Cultivation: My Super Portable Dimension

In this introduction, the protagonist's brother is unlucky and gets dumped, and his brother also dies before his eyes, and then he has to pay for it💰! 😂

The author has a question, is it necessary to practice this martial art? Can't the setting of practicing martial arts first in cultivating immortals be removed? It's all cheated! And under the premise of cultivating immortal literature, the setting of early martial arts training is really...

People who don't understand grains write about farming. They don't know how to propagate sweet potatoes or the oil yield of soybeans. Don't write about the mortal period. Directly write about cultivating immortals. They don't know how to exploit strengths and avoid weaknesses. You still have to write.

Some words that have been said are repeated again and again. I don't know if the author forgot to write them before, or if he did it deliberately to reduce the number of words. For example, I introduced the time acceleration function of the spiritual grass twice. Also, the martial arts hall's trick to entertain the protagonist is used again later, and it is introduced again when it is hinted that the protagonist Bai Zhuman will sneak attack on the protagonist. There are also some other things that are repeated again and again. I forgot about them after reading them in one go. It just feels a little watery and affects the senses. It is recommended that the author improve

Stallion article, look at a hammer

This is another book about practicing martial arts for dozens of chapters before cultivating immortality 😒. Can't you cultivate immortality well?

I've reached chapter 80 and will share my personal opinions. The author himself wants to write about mortals cultivating immortals. There is no problem with this. After all, mortals cultivating immortals has been very popular recently. It has gained some popularity and can accurately screen readers. However, the author's title does feel a bit like an ancient novel. However, I quite like this kind of novel in a portable space. It is probably due to the regret of not having a secret base when I was a child, so I really like this golden finger. The plot of the story is narrated with a warm feeling, and the development is basically reasonable. Of course, there are also appropriate ups and downs. For example, Master Wan suddenly feels uncomfortable, but there is also foreshadowing of Master Wan's teaching method of fishing for three days and drying the net for two days, which is a great advantage. But I see your posture, even three million words may not make you an immortal 🤫 This is a test of your skills, so you need to pay attention! Although the conflict plot in the recent chapters is a bit stiff, it is only eighty chapters after all, so it is normal without any foreshadowing. Let me talk about another point that I am confused about. There are descendants in Chapter 80. Do I need to cultivate the descendants? Cultivating it will inevitably weaken the protagonist's sense of existence, but it's okay for boys to be free-range and for girls to embody daily life😁 Let me talk about Goldfinger's opinions. The author's Goldfinger set up a spherical space, and it is understandable that a thin layer of soil is placed on the bottom in front of it. However, if you are thin, you should not remove half a meter of soil from a fifty-meter-diameter space. At least you should spread it two or three meters 🤫

Now for readers' request: Pig's feet can be good or bad but not stupid. This person has definitely violated this taboo

This type is too long-winded, the early development is too slow, and it is all trivial plots. At least the golden finger can strengthen it and quickly transition to the mortal plot. This golden finger has really not had the slightest effect in promoting the protagonist to become stronger quickly. After all, it is a resource space type. The result is that the protagonist is fifty chapters old and is still a mortal. He has not touched the immortal at all.

Chapter 130 has not yet begun to cultivate immortality, and I only practice martial arts every now and then. The progress of upgrading is already slow, and there is such a nonsense plot. The whole family earns 50 a month, and a woman pounces on me and suddenly takes on more than 2,000 in debt. It doesn't matter, I gave up.