Lord of Mysteries: Path of Fallacy

If fan fiction doesn't focus on the original characters quickly, it's basically a death sentence if it's always borderline ob. No matter how good the so-called original approach you design is, no one will look at it. Is this common sense?

The one with the paradox is in front of me. All I can say is that you should work harder.

I just want to show more about the new creation path. The plot is a bit draggy. That research institute really disgusts me. It's really unnecessary. What is that thing and what does it show its existence?

The 400,000 words have no connection with the original characters. Even if it is viewed as an original fantasy, the plot is too procrastinating and has no explosive points. The whole text is just plain water. It is difficult for ordinary readers to appreciate the first few chapters.

Both genres will have readers arguing

Come on!

I'm the third one to finish it, and so far I feel that the plot is a bit stiff (but that's normal for a new author). I'm not a bookworm, but the pile of words makes my eyes uncomfortable. 😏

Looking at the current situation, I think the plot development is a bit slow and lengthy, and there are too many detailed descriptions of the environment and characters. Maybe it would be better to reduce some unnecessary descriptions and add more plot development. From my personal point of view, too many rhetorical techniques may appear wordy in the novel. At present, the protagonist's character and logical thinking seem a bit difficult to understand. I personally think that some behaviors are inappropriate. The above are just some of my personal opinions, which may be of great help to the author's creation.

Moji, I'm exhausted from being chased and beaten all the time. Guess why I'm watching a fanfic?

Please support this book about original approaches. Others are just the approaches in the original books. I'm tired of reading them.

The plot advances too slowly, and everything is written out one by one. It's really tiring to watch and makes no sense at all. The protagonist failed in promotion sequence 6 at the beginning, and only introduced the golden finger, but even if he failed, what about the potion materials? My guess is that it was absorbed, but as long as it is absorbed it can be used as long as it doesn't die, but you can't use it, and then it is there but not discharged, and it just disappears without any explanation.

It is recommended to write more content related to the digestive potion, and advance the story during digestion. Also, don't engage in any conspiracy theories. That Adam and the researcher suspected of falling into the star are really disgusting. Most authors will never be able to write about that feeling. It will only ruin the whole book and fail to fill in the holes. Can you clarify the main plot? Seeing now, I really don't know that the protagonist wants claws? Taking advantage of Kemiao's line to prepare for the doomsday? Save the tragedy in the original work? Do you want to be strong yourself? Or can you indulge appropriately when you have a high status? There has to be one. The introduction to Goldfinger is unclear. I haven't seen the magic potion show at all. Don't think that being targeted and involved in the whirlpool from the beginning will be very attractive. It is mysterious, and the pace is not that tense. Where does it come from the same sense of immediacy as a spy movie? Do you want to set up your own path? The first three do not need to be digested by play? Where did the potion come from? Are you really planning on cheating until you don't abide by the Basic Law of Secrets? When a rookie comes in, look at how many people he has provoked. Dark Night, Heart of the Machine, The Punisher, Aurora Society, Adam, and others. I can't remember clearly. What's the background? Your resurrection is even more hilarious. Did you accurately imitate the death of Tingen in the original work? It would be strange for someone else to occupy the spirit body. In short, please at least tell me the stage goal, and don't let me watch The Riddler. Even if the mysterious original work has many clues, there is a clear development of events and a rhythm of priorities at the beginning. It is not a spy war all the time.