Immortality: Start by Upgrading Ancestral Tombs

It's hard just to read the first chapter

Okay, I haven't found any logical problems. I hope the settings are consistent and there are no big problems with the logic (see the latest chapter, Chapter 62)

The pace is too slow, one step slower than the one next door, and it goes against a common problem in Internet literature: women are all good friends, and men are all enemies.

I was speechless. I was chased by that foundation builder. This plot was too deliberate. You were teleported randomly, and others could hit your head if they ran away.

It's best not to start the farming stream too urgently

The previous writing was good, although there were more bullshit than other farming management articles, but it was still good. When I wrote about the first woman in the city, I rescued her for no reason but there was still an exchange of interests. And then the mother and daughter were written in a disgusting way? He keeps looking for trouble. Is he your biological father? He keeps helping you. It's so cruel.

You are farming and developing, not seeking death. If you don't have the strength to fight, you will go to the golden elixir stage to grab things. If you grab something, you will go to the market. You will not die quickly enough, right? Can your protagonist have some basic logic?

This is the new author's first taste of writing, and all book friends are welcome to give their opinions~

The recent plot is simply speechless and embarrassing.

I don't want to subscribe to this kind of plot anymore.