
Douluo: Dropped Out of School and Was Favored by the Main Body Sect to Become the Young Master
斗罗:退学,被本体宗宠成少主
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- 195k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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Author, if the protagonist joins the Noumenon Sect, don't get the second martial soul. Let the protagonist focus on the dual cultivation of life and life.
Chapter 14: Poisonous Hair Taken for granted, not to mention that even a young student, Mu En, would not hand over the Dragon Pill even if Long Aotian was beaten to death. What's more, the poisonous hair here is here to rob people. Xuanzi slapped Huo to death The more critical problem is the author's writing style. There is a complete lack of description, and the plot is not coherently implemented from the author's mind to the pen.
Even if Huo Yuhao swallowed Douluo, he still couldn't defeat Tang San.
The timelines don't match up. You can't advance the appearance time of Beibei Tangya and Wang Dong by two years. His mother's soul has not been taken away. Yi Lao can also be said to be two years early and has not dissipated in good condition. What about other people's timelines? They are no different from the original work.
After thinking about it for a while, the twin martial souls are essentially for better cultivation. After level 90, if the soul bone is full, there will be more possibilities to make it reach level 95 quickly. As for the future, I remember that I need to understand something. Well, if I still cultivate the ultimate martial soul, it will indeed slow down the cultivation speed in disguise. I think the matter still needs to be discussed. Yes, these things must be discussed in advance, but it does not necessarily have to be absorbed now. After the most difficult dozens of episodes of moving the Ultimate Martial Spirit, the most difficult period from level 30 to level 70, level 30 or 40, it will be much better after getting over it. You can absorb the second one at this time, but there are some points that are not easy to arrange, such as too many variables, and what to do in the snow? You have finished talking to the Ice Emperor. Snow may not do this. No matter how it is done, if it is still developed according to the original work, a lot of energy is wasted, but no energy is wasted. Unless the life or destruction of the God Realm suddenly wants to be inherited, otherwise whoever gives the protagonist a platform will still easily become the same as the original work. After all, those two guys are still down there. They are the priests, and then whether it is a conspiracy or not, In theory, Tang Hao and the others should be down there at this time. This is the biggest danger at present. If Yi Lao is matured in advance, he will be about a first-level god. If he can develop it, he will be able to exert all his abilities. He should have a chance to become a god king. However, his position is a bit limited and he can rely on other methods to become a god. But he may not be in the God Realm. Isn't there a demiplane of the undead?
What are you writing here? How dare the prince of the Tianhun Empire offend the Noumenon Sect?
In the first chapter, Dai Hao was pulled out but couldn't be beaten again.
You know you can't do something but you do it, Haji, you guy! Come on
I'm in tears, is it Xiao Zhan?
If you want to get a second martial soul, get a mirror beast.
It is recommended to start reading from Chapter 2, the first chapter is too poisonous
I would like to ask whether Yuhao was born two years earlier or Yuhao was born a few years later.
Author, don't give the protagonist a second martial spirit
{"NickName":"Dianmao408","UserId":325180231} Author, why don't you give Long Aotian a little trick? After all, the protagonists have taken the noumenon sect route. In the original work, Long Aotian can have seven rings for 100,000 years. His original soul ring configuration is One yellow, two purple and four black, four rings are ten thousand years, seven rings are 100,000 years, which is okay, but the original work did not deal with it. The 100,000-year-old soul beast thieves are rampant in the ocean of Dou, Dou, and Three. By then, if the protagonist wins and conquers everything, he will basically not be short of 100,000-year and ferocious beast soul rings 🤓
So is it Shan Weina?😃
The setting is excellent, and the plot direction is also good. However, there is a sense of fragmentation. First of all, the appearance of characters and events all pop up directly. The pace can be slowed down. If it is too fast, it feels like it is rushing forward. Then there is the most important character creation. This main task does not have much role in the original book, so if the author wants to make this book outstanding, he must work hard on characterization, which can be interspersed with daily life, or directly add extra chapters to supplement the characters (for example, insert an extra chapter to describe the process of Wei Na falling in love with Huo Gua, after all, the process of this character falling in love with Huo Gua is too monotonous now)