novel world are very rich. Many deaths in the real world are not due to the lack of skills of doctors, but to lack of money.

When I wrote it, I thought it was not strengthening the brain. Are you sure it is the brain that is being strengthened? . . .

Why is this book on the Zhonggua limited book list? I just opened it and can't use it. Author, if you can update 333,400 words in seven days, I can use this

I have only read Chapter 5, and I have been reading novels for more than 20 years. It is the first time I have entered Yi Tuoxiang's perspective and experienced in great detail the process of how I was formed and how I was finally pulled out... OK, OK, this is how it works, right? 👍

Ling Ran, the great doctor, is of the same type. He is much more professional than Capybara, but his writing style is not that sophisticated, and his writing style is very consistent with the atmosphere of the hospital.

It's a good dog training novel. The main character will shock the dog if he doesn't obey, and then he has to thank the dog after the shock. And the reader... Has to take the place of that dog

Those who can play games for half a chapter, say goodbye🙏🙏

What kind of crappy book, crappy plot, crappy plot...

If there are any poisonous points, please point them out promptly. Sometimes the author doesn't realize it. Thank you all!

I know you are speaking out for that missed diagnosis, but I am really afraid that your book will be gone😲 Brother

It can be seen that the author is a medical student who wants to switch careers to novels. I am also a medical student, but to be honest, the novel is too poisonous. I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. The author's idea of ​​writing the novel feels like an ancient novel.

To be honest, I don't feel that the protagonist has made any progress. Whenever something happens, he just simulates and vivisects. You are a forensic doctor! ! ! And is Qi Xinghan your father? A stranger appears unexpectedly, why don't you write about your relationship with classmates, give him money, and provide him with accommodation? Your girlfriend didn't even move into the new house you bought, so you let him live in it. The most outrageous thing is that you shared your own relationship with him. The author, you are from Chengdu, don't you have any self-esteem? Not willing to let him move out yet, giant poison

Not all the prizes given in the lottery are medical skills, right? The other skills you have given are not used to show off in life and relieve the boringness of medical surgery. So what is the use of the skills you wrote. I just remember that I went abroad to save the dean's son during my time. Those musical instruments and so on seemed to be just a pretense in front of my wife. Just writing about medical skills is boring. With so many skills, you can also write more about daily life, showing off in front of others, showing off, etc., To relieve it. Just think about those basketball articles and sports articles. You can't just write the main plot to show off, but also have some side plots.

Is this you

It's so beautiful and enjoyable, a collection of hospital jokes + a textbook. Let me go, why didn't you tell me about such a beautiful novel earlier?

What is the purpose of aid to Africa? US$3 million to purchase supplies to aid Africa? It seems that the country has not provided assistance of 3 million yuan, right?

14 Votes plus more points shouldn't be too much🥲

This author has really been a doctor, and he has also been a doctor!

I can only say that these chapters have influenced my entire subscription.