Naruto: Otsutsuki Is Here and He Still Practices Traditional Ninjutsu?

The result was different from what I expected. The protagonist had no system. I thought he would learn the magnetic field rotation ability mentioned in the introduction and blow up the entire ninja world. However, the result was just a lot of nonsense. The power system was still Naruto's. The early plot did not deviate much from the original work. Naruto fan fiction has been written poorly for a long time, and it would be boring without an interesting golden finger.

If you have three female protagonists, just write three. After you finish one, forget about one and harass the next one. What's the point?

What are you talking about in the last few chapters? ? ? Starting from Fugaku's dream?

The subject matter is good, but the author has second-guessed it. Well😓, the main character used chakra to spin the pen in school at the beginning. Wow, I was attracted. The following is about Uzumaki Kushina. The second set-up is not very good. I look forward to other novels with the same theme.

For a purely entertaining novel, the starting point is too restrictive for you. Otherwise, it would be quite interesting to write a pure harem novel, relying on the ambiguous colors and your slutty words + non-stop jokes. It's a pity that the main harem does not perform well, and it is useless no matter how strong the support is. The dark plot can only be said to be watchable, but it is not interesting and is bound to offend a group of people. Only people like me who have the mentality of having fun can watch it. But apart from the harem, there is nothing that attracts me. Emmm, neither. The follow-up of Parallel Time and Space is still a bit curious and full of bad taste. 😎

What a lot of nonsense, author🥺! A set of small words

It's okay from the beginning, the content about the Sharingan is embarrassing, so there's no need to second-guess it!

For the first 1/3 of the first chapter, I felt like I was watching Retarded

It's not about the main character, bro. I've seen more than a dozen photos and haven't seen it yet.

General hay. The harem + the little happy people make Minato live in the shadow of the male protagonist. The disadvantage is that it is a bit of an outline, which is just a running account of the plot. But the advantage is that it doesn't drag. There is nothing else to comment on.

It's average, about three stars. This platform is a little better. There are fewer people trolling. If you put it on other platforms, it would kill everyone.

I haven't seen it in a long time. The writing is so poor, but the author has so many dirty words... I love it and hate it. It's fun, but the writing is too bad. Big brother will punish you to read more books and write more compositions every day.

Ni Ma, what have you been doing recently?

Just like the title, the author is really excited about writing. I don't know how to write about Fugaku in recent chapters, and it seems to be of no use at the moment, and there is no cause or effect. I think I can delete it.

Please collect and read. The author would like to thank everyone here. These are very important for the new book. The original cover image is provided.

The plot arrangement at the beginning was okay and coherent, but it started to become outrageous after returning from practice. Personally, I felt that there was nothing written to force the plot together. The parallel time and space later became more fragmented, and I had no desire to watch it. Goodbye

The God of Otsutsuki still has cells, and it seems to be integrated with the universe. It's difficult to stretch. Isn't this Hongjun's version of Hedao?

Update soon to add Kurotsuchi or Tsunade to the harem monthly pass x2

Does the heroine have Terumi Mei?

The previous story is so good, why do you want to write a time-traveling plot?

You are not an original work either. There is no suspense in your outline style What is the highlight?

I'm thinking that since I'm dealing with Otsutsuki, I might as well use Dragon Vein to go back in time. Kaguya should take it away and deal with the other Otsutsuki. After all, they are all the same enemy.

The writing is good, it would be a pity not to write it

It is indeed necessary to keep the plot simple, otherwise it will be too watery, but yours is too simple, it is just a running story.

Borrow the precious place to recommend the book "Douluo: Martial Soul Essence, I am the Master" The original Martial Soul is full of soul power, not brainless, reasonable and refreshing, exploring the Martial Soul Soul Ring is half original, half research

The plot is like a running account 😅

There can't be only three female protagonists... That's still too many...😅

Updates are too slow😒

Try harder, it won't feel any better.

Too little, at least 2 updates a day