Douluo: the Peerless Tang Sect's Eyes of Fate

Little Huo Niang

Yuhao is reborn, Xiao Hongchen has past life memories, and so does Xingzi? I was stunned for a moment after seeing these two scenarios, as well as the Titan family. I remember correctly that they only existed in Dou San thousands of years ago.

The author has ideas but goes against the grain. As a fanfic, everyone wants to have fun. The chapter table of contents is always divided into top, middle and bottom, which shows that the writing is not strong enough and cumbersome. It seems fine for novices, but in fanfic, everyone wants to fast-paced. Your top, middle, bottom, 1, 2, 3, 4 are uncomfortable to read. I just want to skip reading. Normally, one content is condensed into one table of contents. Forcibly writing is very complex. In addition, there are a lot of explanations and nonsense. It is not fun in the early stage, and it is also forced to reduce levels. Reducing level 10 to 11 years old is still forced to write about the lack of writing skills. It is better to just write about traveling to 12 years old and forcefully repressing it to level 20. Reducing the level twice will only dissuade everyone, including me. This is a fanfic, not a prank. Thank you.

Come on, author

The skills of the million-year-old soul bone are so rubbish.

Wang Dong'er's appearance is expected, my favorite character in the original book. How will the author plan to arrange it? After all, Huo Yuhao did not go to Shrek to meet Wang Dong. Should he also arrange for Wang Dong to get his memory? The author can speed up the plot. I know you are describing and introducing the new setting now, but I think it can also promote the main plot. The setting can be Don't add it while writing, but it is indeed very brain-burning to write. After all, the subsequent plot depends on the author's imagination and needs to be combined with the original plot. It is easy to collapse, but if it is well written, it is a very good book. The author can actually read the original work of Dou 2 and write while reading. This can be used to determine the timeline, which is less likely to collapse. It will be much easier to write, and you don't have to particularly resist Shrek. After all, the original work is good in Shrek. The main reason is that Tang San is annoying. Later, you can also write about Huo Yuhao returning to Shrek to study. After all, the original Shrek has more plots. The description of the Sun and Moon Empire rarely gives the author a lot of room for changes, but it also tests the author at the same time. After all, adding too many settings to Sun and Moon will lead to conflicts in the later stage. Try not to set too many new characters, and give new characters nice names. Don't name them with memes, otherwise the evaluation of the whole book will be lowered. (These are some of my little ideas. Come on, author, stick with it) 😁😁

There is an error in the content of Chapter 20 and it has been changed. Please forgive me.

After all, the protagonist is the rebirth of the God King, why is it written like a waste?

It's disgusting. It's Hawaii and other worlds of immortality. It's very uncomfortable to watch. When you write about Douluo, you just write about Douluo. Did Huo Yuhao travel to other worlds?

Can Huo Yuhao be given a dragon-like martial spirit in the future?

I have been traveling a lot recently, so I will try my best to ensure the quality. I will improve the details when I have enough time. I beg the readers to forgive me.

As the title says, a book club group has been opened. Readers can come and comment~ Group ID: 261064515

Will you wash away the world like other fans?

When I checked today, I found that there was a problem in the middle of the number of chapters, and I repeated two chapters. So start changing it every day in the future to avoid multiple changes in a short period of time. Start calibrating chapter names according to the normal number of chapters today

To be honest, aside from the logic of some minor issues, there is no big problem, but it just gives people the feeling that the protagonist is calculating carefully, but he doesn't understand the calculations.

Can there be only one female protagonist?

Brother Huo's feelings for the Ice and Snow Emperor, he can't talk like this. It looks very embarrassing. Huo is a very kind and innocent person, very humble and respectful. If he is really reincarnated, he will also express his true feelings to the Ice Emperor and Snow Emperor.

And as a God-King-level spiritual powerhouse, Ilaix can at most be as powerful as Huo in terms of magic, but he cannot be as powerful as Huo in terms of soul and mental control. Huo Neng, who has returned as the God-King, can crush Yi Lux.

As a son of the plane, he can find his own way without being a dragon.