Hogwarts: Lux Doesn't Want to Be the Witch That Destroys Nations

Carl's appearance is inexplicable, and a Riddler suddenly appears that makes the protagonist feel frustrated. . Although the plot is a bit strange, the explosive updates make up for it.

Advantages: The writing is smooth and the characters are very well created. Whether it is Lux, Tom, Deng, or Walrus, they are all well created, and even minor supporting characters like Malfoy are also good. Disadvantages: There are a lot of jokes, which slightly affects reading. The author also said it in the introduction, and it's okay if you get used to it.

You just killed a lot of Demacians, and now you're at the starting point to fold the murder book 🙂

The doppelgänger tried so hard but couldn't catch an idea like you did

Hogwarts is 🇬🇧, right? Otherwise, Lux should be the witch who destroys countries again. I think Dai Ying's great lack of virtue should be destroyed. 90% Of the territorial disputes in the world are currently caused by Dai Ying. If you kill Dai Ying, your body will probably glow with gold.

Have you ever been Lux? Some things are written randomly, and I take it for granted!

I saw several copies 😅

This is actually a very strange question. Since it is posted on a male channel, it must be based on the story, and the emotional scenes are for fun. So let's make it clearer. The protagonist is purely single in this book. Lux is a charming character, but there will be no further emotional line. Tom's feelings for the protagonist will be very complicated. Junior Val is a label, but Lux will not fall in love with anyone in the story, so there will be no next step. All emotional scenes with Tom are just for fun. Please see the subsequent development of the story for details. The interaction between the female character and Lux ​​is a girl's post that everyone likes to see. It is a welfare clip and a condiment, and it will not happen further. The above is the final explanation. Everyone is welcome to read the book harmoniously and don't get entangled in such small issues.

As we all know, the author is a species that gets dizzy after writing, but Xiaohongzhu is trying to persuade him. The outline of this book is divided into three parts. It is currently in the period from 1938 to 1945, and supports about 600,000 to 800,000 words. The span of the text is very long, so sometimes it is written that I don't know what the world is. In general, if you think there are problems with the plot logic, you can raise it in this building. I think it will be adopted and modified if it is reasonable.

Will Kill Me Light explode three clown boxes?

The protagonist is really a shameless character

I worked on the runes for a long time just to get them for others. I couldn't get the underwater one, so the Conqueror gave it to Grindelwald directly. The only one I got was the most useless one. Will I have to give Lao Deng a big rune later... Originally, cheating was to strengthen myself, but now it seems that everyone can control the protagonist, and cheating is given to others. Furthermore, the role of LeBlanc is purely a side effect. It feels like it was created by the author in order to promote the plot. Every time it is necessary to introduce a wave of protagonists, the protagonist will be powerless every time.

The dark side of my light

Tom's acquisition of Dark Harvest was too sudden, and he was given a plug-in out of nowhere. Even if you obtained the rune system, there was just a problem with the rune system and it was omitted. I got Dark Harvest out of nowhere. It was given too hastily and without cause and effect.

It's good that the author chose to do everything right at such a critical point in the launch of the book. It can at least help some people save subscriptions. . . What about the dark and heavy secrets that you promised to light? I know very well that the author wants to expand the space in the fan fiction, and it is a common practice to add original content, but there is a limit to this approach, and it cannot be overwhelming, otherwise it will greatly damage the impression. So far, the setting of runes can almost be said to be a complete failure. The length has indeed been increased, but in a way that destroys the original rhythm. The first few dozen chapters of this book were quite light-hearted and humorous, both in terms of writing and plot. The overall plot revolved around college life and character interactions. However, since the rune setting took over the mainstream, especially with the emergence of LeBlanc, the overall style took a turn for the worse, as if the author suddenly felt It seems that I can't write the book if I don't write some serious and exciting plots (but in fact, whether it is castle exploration, ancient magic, understanding the magical world, or more interactions with characters, or even Tom's "rise era" after graduation, there is a lot of content that can be written). So we saw a mediocre werewolf script, an incomprehensible trip to France and an extremely bad trip to France and the Soviet Union. Not to mention that the original relaxed atmosphere is gone. The interaction with various characters that was dominant at the beginning has become something that I suddenly think of mentioning after more than ten chapters. Just talking about the image of the protagonist in the last two holiday scripts, it is directly closer to the clown🤡. Especially in the Soviet script, what protagonist is eager for power? They are already classic Heartsteel, and they can draw all the hero skills. They have already opened up so much, but they still crave that little power? Moreover, after returning from the latest chapter, he continued to complain to Lao Deng, and the smell of tea was overflowing. What does it mean to find a savior after something happens, and then people hesitate and then accuse the savior of being addicted to the past? Author, you really can't see my light image being better, can you? ps: Heart of Steel can be triggered by long-range basic attacks. You don't have to use your fists. I see that the author has described the highlights of basic attacks at the beginning. Will you not use this setting later? You, the protagonist, have all the long-range skills, and don't even have any combat movement. He has to punch you inexplicably. Isn't it awkward for you, the author, when you wrote it? pps: After publishing Heart of Steel, the author described the levels of the characters in the article, and made Tom and others have the same level as the protagonist. However, there is one thing that is very unreasonable. Other characters can improve their levels through exercise and natural growth. What about the protagonist? The protagonist can only increase experience through specific ways. This creates a very weird bug. If the protagonist does not complete the task and learn a lot of new spells, then even if 7 years have passed, even if her spell casting ability can be compared with that of graduated Tom, the system will still say that the protagonist is still level 1 after graduation. There are two ways to solve this bug. First, you can add experience to the protagonist's practice and natural growth. If you are older, you can add one or two levels or something. Just mention it. Anyway, the author has not set how much experience is required for each level. Another solution is to indicate that other people's levels are challenge levels and are only linked to challenge difficulty. Otherwise, numerical settings and actual performance can easily cause problems, or problems have already occurred, such as a level 14 blood cow vampire with more than 6,000 health and more than 200 magic resistance. . . But the problem is that in the world of Harry Potter, these characters are all crispy wizards. You can set how fast they react, how cleverly they use armor to protect themselves, and how they can kill all spells. Even the so-called magic resistance of trolls and giants is basically only resistant to ordinary spells. They will die in one bite. It's absolutely not possible to do a lousy job where more than 6,000 HP and more than 200 magic resistance spells are basically ineffective. After all, if the damage is really calculated according to this panel, the protagonist's twenty Avatars can't kill this melon. This is too funny. In the final analysis, don't mess with numerical values ​​​​on hostile objects, directly arrange the realistic performance of spells according to the needs of the plot, and the look and feel will be much better.

It was hard to imagine a scene where a colossus as tall as Hogwarts, which could move by absorbing magic and was almost immune to magic, fell from the sky. Grindelwald was probably confused. If Li Huo could also be absorbed by the Forbidden Demon Stone, there would be no solution. Since the Forbidden Demon Stone could seal the runes of the world, Li Fire should not be a problem.

The idea is good, but it's just an idea I can't write invincible articles. I can help others to strengthen them, but what's the deal with sharing? It doesn't make sense in terms of principle or plot It's a pity that I thought there was new food and grass.

Relaxed and bright ID photo

Please all Demacians stand together, I just want to put a shield on all Demacians😎

I have nothing to do with Sacco. They are just two friends who have something in common. Please stop spreading rumors 😌

After crossing the Sorcerer's Stone timeline, it's obviously not as good-looking as before. Lux doesn't straighten out her life and only engages in conspiracy theories, and she's no longer distinctive.

This kind of anger is not popular now. Thank you, reader🙏

What happens if we suddenly jump to fifty years later? ? ? Did you take a cursory look and not go back? Digging a lot of holes and then suddenly changing dungeons? You can't write anymore, can you? ? It's too forced, I can't watch it

Starting directly from 50 years later, the previous plot is briefly reviewed and a few of the most shocking ones are overhauled. It is a cool story about an old thing returning to the world 🙂

Finished the book? Afterviewing: This book started well, but later on it became too dependent on the system and lacked some unique skills of its own. Jumping to fifty years later is a huge mistake, but it is not irreparable, but it is because the writing is not strong enough. By the end of the book, you can see that various characters have withdrawn and the story cannot be unfolded, so the main plot begins to be pushed directly to complete the book. There are many errors in details, which are very confusing to readers who are familiar with Harry Potter and require improvement. I hope the author's next book will be better written, check the information and arrange the outline well.

You said that you have the evil golden finger of League of Legends and you want to mix the characters, animals and gods of League of Legends into it. So what is the use of this golden finger? Just because you want to be superior and give the locals a little color?

2025.11.8

It's poisonous at the back, don't jump to the dungeon suddenly, especially when there are still unresolved matters ahead. It's already poisonous enough that the protagonist is frequently frustrated while collecting runes and can't even recognize himself.

It's amazing, it really drives high and goes low. I really don't know why it's time to travel fifty years later. Readers read it because they are attracted by the story "fifty years ago", not because of League of Legends 😫 Next time you write, you should write a more complete outline and a detailed outline, and don't always come up with impromptu ideas or inspirations. Don't even understand the core selling point until later, which makes you unable to write and search exhaustingly. And don't listen too much to book reviews. Don't listen to the opinions of one or two people. Only the opinions given by everyone are of some reference. In fact, if you write your own outline well, you won't be influenced by other people's opinions at all. What a pity. What you wrote earlier is quite good, and I have been supporting you, but after writing it, I really can't stand it. Don't be discouraged, you are good at it, learn lessons and keep working hard.

It's quite interesting at the beginning, but the pace of the story becomes very bland later on.