Douluo: Correcting the Name of the Original Martial Spirit Starting from the Spirit Hall

Let me make it clear that the author is a newcomer, and his original intention in writing the book was to generate electricity for love. If someone thinks it can be read, just follow it up and read it. The author is not a full-time author, this is purely for fun. If you have suggestions, you can leave a message. If you find it addictive, you can read a few chapters after the beginning and try to see if you have any comments. If you can't read the first few chapters because it is addictive, then I'm really sorry. The author also hopes that the bros who follow me can vote a few monthly votes and just give rewards. I guess those who watch Douluo fandom are not very old, so it is not easy to save some money to buy some food by yourself. emmm, the author is a novice after all, so he should be merciful, thank you all.

At the beginning, the protagonist becomes a disciple of Yu Xiaogang. Don't worry about whether he is a loser or not. Your apprenticeship to Yu Xiaogang is just for knowledge, identity, and early start-up capital. Then Yu Xiaogang refused, and then the angry protagonist started beeping incompetently. Not to mention that the protagonist is a person who does not even have a soul ring. He dares to laugh at a level 29 great soul master, and it is the most painful point of poking Yu Xiaogang's lungs. Even if Yu Xiaogang was kicked out by the Thunder and Lightning Tyrant Dragon Sect, it would not take much effort to kill you, a member of the "Three Nos". Do you think you are playing house? Yu Xiaogang is just a good person. The protagonist wants to become a disciple. Doesn't it depend on him whether he accepts the offer or not? He is unable to get angry when he is rejected... And he speaks rudely to those who are stronger than him. I only saw that my heart is as high as the sky, my life is as thin as paper, and I am incompetent and furious.

1. The author's main body martial soul plays with poison. He said that the main body martial soul without adding poison will see if the poison will kill him. Speaking of poison, the next few chapters are not about arranging ice and fire body refining, the poison will change. The first chapter is mainly to have a way to absorb toxins and poison resistance, so as to prevent Tang San's poison in the future when he grows up. If you don't read it and just complain about it, I suggest you just stop reading it and say I put poison. I will arrange it for you later and you don't read it. Just say no at the beginning. 2. This is not an invincible novel, it has growth, so if you want to read a cool and semi-invincible novel, go ahead. 3. Talking about licking Yu Xiaogang, please read a few chapters before talking, and what about coming up to lick Tang San. The protagonist of this book has no system or golden fingers. If he doesn't stand by Tang San at the beginning, he should at least not make enemies. Later, when he is ridiculed by the master, this waste, everyone will prove himself, right? If you don't steam the steamed buns, you'll lose your breath. Those who said that the protagonist became enemies because he was rejected for kneeling and licking, think about it. Do you want to prove it if you are looked down upon by others? Did you say you were going to kill someone? In the previous ten chapters, after defeating Tang San, he planned to clear up both sides. After all, there is no need to fight with someone to death over trivial matters. However, the enmity later on was due to Tang Hao killing his mentor, so that was different.

As soon as I saw Zhu Zhuqing as the heroine, I didn't want to watch it anymore

He becomes angry when he fails to become a disciple. Is the protagonist a villain? Even if you are unhappy, won't you tolerate it? Since you don't play poison in the later stage, why do you waste your potential by playing poison in the first two soul rings?

Wow, after defeating Tang San, the teacher was beaten to death by Tang Hao. The reason was that he had forgotten Tang Hao. Why didn't you forget yourself😅

The details are not in place. Three days after the fight, the result should have been written last night. It was originally written in the Wuhun Temple of Soto City that he went to Soto City to find Tang San. Didn't Sunset Forest say that Dugu Bo went there regularly? The ice and fire eyes should have been taken over by him, and the outer layer of poisonous mist has not been reflected. The author can read it and make changes after finishing it.

You are here to make money. This is the first point. You are here to make our money. This is the second point. It's understandable that you want to use your own ideas to filter readers. But look what you said? What do you mean you only read the first chapter, but you can't do anything if you don't read the rest? You didn't attract people at the beginning, so why do you think there will be paying readers to pay for it later?

The way the opening chapter is written is very discouraging. In order to show off, I first put my face in front of Yu Xiaogang and let Yu Xiaogang hit me, and then I pretended to be tough (I wanted to hug my thighs to get closer to Tang San, but I was rejected when I went to become a disciple, and then I quarreled with each other on the spot). This makes people feel very bad, at least I felt very uncomfortable after seeing it. I will read it later.

1. The protagonist is not a genius, he is not invincible, he is not invincible, and he is not very mature. 2. The protagonist wants to stand on Tang San at the beginning, but it is not a mindless lick, but readers may think it is a bit poisonous, so please proceed with caution. 3. This book is not brainless, and is as logical as possible. The protagonist is not a perfect, emotionally stable machine, so please proceed with caution.

The slightly annoying point at the moment is that he was able to leave when Yu Xiaogang asked him to leave the school. Yu Xiaogang was not a teacher there. The second point is that Tang Hao was not taken into consideration during the discussion, but the second point is not a big problem. After all, no one's thoughts can cover everything, and the opportunity was also used to establish the hatred between Tang Hao and his son, which is not bad. It's not like most other novels, it's just for the sake of defeating Tang San, which is good.

Let me give it a try first, and I also hope that there will be more words, the more the better, and more female protagonists. In fact, Zhu Zhuqing, Ning Rongrong and even Xiao Wu can snatch them away and make Tang San miserable! And now it's no problem for the Douluo protagonist to open up a little bit. The main martial soul protagonist next door can fight Extreme Douluo with five soul rings, and even the Heavenly Dream Ice Silkworm Bear Lord was deceived into sacrificing it to him!

Bros, don't keep books, they will be kept to death. The collection is increasing, and the books keep falling after reading 😭. If this continues, the books will die, 😭

Many people say that adding poison to the original martial soul is the point of poisoning. In future generations, it is not because the original martial soul is playing poison, and it is said in the previous chapters that playing poison only has two soul skills. Do all books have to have the same formula? With the body's martial soul + attack, it makes you invincible? As for what he said about licking Yu Xiaogang, he didn't lick it. Later, a person who had abandoned martial arts said that you were a useless martial soul. Can you bear it? Besides, where are you licking? Why else would you hug Tang San's thigh when you came up? If you traveled through time, without a system or a golden finger, would you choose to fuck Tang San forcefully from the beginning? Looking my eyes, tell me , why? Babay, why? The reason why I have to stand on the opposite side with Tang San later is because the protagonist's teacher was killed by Tang Hao, so the positions have to be opposite, just like Tang San's confrontation in the Spirit Hall, isn't it a matter of stance. This book is a work by a newcomer. The plot writing may be too naive and has many problems, but it is not the beginning that is the poisonous point, because the author mainly wants to write logic. Many of the poisonous points in the opening chapter are that you will not read the following chapters and feel that it is not to your liking. If you like to read invincible and purely refreshing articles, you should not read it. Don't talk about the author's work, it's a newcomer's work, you know whether it's good or not 🙄

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The next book should be about Dou Er. There are many people reading Dou Er.

In fact, the author doesn't have to worry too much about the comments. He can write according to his own ideas. It is logical, the plot is reasonable, and it should be enjoyable, so fewer people will read it. Moreover, isn't the purpose of fan fiction to make up for the regrets of the original work and change the unreasonable aspects of the original work?

Come on, author! I gave you all my monthly tickets.

This book is the author's first book. The author is very grateful to the editor for giving him the opportunity to write a book. Due to lack of experience in the first few chapters of this book, the character creation was problematic and toxic, and the plot was not very good. However, under your guidance, many changes were made to the subsequent plot. Thanks to many book friends who have continued to read and provided guiding opinions. The author is very grateful to everyone. Thank you. I hope you can give more revised opinions in the future, that is, what are the improvement methods or specific deficiencies, which are the poisonous points, etc. If you readers have the energy, please give me some guidance. I beg you. Then the author will update regularly starting from September 10th. I hope everyone will support and read more. The more you will read comfortably, the more opinions you will give later. Hehe, thank you everyone. The first 30 chapters may be bad, but subsequent chapters will continue to improve. Starting from chapter 50, it is a slap in the face and feels better. If you really can't stand it, you can skip it. Thank you for your guidance and criticism! Lots of criticism! Lots of criticism! Thank you for your opinions.

It looks good, the quality is very high, it's as high as three or four floors, it's pretty good

Shouldn't the author write it as if he was poisonous enough to survive?

Very nice(✪▽✪) Keep up the good work(•̀ᴗ•́)و̑̑

Looking at your profile, it seems like an old story. I suggest you start a new novel.

Hurry up and update it, it's not enough 😡

The first part looked okay and a bit fun, but with the addition of the Holy Lord, I couldn't stand it anymore. Especially later, creating soul skills based on constellations was even more boring. I originally thought that the first part seemed to be developing in the direction of Dou Ji, the main body sect leader, but the later parts became more and more chaotic, and it was not as good as a simple Douluo setting.