Tokyo Bubble Era: My Girlfriend Is the Original Singer

Any book friends who come in, please give me some suggestions. Even if the book fails, the author will rethink what he wrote at the beginning. Because I met this Yuanzu singer by chance, after reading similar books on the market, I came up with the idea of ​​writing a book. I wrote many manuscripts one after another, hoping to write a world where "Mingcai" has not been harmed...

First of all, thank you very much. I am lucky that it has been reviewed. I am ready to revise it and publish a new book! Secondly, I would like to thank the book friends who read the book first and made suggestions, as well as the friends who came in to read this book! ! Finally, I hope that all book friends can give me more advice in the future. As long as your suggestions are reasonable, the author will try his best to avoid lightning. The author is a complete newcomer. If there are any imperfections in this humble work, please forgive me. Thank you again for reading. Writing a book is about pursuing the love in life. The world in the book can be anything. If this book makes you unhappy, it should be because the author opened it in the wrong way...

Why are the words so pretentious?

I prefer the cute look when I was young

Onii-chan!

I am testing the waters and recommending it. I beg all book friends to read it! Japanese entertainment is a niche subject, and the author is a newcomer. Whether this book can be written as two million words depends on the strong support of all book friends! If nothing else, the writing is over two million words, which is really bad. The author will also guarantee a minimum of one million words to prepare for the next Ming Cai Wen. Finally, I once again urge all book friends to read more! ! ! The author is grateful! ! !

，，，，！ ! It's okay to give me a recommendation vote, so that the author Sang knows that someone will read it. Please, Baicai is here to kneel down~~

The settings that have been changed are: Summary of changes: To put it simply, the background of the male protagonist is downplayed, and the male protagonist's attitude towards "money", "profit" and life is changed to a clear pursuit, and Sato's character design is slightly changed. (In this way, the background will be reduced, and there will be more things to write. The male protagonist's early hands-on work will be more reasonable, and the male protagonist can also become the hands-off shopkeeper.) The specific summary is as follows: 1. The male protagonist's office is the initial entrepreneurial fund for the children of the family, and the male protagonist ranks second (without inheritance rights) 2. The male protagonist His father is the second son. Due to his character, he voluntarily gave up the management rights of the Mitsui family and only took profits and dividends... (Chapter 1 has been changed) 3. The male protagonist's character has changed, and he is no longer a music producer without pursuit (Chapter 1 has changed) 4. Sato Kenta's character has been changed to a "big butler" and the role of deputy president and assistant (convenient for the male protagonist to become a hands-off shopkeeper). 5. Some chapters have been slightly changed, but the initial writing style may be a bit pretentious and literary? This amount is too big to change, so it is better to reopen it. The following writing style will be as close as possible to "fresh and daily", "bright rhythm", "short and concise"... Etc. I believe that most of the people who can read this humble work are vegetable fans and some Japanese entertainment book lovers who are not good at reading. Final addition: These changes are not big. Please forgive me if there are any omissions or shortcomings. The author is a complete novice. The first book is more about pitfalls and trial and error. It is more fun to learn how to write and if you can barely finish the plot, it is considered a success. Perhaps with the suggestions and critical comments of book friends, a niche author will be added in a few years? When the critical comments came, the author Sang gave a loud shout and called all the book friends to protect him: "Come at me if you have anything" ...

Writing about my sister? You can refer to what the most popular sister characters in Japanese comics are now.

The situation in the Japanese entertainment industry is worse than that in China. The heroine's girlfriend, a singer, has grassland above her head.

Advantages: First of all, I must affirm the author's writing attitude. The author has always been very humble, asking for suggestions and critical reviews. If I were to write, I wouldn't have the patience to keep writing, and when I see some criticism, I can't help but refute it. Therefore, the author's writing attitude and attitude towards readers are very worthy of recognition. Disadvantages: (1) Choice between front and backstage. There are obviously three types of job roles for entertainment protagonists: Front stage (actor, singer) Half stage to behind the scenes (writer, director) Behind the scenes (music producer, film and record sponsor) A protagonist can do all three types of work, but there is no doubt that there is an order for doing these three types of work: from front stage to half front stage, half behind the scenes to completely behind the scenes. That is to say, we often say that if you are good at acting, you will direct. When a director has enough money, he will invest in it as a sponsor. It is rare to see the reverse situation in life, that is, from behind the scenes to semi-behind the scenes to the front of the stage. If it does, it means that this person's career is going backwards. In this novel, it is obvious that the protagonist has reached the third category of work, and he will definitely not do the first and second categories of work, but now the protagonist seems to have to do some first and second category jobs. (2) The choice between fame and fortune. Among the three types of jobs I mentioned earlier, from the perspective of reputation, from the 1st to the 3rd type, you will undoubtedly get less and less. Most of the profits gained by singers and actors are derived from their names. From a profit perspective, there are undoubtedly more and more products from Category 1 to Category 3. It is possible to do Category 2 jobs that are both famous and profitable, but there is still a problem (1). The protagonist has already reached Category 3 jobs, so why does he go back to Category 2 jobs? What is the reason for going back to Category 2 jobs? (3) The dilemma caused by too high a starting point. The protagonist's surname is Mitsui in Japan, and he is still the president at the beginning. This can almost be said to be the finale of other novels. How to find the upgrading and progress of the protagonist's career line? If the career line is not written, or the career line is very weak, then it is not a romance novel or love literature. Isn't it just the book "The Domineering President Falls in Love with Me" from the perspective of the overbearing president? (4) Cultural and entertainment articles or commercial articles. The protagonist has already reached the third category of work, and the subsequent development can only be to make the company bigger and stronger, expand business, and extend upstream and downstream industries. So is this an entertainment article or a commercial article? (5) The character of the protagonist is divorced from reality, and the character and his behavior are often in the opposite direction. The protagonist is not short of money and does not love money. Generally speaking, the protagonist's personality is not suitable for being a boss, because he does not expect the company to make money for him, and the "famousness" that being a boss can bring is far less than that of doing type 1 or type 2 jobs. If the protagonist is pursuing an ideal, he should not be a boss, but directly engage in type 1 or type 2 jobs, because the trivial matters of being a boss will make the protagonist impatient and delay the protagonist's pursuit of his ideal. Overall, this novel gave me a very awkward feeling. Whether it was the purpose of the protagonist's actions or the protagonist's character and behavior, it made me feel unrealistic and unreasonable. I am following this novel not because of how well written it is, but because there are not many books about Japanese entertainment. Having said all this, it's already over 1,000 words. I mean no harm. I sincerely hope that this book will be good, so I took the trouble to write these words. If my criticism has caused the author's displeasure, or caused the author to give up the idea of ​​writing a book, I apologize to the author. The author can just ignore this post. I hope the author will not give up. Whether you reimagine it and start a new book, or you continue to write this book, don't stop writing it.

Today's Japanese entertainment has a particularly big shortcoming, that is, its business line is too weak. Personally, I feel that male comics should focus on the career line, supplemented by the emotional line. However, after reading several Japanese entertainment articles, they all have a very big shortcoming. There are quite a few books that do not write much about the career line, and have a very weak sense of existence. They are just rushing to fall in love with the partner, either Sakai Izumi or Nakamori Akina. Can't you write more about your career line? Can't we change the heroine? Qidian Huayuwen is almost becoming Liu Yifei's natal family, and Riyuwen is the natal family of these two. It's okay to write well about these two people, but the daily entertainment about these two people can be said to be almost the same, especially Akina's story, which is to pair Akina with a male nanny. Anyway, I'm quite disgusted with this kind of romance novels that cover up male porn and write female porn. Isn't this "The Domineering President Falls in Love with Me" from the perspective of a domineering president? I hope the author won't write this kind of article. You must strengthen your career line, and the main content must not be about falling in love.

The protagonist is like the godfather of citypop, let's be the godfather of jpop. Music producers are no better than singers. Only when they achieve their best can they become truly famous.

It's 2026 and we still don't know where the author's new book is.

I don't know what the office president should do in daily life, but I instinctively feel that the president should not be a music teacher teaching artists to sing. If the firm is small in scale and is short of money during business preparation, I think it is still possible for the president of the firm to do this. But the protagonist's surname in this book is Mitsui, so isn't the surname Mitsui Bai? The narration always feels that the protagonist does not love money and is not short of money, but the behavior of the protagonist makes people feel that the protagonist is very short of money. One person has to wear many hats. I feel like it's very contradictory to write like this.

I don't know about others. If I am reborn and make a lot of money, I will sleep until the end. What kind of small life, what Xiaohan, what high caste, what European and American, what single female protagonist? Are you kidding me? If you find a girl, she is greedy for her body. If I find ten, a hundred, or a thousand women, she is also greedy for their body. She only laughs at fifty steps and a hundred steps.

I frowned and read a few chapters. There were too many repetitive descriptions in this article. I wrote about facial expressions over and over again. It really made people feel very watery and I had no desire to read anymore.

Well, let's talk about this month's journey. I first revised the manuscript and then published it. I learned a lot along the way and realized my own shortcomings. I would like to thank many book friends for their support and suggestions. I will start the book again with a new outline! I would like to say sorry here, especially to the book friends who give rewards and monthly tickets. The author will learn from experience and come up with a detailed outline before writing the book, for sure. Dear book friends, see you in the next book.