Cultivation: My Super Portable Dimension
修仙：我的超级随身空间
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 928k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- English
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449Chapters
3.4kRecommendations
11.6kFans
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This synopsis is ridiculous! The protagonist's brother is incredibly unlucky; he gets dumped, his brother dies right before his eyes, and then he has to pay compensation! 😂
Author, I have a question. Is martial arts training absolutely necessary? Is the premise of training martial arts before cultivating immortality so inescapable? It's like everyone's already cheating! And given that it's a cultivation novel, this early martial arts training setting is really...
If someone who can't even distinguish between grains writes about farming, doesn't know how sweet potatoes reproduce, or what the oil yield of soybeans is, then they shouldn't write about the mortal realm; they should just write about cultivating immortality. They don't even know how to play to their strengths and avoid their weaknesses. What are they going to write about?
Some phrases were repeated, and it's unclear whether the author forgot to mention them earlier or intentionally padded the word count. For example, the time-accelerating function of the spiritual herb was mentioned twice. The minor character who entertained the protagonist at the martial arts school was mentioned again later, and when hinting at Bai Zhuman's sneak attack on the protagonist, the…
What's the point of reading harem novels?
Another novel where you have to practice martial arts before you can cultivate immortality 😒, can't you just focus on cultivating immortality properly?
Having read up to chapter 80, here are my personal thoughts. The author intended to write a cultivation novel based on the common people's journey to immortality, which is fine, given the recent popularity of "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality." This allows the author to capitalize on the trend and target a wider audience.
The readers' current requirement is: the protagonist can be good or bad, but he can't be stupid. This character has clearly violated this taboo.
It's too dry, the beginning of the mortal flow storyline.
This type of story is too verbose. The early development is slow and too bland, full of trivial plot points. At least give the protagonist a boost with some kind of cheat ability to quickly transition to the mortal realm. This cheat ability, so far, hasn't done anything to help the protagonist grow stronger. It's supposed to be a resource-based system, but the protagonist is still a mortal at chapter 50, and hasn't even touched on cultivation at all.
The pacing was already slow, and then they added this ridiculous, nonsensical plot.
Chapter 130 and he still hasn't started cultivating immortality, and his martial arts practice is only sporadic. The leveling progress is already slow, and then this ridiculous plot twists add to the chaos. His family's monthly income is only 50, and suddenly a woman throws herself at him and he's burdened with over 2000 in debt? Whatever. I'm dropping this.