Simultaneous Transmigration: None of Them Are Human!

It also has a bit of an artsy vibe, with the setting not explained at the beginning. The first three chapters left me completely confused, and the protagonist's background wasn't revealed until the fourth chapter. While others have their golden three chapters, yours are probably just three chapters to filter out readers.

Only thirty-odd chapters, that's not much. I suggest rewriting it; don't get carried away with your pretentious writing style.

It's okay for an author to introduce a premise, but you need to make it clear. Don't create a mystery by rambling on and on. Take that thread, for example—you've actually mixed the premise into the main story. This kind of writing skill is something most people can't pull off.

There is great potential for improvement in written expression.

So abstract, no wonder it's a new work by a young person. Readers, you are the challengers. Come on, take on this work!

The writing is too stream-of-consciousness. As a web novel, it should introduce the characters and world-building as quickly as possible, clarify the protagonist's goals, and depict the conflicts.

You should write more directly; the first chapter gave me goosebumps.

It's weird that I can't understand the author's thought process. It feels a bit wordy. Why not be simple and straightforward?

The world-building in the author's earlier chapters didn't feel very clear and wasn't easy to grasp quickly.

My personal suggestion is to start reading from Chapter 4 directly, skipping the prologue and Chapters 1, 2, and 3.