Douluo's Road to Rebirth: Xing Dou Meets Qiu'er for the First Time and Stays with Him for the Rest of His Life

It may not be too long, but I have been reading the book Peerless Tang Sect since I was in elementary school. It was okay at first, but the more I read it, the more uncomfortable it became. One of my two major regrets is that due to publicity issues, the film production of Dragon Nest cannot recover the cost, and the third part is still far away. The other one is the emotional line of Peerless Tang Sect. I can't stand it anymore. I want to write a book by myself.

The matching version of Huo Yuhao's Perfect Life It feels too sweet, so I'd better neutralize it while watching the third young master of the Tang family Strengthen sentence breaks Three-star recommendation

Support! ! I also like Wang Qiu'er, but there are too few heroines in fan works, Qiu'er, or the proportion of the length is too low and she doesn't have much sense of presence. I hope this can give Qiuer a good heroine treatment and ending

Come on! ! The author doesn't want to be unfinished, he can make corrections🔥, he needs to add plot points and tidy things up, and the title can't be copied from others. Support! !

I really hope that some experts can give me some advice. I found that I wrote this fanfic to make up for my regrets, but there are some problems. , Mainly because my writing skills may be average the first time, mainly writing the emotional line, and then I found that the main plot was very slow to advance. The three original works have 15 chapters, and I wrote more than 30 chapters. Later, I may speed up the promotion of the main plot. First, I will reveal my conception of the main plot. The ending is that the second generation of Shrek's seven monsters will all become gods. , And then because of Wang Qiu'er, soul beasts can also become gods (I haven't figured out the setting of the dragon god of Third Young Master yet). It wasn't until the second All-Douluo Advanced Soul Master Competition that major changes began, because this is the part that collapsed in the original work Let's talk about the three directions of the main plot. The conflict between soul-exiting beasts and humans, and then the souls will be improved in the future, and artificial souls may be created in the later stage, plus the improvement of the soul uploading tower system The second direction is the unification of the Douluo Continent by the Sun and Moon Empire, plus the resurgence of the Tang Sect. I read another novel and it seems that the Tang Sect was changed to the Shu Sect, but after searching, it seems that the Tang Sect originated from the Four In this place in Sichuan, since I respect the original work more, I decided to write about the Tang Sect. Zhongxing's idea is to combine soul tools and hidden weapons, so that Tang Sect's unique skills can be learned by ordinary people (by the way, why does soul power cultivation mainly focus on two methods: physical fitness and meditation? It seems that the third method is Tang San's Xuantian Technique). And what about the Sun and Moon Empire? This is to unify the oranges. Maybe I will intersperse Qiu'er and Huo Yuhao to get a deeper understanding. . . I don't know what the response will be in the comment section, but he will be in the Star Dou Forest after he returns from being an exchange student at Sun and Moon. . . . The third direction is the complete destruction of the Holy Spirit Religion. Speaking of which, we have to pay tribute to the Supreme Elder of our Holy Spirit Religion. He could not catch a five-ringed one and led the team twice to almost destroy them all. Then why did Huo Yuhao give him the Spirit Transferring Pagoda? No wonder he was destroyed. In the later stage, he will first use the identity of a holy son to make the Holy Spirit Religion gradually famous in the Sun and Moon Empire. The reputation collapsed, and finally everyone annihilated the Holy Spirit Cult. During this period, there was a setting in the original work that Huo Yuhao joined the army. This should be dealt with as appropriate. After all, I will consider Dai Luoli. The way to punish Duke White Tiger is to demote the eldest lady, Dai Hao and his other two sons to civilians. After all, Huo Yuhao's mother is alive and well in my fanfic. . . This feels almost done Can anyone give me some advice? Please! ! ! !

Seeing Qiu'er's ending really ended my interest in reading Dou 2. I really felt that Qiu'er's story shouldn't have ended like this. Come on, I hope you can continue writing and give them a better ending.

Come on, come on, come on, update, the author is great