The Star Abyss Era

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and young writing style will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience develops, and the progress of the plot attracts more attention. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memory. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling mark.

The first part is about the assessment of earth civilization. The author's understanding and strategy of united global front are refreshing. The protagonist's feelings for his mother civilization are touching. The second part writes about the animistic universe civilization. The protagonist's talent shines here, and it's a pleasure to upgrade. The third part writes about the world of chaotic universe. The truth about the world is revealed, but it is still upgraded. It seems that the third part is not integrated closely enough with the previous two parts. In general, it is worth subscribing to the first two parts. The first two parts are well written. Worth watching. The third part personally feels that it is not innovative enough and needs to be polished.

The protagonist only has this little time, does anyone else have ten minutes?

The writing is smooth, the character motivations are reasonable, and the plot is not draggy. Praise!

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I think the comment section is ridiculous, saying that being reborn is the biggest problem, just like going back more than ten years ago, there is a cost of trial and error, okay, then you can buy a welfare lottery and try to see if this is a paradox 😐

So much has been explained before, so much has been laid, and so many loopholes that may exist later have been fixed, but in the end, everything has to be fixed by hooking up. 😒

I haven't started reading it yet, but I have questions about the title. How to pretend to be a genius? It may be easier for a genius to pretend to be stupid, but how can a fool pretend to be a genius? Just reveal your secrets casually, right? Moreover, people can't imagine what they can't recognize. People with substandard IQ really can't imagine what state a person with that IQ is in. It's obvious.

Let me briefly talk about a few points about my understanding of this book 1: The world view is generally based on the Devouring Starry Sky, which can be matched in all major realms. At present, it is mainly equivalent to the early stage of the Nirvana stage of the earth, that is, the disaster has just begun, and is equivalent to the early survival stage of doomsday novels. Two: This book can be said to be IQ online. Whether it's the protagonist's initial scheming and planning, or the subsequent official actions, it all makes people feel that their brains are respected. Although some people among book friends said that the first few pictures always felt like a battle of wits and courage against the air, but the problem is that in an unknown environment, these are all necessary, cautious and even wise. I personally admire these plots that seem to be a battle of wits and courage with the air. And one thing that makes people feel very comfortable is the official attitude. I personally hate the genius training program in Swallowing Starry Sky. I have to do everything myself, so I am given a start-up capital, and I have to go to various dangerous places to do everything myself. There is a kind of primitive capital. The beauty of accumulation (the genius who should be invested in does nothing, and must be allowed to work and make money on his own). Therefore, in comparison with this book, the official investment and arrangements for the protagonist in the early stage, giving military ranks where necessary, giving power where there is power, giving status to status, and giving resources to resources when necessary, makes people feel very comfortable.       ，，，，， In addition, when it comes to comparison, I strongly suggest that the author compress the big realm a little bit, because the upgrading and earth-changing flow in the original work of Swallowed Starry Sky is too obvious, and the difference between the early and late stages is too big, so I suggest the author condense the map a little bit, and not add too many big realms on top of the Eternal God. In the words of Swallowed Starry Sky, the master of the universe is almost over, and there is no need to add realms above the true god.

It's a bit difficult. After so many years, our understanding of cosmic civilization is still limited to swallowing the stars?

After reading more than ten chapters, I really can't hold it anymore. It's a pity. I probably would have been rich and free by now if I had written it more than ten years ago.

To put it bluntly, this author has never been an Eternal True God. He has never participated in the Pan-Spirit Genius Battle. He has never gone deep into the universe to investigate the cosmic human race and the spiritual race. Once he gets to the universe chapter, the quality has obviously dropped.

Oh my god, it's been a long time since I've seen such a genuine Matryoshka doll article.

The latest chapter is not going to be about the heroine. If it were me, I would withdraw my money first and stop the loss in time. I never bet, so I won't bet on how well you write the emotional drama. Except for the emotional drama and the interruption of the update, I can tolerate it even if it is a little weak. But these two are not good.

Rebirth and pretending to be a genius, this theme is indeed novel. The mysterious strongman and the origin of the trial are all laid out. The ancient purple jade should be the highlight of the whole story. The origin feels difficult to explain (the general idea is the flow of fate). The story is portrayed reasonably by relatives, friends, official media and passers-by, and there is no bloody point. You can look forward to the follow-up development. There are too few chapters at present.

This kind of subject matter is just right. Our country's system is suitable for dealing with this situation, and the Western system has long been outdated. By the way, can we just write about some small countries? Based on the magnitude of the disaster and the lack of international support, I think logically they should be gone. Is it possible to write a novel that also takes into account the international perspective?

Pull out the Earth chapter separately, fill it out with more content, break down the combat power, and it will definitely be better than Immortal Grass.

I don't know what makes the comment section so popular. As far as I'm concerned, I've only read the first three chapters. They're all about settings and no plot at all. The whole chapter is about the forces in the past life, the consequences of what was done in the past life, what should be done in the previous life, what shouldn't be done in the previous life, what rewards are given for doing, and what are the consequences of not doing... How do you understand this? It's not that the author is not allowed to write these, but the background, rewards, consequences, etc. Should all unfold slowly as the plot unfolds. Your three golden chapters have no plot at all, they are all about the background of the past life, various big forces and so on (◎_◎;) As far as I can see, there is no desire at all, and it is not attractive at all, just like the title of your book... I suggest you change the title of the book, and then if you can't change the first three chapters, just make it into a wedge. Directly put all the memories of the past life into the wedge, and open a single chapter to give you the background of the bad power, the realm, etc., Although I prefer the kind of background, realm, etc. That slowly unfolds with the plot. People who come are here to read the plot, not to watch you throw out a lot of settings first...

Personally, I think the title of the book is quite good. I was attracted to it by the promotion of civilization.

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun. I heard that calves born in sheep pens will not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? Qidian is strong because it has inherited the etiquette and skills of its ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can earn tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! But Pujie cannot get royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who rarely update, delay updates, or are late to update have no time to feel sad about themselves, so they are drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors feel sad and do not learn from it, and future authors feel sad about it! Reprinted in The Watcher of Dark Eyes

After reading the first few dozen chapters of your book, I feel like I am reading a book from more than ten years ago.

It's a pity that the author's popularity is low. This book definitely has thousands of orders, the logic is clear, and the plot is not laggy.

While writing cool articles, you can also keep your IQ online. In current novels, it is quite rare. The rest is to see whether the plot is suitable for personal consumption.

The overall feeling after seeing this is similar to Swallowing Starry Sky, two parts of Swallowing Starry Sky plus one

Have you been removed from the list for using AI😰

It's okay on the earth at first, but it's like a matryoshka doll of rules and regulations later on in the universe. It's a bit tiring to watch.

I finished reading it in one week. I originally thought it was a big book but now I feel it is short and weak. I look forward to booking thousands of tickets as soon as possible. Then I will be happy if I can live for a month. I will keep it up for a while. But don't worry, the author, I have turned on the automatic subscription. I will give you all the monthly tickets when the monthly tickets are doubled at the end of the month. As long as it can be updated stably Finally, I recommend it to all book friends. Although this book is a bit of a nesting doll in terms of the cultivation system, the plot is worthy of recognition. In the final analysis, the cultivation system also serves the plot. If I were to give a score, it would be over 80 out of 100. I personally feel that it is completely worth reading.

It looks good. I thought it would stretch my hips after the assessment, but I didn't expect it to look better and better. Come on, Mo! I want to see Ji Yi rush to the top of the sea of ​​​​stars^O^^O^

It's taken me so long to write this, but now... 😐

Review this book in one sentence: Swallowing Starry Sky Youth Edition