Naruto: The Otsutsuki Are Here, and You're Still Practicing Traditional Ninjutsu?

The result was different from what I expected. The protagonist had no system. I thought he would learn the magnetic field rotation ability mentioned in the introduction and blow up the entire ninja world. However, the result was just a lot of nonsense. The power system was still Naruto's. The early plot did not deviate much from the original work. Naruto fan fiction has been written poorly for a long time, and it would be boring without an interesting golden finger.

If you have three female protagonists, just write three. After you finish one, forget about one and harass the next one. What's the point?

What are you talking about in the last few chapters? ? ? Starting from Fugaku's dream?

The subject matter is good, but the author has second-guessed it. Well😓, the main character used chakra to spin the pen in school at the beginning. Wow, I was attracted. The following is about Uzumaki Kushina. The second set-up is not very good. I look forward to other novels with the same theme.

For a purely entertaining novel, the starting point is too restrictive for you. Otherwise, it would be quite interesting to write a pure harem novel, relying on the ambiguous colors and your slutty words + non-stop jokes. It's a pity that the main harem does not perform well, and it is useless no matter how strong the support is. The dark plot can only be said to be watchable, but it is not interesting and is bound to offend a group of people. Only people like me who have the mentality of having fun can watch it. But apart from the harem, there is nothing that attracts me. Emmm, neither. The follow-up of Parallel Time and Space is still a bit curious and full of bad taste. 😎

What a lot of nonsense, author🥺! A set of small words

For the first 1/3 of the first chapter, I felt like I was watching Retarded

It's okay from the beginning, the content about the Sharingan is embarrassing, so there's no need to second-guess it!

It's not about the main character, bro. I've seen more than a dozen photos and haven't seen it yet.

General hay. The harem + the little happy people make Minato live in the shadow of the male protagonist. The disadvantage is that it is a bit of an outline, which is just a running account of the plot. But the advantage is that it doesn't drag. There is nothing else to comment on.