Roll Out a Martial Saint

After being a waste for twenty years, you suddenly start to discipline yourself, and then you dream of a golden finger to torture yourself. Life is tiring enough, and you have to let the system abuse you. After being the protagonist of a waste for twenty years, you are a waste yourself. Who would take the role of a waste? Readers need a sense of empathy. You can be immoral, but you can't be useless. The system asked Lu Mingfei carefully about Lu Mingfei next door. Lu Mingfei had to commit suicide to provoke him. There is a difference in nature. Passivity and initiative. There is a difference. Passivity can only be said that the protagonist is a slave of the system. Activeness is a painful and happy competition with the system. If you don't understand the feeling of pleasure between the two, then your book can only be confused with Quanqin.

To be honest, the sense of immersion is very poor. I think the main reason is. The character design of the protagonist is too bad, too out of the ordinary. The protagonist is actually a gangster and idle. Have you ever seen a novel in which the protagonist is idle? My mind was too distracted, I felt ashamed for a while, then I practiced dancing, and then I vowed to quit drinking. Especially here, it was handled very poorly. Like the supporting character, Erwuzi, whose mind is unstable, that is, his mind is not strong. There is no protagonist, and the sense of immersion is extremely poor.       ，， Jiang Wang is calm, perseverant and intelligent. Look at someone who slays demons. Even though he was originally a gangster, after time travel, he has become so powerful that the protagonist is always in a high position. Just take a look at the protagonist of Da Feng's watchman, he is always in a high position. Xu Qi'an is smart and cunning in the business world, has a clear understanding of the world, is calm and reliable in serious matters, and has some cleverness that escapes humor. The first picture is well-written and looks like it has been polished. After the protagonist saw that unusual event, he thought about it and thought it was a smart character, but it turned out to be a big deal. But you definitely have your advantages in introducing the past, and the plot is actually pretty good. I'm a little curious, how many chapters did you introduce? You can't do two or three. I didn't see any plot in two or three chapters 😥 Finally, I wish you great success 😁

There is a golden finger, but the protagonist always wants to be a waste and has no progress at all.

Those who love scrolling will not be able to see this kind of passive scrolling, and those who do not like scrolling will not be able to see such dense scrolling. Let's have some balance, I'm the latter