Zero Boundary Echo

The subject matter is very good and the writing is very delicate But you can try not to throw unfamiliar concepts and new characters to the readers all the time. You can refer to the narrative technique at the beginning of "The Lord of Mysteries" by the squid who loves diving, which will make people read more calmly. I can feel that you have a huge narrative in your heart, but don't be too anxious, write slowly, I believe there will be progress🌹